VeeBa SS/FF - Kash - part 5 - page 6

Hi guys i'm starting a new story, hope it's good. Really nervous

Karan track has passed

Veera is in love with Baldev but Baldev isn't. Today Veera will confess her love to him

Veera goes to him wearing a red churidar suit. Baldev is at a chai shop drinking tea with his two friend

Baldev - Areh waah aaj kabootri achanak se larki lagne lagi

Veera - Baldev mujhe tujhse kuch baat karni hai

Baldev - (drinking tea) Bol

Veera - Woh ... um ... um ... main

Baldev - Mere paas pura din nahi, jaldi bol jo kehna hai

Veera (closing her eyes) - Main tujhse pyaar karti hoon

Baldev is in shock for two seconds and then starts laughing

Baldev - acha mazak karleti hai tu

Veera - (opening her eyes now) yeh mazaq nahi hai

Baldev - Ki. Dekh main tujhse yeh pyaar vyaar kabgi nahi kar sakta hoon, acha hoga tu apni zindagi jee aur main apni

Veera - yeh kya keh raha hai tu

Baldev - Sach

Veera - Lar main tujhse pyaar karti hoon

Baldev - Lekin main nahi na. Chal ab jaa yaha se

Veera turns around with teary eyes and starts going to her house

Baldev - Isse achanak se kya hua, pyaar

Jhaggi - Saare pind di larkiya aap pe marti hai, iss me se ek veera bhi hai

Baldev just ignored the matter

While Veera was crying in her room

Precap - Rishta for Veera. Boy family come to meet Veera. Will Veera say yes or no?

Note - Sorry guys can't PM people today, in a rush

Part 1 - Page 1 Part 2 - Page 2
Part 3 - Page 4.

Part 4 - Page 5. Part 5 - Page 6

Wow nice start..continue soon!!

Nice start!:) looking forward to the next update.If possible please pm me when you update.

It's good! VERY good! 😃 Aaarrrgh! 😡 Baldev was horrible! I know Veera will say yes 4 da marriage. .I'd hv if I were in her place.. 😭 nd dt wud b a good punishment for Baldev! 😡

Nt only good..its jus amazin...gr8 start dear..continue asap ..n plzz do pm me wen u update it..

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Wow nice start..continue soon!!

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Originally posted by: TehsinaJFJ

It's good! VERY good! 😃 Aaarrrgh! 😡 Baldev was horrible! I know Veera will say yes 4 da marriage. .I'd hv if I were in her place.. 😭 nd dt wud b a good punishment for Baldev! 😡

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Part 2

Veera is crying in her room when all of a sudden she hears a knock on the door. Veera quickely wipes her tears

Ranvi - Darwaza khol Veera

Veera opens the door and sees ranvi

Ranvi - