IshRa FF: Na Na Karte Pyaar Tumhi Se Kar Baithe ch1 pg1

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Hi guys yes its me Fiza with a new ishra ff do comment and enjoy


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"Raman putar where are you going? And what is this? Huh You get up late come home late"? learn to be Responsible . says Mr. Bhalla

"Papa actually baat hai ki I was " but he was cut off by his dad

"Chup Ek chup not word ab suno listen to me you are 26 yrs old start acting your age understood " says his Father Mr. Bhalla

"Papa I do act my age why itna subha you" again he was cut off

" Acha Beta you act your age ? You have been back from New York for past 6 months and still haven't joined the business with me yet . jab dehko partying and clubbing or video games and you are very responsible huh? This I will Not tolerate anymore the only way you will change is when you will get married . Iss liye Your Ma and I have chosen a girl for you have to meet her if you don't like her there are many others. Jitna party and masti and fun you want to do now do kyunki we our going to get you married soon understood says MR. Bhalla

"Ma what is this no Ma please papa ko talk to him " says Raman

"Na Raman Putra tere papa is right tum na badmash hogaye hain and shaadi is the only way that wull help you" says Toshi Bhalla

Later that evening

"Laugh ...Laugh all you want meri yahaan phatri hai and you are enjoying this Mihir Cousin hai ya Dushmann huh"? says Raman

"Arre Raman yaar chill " says Mihir

"What teri tho chill huh how can I yaar ek tho this bride search is on and that too she is South Indian can you believe it ma and papa have flipped "

"what South Indian"says Mihir

"haan papa ki old friends and business client ki beti and ma is afraid of a Punjabi bahu after hearing mrs. Kapoor's daughter in law tried to kill her in laws with rat poison and chaudri uncles daughter in law put them in jail on jhoot case of dowry and that singh aunty ki bahu had affair with her husband's boss ma thinks she wants a different bahu . says Raman

"wow Raman par why you so stressed enjoy it yaar it will be fun" says Mihir

"Teri tho shut up yaar you know I liked Sagun na ab kya" says Raman

"Raman yaar calm down sun ek idea hai go look at the girl and refuse and in mean time tell shagun who you feel then tell Simi Di she will help convince uncle and aunty for sure they happy and you too baat sun lo go meet her " says Mihir

"Not bad Mihir you are right dad khush and jab thak they find a different girl I can patafy shagun right " says Raman

Raman came home early that night

"Simi Di, Ma Fine when you want I will go meet the girl you want but if I don't like her you won't force me I'm willing to give a try" says Raman

"Oye hoyee oh Bhalla Ji oh Bhalla ji suno meri gal Raman maan liye kuri dehke ne" says Toshi ji

"Raman acha kiya beta ab kal we will go see her ok tho be ready at 1pm "

Next Day at One they go to a huge house

They all get setted and talking the ladies our talking among one another

"Mrs. Bhalla Appko yhaan aane thaleef nahi hua na says Mrs. Iyer"

"Na ji Na Thaleef tho aapko hua hai na itna short notice hum aaye " Says Mrs. Bhalla

"Aree is mein thaleef ki ky abaat hai you all our most welcome here " says mrs Iyer

"Appke Husband nahin aye" asks Vandita

"No ji actually woh na Dubai mein hai" says Simmi

"Oh ho you must be missing him a lot na" says Vandita

"haan ji I do par kaam hi aisa hai ab kya Karen waise yeh na saree is very pretty says Simmi

"thank you yeh na mere husband Bala ne gift ki says Vandita blushing

"Oye hoye how cute blushing and all" says Simmi

The men our talking

"Uncle our company ki quality is always to the best we make sure we get the best materials" says Bala

"Haan that is also well known if all goes well then ristha pakka hone ki baad we can merge our business as well says Bhala ji

A Tall pretty Girl with long black hair wearing This

Holding a Tray of Payasam in small bowls as she sat down

Tosh ji asked her questions

"Kuriye kya kart hi ho "? Says Toshi ji

"Ji mein ek dentist hoon meri khud ki clinic I have " says the girl

"Acha ji very good and appka naam hi nahi poochi mein ne aur hobbies?" says toshi ji

