Innocent Love❤️;;PROMO pg.34

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hi im mauli for all those who dont know who i am. and on the votes, this is my new fan-fic. like sanya di said, i will try to finish this fanfic with out leaving it hanging.

Innocent Love-

Kripa's life changes when she has to sit in the mandap with the guy that she hates.

i'll post some promos soon.... and the part of couse.lol

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Promo

you see a young girl teaching a class. and the class starts to sing 'Jana Gana Mana'

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Chapter 1-

"Good morning class." Replied a sweet voice with a smiling face. She wore a beautiful white kurta pajama. Her hair was in a bun to keep it out of her face, but a gentle strand of hair kissed her beautiful face. "Today we will be learning to sing in the correct rhythm." She said with a sweet smile. Yes, this was her favorite job. She loved, both, music and little kids. She was the teacher of California's finest music schools. "So. Today we will sing Jana Gana Mana. Are you ready? One, two, three, and begin." The music started and the class waited for the right moment to start.

Jana Gana Mana Adhinayaka Jaya He

Bharat Bhagya Vidhata

Punjab Sindh Gujarat Maratha

Dravida Utkala Banga

Vindhya Himachal Yamuna Ganga

Ucchala Jaladhi Taranga

Tubh Shubha Name Jage

Tubh Shubha Ashisha Mange

Gahe Tubh Jaya Gata

Jan Gan Mangaldayak Jay He

Bharat Bhagya Vidhata

Jaye He ! Jaye He ! Jaye He !

Jaye,Jaye,Jaye,Jaye He

(http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kCiviB9BDVk)

When they finished singing, the teacher broke in tears remembering her India. "Excellent job!" She concluded. "You all are getting really good at singing."

"Then why are you crying Ms. Kripa?" Asked a little girl looking like she was about to cry. Kripa went to her and hugged her.

"I was just missing my home country." Kripa smiled thinking about the beautiful plains of India and all the beautiful sceneries.

"I wish that one day you get to go back so that you don't cry like this." Said the little girl with an innocent smile on her face. The innocent little girl left Kripa wordless.

"Thank you Sonya. You really made my day." Kripa smiled and kissed her forehead. She quickly wiped her tears and got up. "Nice job class. You may go home for today. See you all tomorrow." Everyone loved Kripa. She was the nicest teacher they had. They left Kripa behind in her thoughts about India and her beautiful home country. Soon enough she went outside to get a lift. It suddenly started raining and Kripa, loving the rain, smiled closing her eyes and spun in circles. Her hair came loose and it became all soaked. Just then a car passed by and splashed her with mud. "Oh no. Stop. Look what you did! Come back here!" Kripa started shouting and yelling at the car. When it reversed she was scared and cursed herself for getting mad like that.

"Yes?" Asked a man with shades on. Is he crazy? It's not even sunny and he has shaded on? He had a shirt and a pair of jeans on. He took his sunglasses off and looked at Kripa up and down. That's when Kripa noticed that he could see all the curves in her body. She quickly covered herself with her hands. "What do you want?" He asked in a harsh tone.

"I...uh...mister, you got my clothes all dirty with mud." She began wondering why she stopped him in the first place.

"What should I do about it?" He asked giving her disgusted looks as if she was a piece of garbage.

"I…well…you could help me." She replied looking down. Angad smiled with a glint of mischief in his eyes.

"Well babes, I don't think you're my type." He smirked and Kripa's head shot up as if she had heard him call her name.

"That's not what I meant." Kripa backed. She had no intention of that meaning. She wasn't like that.

Angad chuckled a little. "That's what all the girls say. But just say that you are so into me." He smirked checking her out again.

"Please mister. Just leave me alone now." She said fighting her tears. Kripa didn't like fighting with people. She was scared that he might do something to her, and she was scared of him, and his personality.

"Come on honey. You know you want me." He said more as of praising himself than flirting with her.

"Please." Kripa shouted trying to make him go away. "I don't know you. Just please leave me here." She replied turning away and heading to the school to see if it was open. Unfortunately, it was locked and she had no option but to go back to where she was. She hoped that he had left but to her surprise, he was still waiting for her.

"Just get in the car, I'll drop you home." He grinned at her. He was…different than before. What happened in the 5 minutes that she had left? Was this a joke? Never the less, Kripa got in the car, sure that he wouldn't hurt her, and would safely drop her home. After about 5 minutes of silence, Angad decided to turn on the radio. It was a love song and Angad absolutely hated love songs so he quickly turned off the radio. "So…" He started. "What do you do for a living?" He asked in a polite way.

"Oh. I'm a music teacher at the school. I teach little kids about music and how to sing at the right tone and note." Kripa replied with a smile.

"That's sweet." Angad said thinking 'how tacky'. The rest of the ride was quite. Suddenly the car stopped. Kripa was scared now.

"What happened?" She asked looking outside in the dark. It was now pouring and there wasn't a place in sight where they could stop if they wanted too.

"I'll go check the engine." Angad said opening the door to go outside. He opened the engine and took a look inside. Smoke came out and he saw that there was no way that he could fix the car in the rain. He went back in the car and ran his hand through his hair splashing a few drops of water onto Kripa's face.

"What's wrong?" Kripa asked worried about what they would do now.

"Nothing bad. Just the engine blew up and I can't fix it because of the rain. I can't see any place to stay either. Looks like we'll have to stay in here or start walking to that hotel all the way over there." He says pointing outside. Kripa looks to where he is pointing.

"No. I won't be able to make it without falling ill." She replied staring at the faint light of the hotel.

"Okay then. We will stay here for the night until I can get some help." Angad said.

"Why don't you call someone to fix the car?" Kripa asked wondering why he didn't call someone already.

"Well Ms. Music teacher. The mechanics are not working right now, as they have to go to sleep like normal people. I will call them in the morning when they go to work again." He said acting like a teacher talking to some really stupid kid.

"Oh." Kripa managed to get out. "But where will we sleep?" She asked looking around the small car. It was nice and all, but it was really small.

"On the ground. Will you join me?" He said with pure sarcasm. "Where else, the seats. You can sleep in the back and I'll sleep here." He replied getting out the blankets he had stored in the trunk. (All you have to do to get them is open the back seats so that you are at the trunk.) "Here you go your highness." He replied making fun of her.

"Thank you." Kripa managed to say. Angad had serious problems. Why couldn't he just be nice to her? Whatever. She only had to deal with him for another couple hours. Then she would never have to see him again.

**i hope that its long enough! anyways comment lotz.. or else no part! hehe anyways. hope you like it

loveee maulii<33

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Posted: 18 years ago
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The cocept sounds very very interestin.... cnt wait for da 1st part!!!!

*****EDIT*******

Awesome first part... it was a really good beggining!!!!!!! So angads da arrogant types n kripas the innocent 1!!!! Neways gr8 start.. pls cont soon... 😊

Edited by nehagupta_9 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wowo.... soooo interesting!!! nd awesum!!! 👏
👏 i LOVE it... CANNOT wait to read more... so
continue soon!!! 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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that was reallly cute!! Continue soon!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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sounds interesting!! fab parttt!! continue soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Liked it.

ps. could u write in a darker colour for obvious reasons. thx
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: ixi-shaj

Liked it.

ps. could u write in a darker colour for obvious reasons. thx

sure... how about this color?

lovee mauli<33

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: deeya123

nice concept .cntinue soon 👏

thanks! yeah ill tryy😊

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