"Ishita and I love cooking,painting, singing" she says

"Acha Sishita tumna show Raman your room says her mother

"No its fine says Raman

"No its cool we our open minded don't feel shy " says Bala

They go to her room she shuts the door

"Listen um if you don't mind I have a Favor to ask you dehko I comepletely understand if you don't like me par if it's a na then just ghar jaake say it , please don't get me worng just that when guys take to long amaa ko lag tha ki it will happen and then jab na hota tho ghar mein intension tho please if it is a no just let us no soon kyunk this time amma theyeveryonethink it's a yes casue of the kundly matching and all" says Ishita

"Sure no Problem when I get home ill tell my family no and they will let your family know" says raman

"Thank you so tum na khe wale ho I mean say no to me? Says IShita

"Haan I am going to say no its not you it's just " says Raman

"It's perfectly fine but you have say it I can't refuse ok says Ishita

Suddenlytehre was a knock on her door

The chai came

"Listen we have stay here a bit or they will guess something is up" says ishita

"Sure by the way I'm not the 1st guying you are seeing fir this matching na" says Raman

"Nope its my 4th time but it's your 1st time meeting a girl for shaaadi na" she said

"Yes it is actually to be honest ishita its not you are a nice girl just this Arrange marriage thing to me is crazy after all times have changed. I don't like this idea of meeting a girl" Infact poor you seemed so nervous and stressed when you came out . says Raman

"I know even I find this all so werid I mean in just one meeting deciding if he is the one and the way everyone looks at the girl I mean me as in she she fair, hight kaise hai, weight is fine na good its is nerve wracking I tell you says Ishita

"I bet is its yaar what bloddy nonsense is this one meeting we ned to know if it will be a good match I mean at least for em guys we have the easy way you girls get drilled " says Raman

"Haan I agree so many questions I tell you what do you , ji I'm a dentist... do you cook? Yes I do I even tppk a cooking classes I can cook Indian, Chinese , Italian... hobbies kya hai? I love to cook , paint and sing ...Do you like kids ? haan I love kids then the serving of the chai god all eyes on me to make sure not a drop falls out of place .. tehn ask hwo much sugar kitna milk? Uff I would to throw tea on face and say I am not here for a job interview or nota item you buy I a store but kya Karen thodi you d o that says ishita

"haha I understand I can feel the pain by the way*pouring chai how much sugar" says Raman

"haha 2 please says ishita

they our sipping the chai

"really I can't stad arrage that is why I want love marriage stand arrange that is why I want love marriage"says Raman

"Oh ho Love Marriage not bad so how long you two been together naam kya hai uska huh? Asks ishita

" 4 yrs Sagun Taylor"

"Wow 4 yrs true love hoga then that is very long time par taylor she is Christian right?" says ishita

"Haan wow hope it all works out you will marry her na" she asks

"Yes I will I love her "says Raman

"By the way you never had a boyfriend kya?" asks Raman

" I did but it lasted only 6months pata hai no one knew I did in fact I use to sneak out from this balcony to meet subhu tehn uski biek pe we use to go out clubbing "says Ishita

"Oh Subhu not bad chup chup ke that to clubbing not bad yaar you love clubbing I do too yaar I know the places here ill give you names of them you will love " says Raman

"Really thanks I'd like that you know I never told anyone about subhu or clubbing before" syas ishita

"I never told anyone about shagun before either except my cousin mihir I don't know why I just felt open says Raman

"I know me too it waseasy to tell you I don't what you may be thinking of me though" she says

"Aree what would i think just that you are a normal fun girl of today bas" says Raman

They but our laughing and smiling

"I think we should go or else they might get wrong idea" says ishita

She opens the door

"I wish you luck with shagun and please don't forget ghar jaane ki baad tell your family" says ishita

"Thanks and don't worry I will and I wish you luck too hope you find who you are looking for" says raman

Vanidita and Bala

Hear and see

"It was nice meeting you ishita you are a very nice girl" and Raman shakes her hand

They leave

"Amma I think it's a yes" says Bala

"Aye yo kya really kaise" says Amma

"Amma when a guy holds a girls hand what does it mean" says vandita

Later tha night that phone rings

"kya how dare you tera beta ko jaake bolo aise larki haath nahin hold karne ka agar na hoga tho yells mrs. Iyer

Few days later whiel buying groceries

Both mrs. Iyer and mrs. Bhalla meet

"Tum na classy hi na manners hi nahin hai aise larki ko lead akr thi tera beta ek number ka flirt hai yells mrs iyer

"Oye mera beta haath hod bhi ky atho kya galat hua teri beti badi fast hai mera beta ki haath inher hand huh says Mrs Bella

"Ek minute meri beti ko respect and classy ahi pata nahin teri beti mainhai ya anhin uski husband tho dubai main hai susral meinnahin maayka main hi hoti hai yeh kaise upbringing hai yeh chi says Iyer

Mr Iyer and Mr. bhalla meet at a business conference

"Aapki wife mein koi manners hi nahin hai Mr. iyer acha hai ki Raman mana kiya aise family ki sath kyun ristha kar ni" says mr. bhalla

"Aapki bhi wife aur beta ko manners teach kiya karo ab mere company se jaao get out" says Mr.iyer

Bala and Romi meet at the bank

Dehka loan nahin mila na actually kuch connectins hai you see loan mlega bhi nahin says Bala

"Koi teri tho lannahin mila tho kya kam sa kam contrack mila humhe taunts romi

2weeks later Ishita and Raman bump to each other at a movie theater

"Hi how are you Ishita "says Raman

"Raman I'm doing good how are you and shagun ka kya hua"? she asks

"Aree who sab later 1st tell me I said no na tho uske baad kya drama hua between our families WWIII I tell you par you ok na." Says Raman

"Yes I'm fine I know huge drama par you and shagun ka kya "

"Actually thing is I haven't told her yet ki I love her and I want marry her "Says Raman

"What you know what ek number ki bandar ho tum" says ishita

"Oh hello Bandar nahin hoon just confused how I know if she feels the same" he says

"Bandar ho na I know it aree 4 yrs raman you knw in a second and tuhe 4yrs pagal ho tum"

"Aree im not yaar ok fien how about you meet her and help me tum larki ho you know her dil ki baat please" says Raman

"Ok done movie ki baad jab jiju and akka go home ill make a excuse and meet you ok " says Ishita

"Cool par where"? says Raman

"um corner coffee shop par usk baad you have drop to my Clinic ok? Says ishita

"Clinic ok what is in that sure see you movie ki baad" says Raman

Precap ch 2: Ishita please you have to come to Maldives with us please says Shagun

Shagun its impossible ishita wont come I know it says Raman

Aunty uncle please meri shaadi hai and ishita meri sab se achi facebook friend hai pelase aunty uncle shaaid only happen once na and freidns tho have to be there na says Shagun

Acha fine ishu jaao go enjoy says amma

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clementina thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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aww nice concept nd gud start dear loved it 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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aaah..great start Fiza..😊😊
Something very different..😃
Thanks for the PM😊 ..and pls continue⭐️⭐️⭐️

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Different concept, but *fingers crossed* I hope the ending won't be the other way round. I literally just LOL at the 'rat poison' part, poor in-laws.😆 & omg, after the 'no' it was like WW3 just liked you mentioned, with the rest of the families. Interesting precap and choice of place. Looking forward for the next update.😊
P.S. Nice choice of outfit, neither was it over the top nor was it under done.👍🏼
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Fiza28 thumbnail
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Originally posted by: ForbbidenLove

Different concept, but *fingers crossed* I hope the ending won't be the other way round. I literally just LOL at the 'rat poison' part, poor in-laws.😆 & omg, after the 'no' it was like WW3 just liked you mentioned, with the rest of the families. Interesting precap and choice of place. Looking forward for the next update.😊

P.S. Nice choice of outfit, neither was it over the top nor was it under done.👍🏼




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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start...ishra r so friendly in one meet...


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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey nice concept bdw its reminds m a movie of ayesha n abhay but I would love to read it more on ishra do continue n pm m whenever u r updating nxt
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great start. Something different. Plsss PM me.. awesum update. Thnkuu
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow... it was totally a different plot yaar... loved it soo much... i loved the second meeting of dem... n other family members... hilarious... y havent you not updated still plsss do it soon yaar very eager for maldives trip visit... eager to kno how ll ishra join dis story... UPDATE SOOONNN

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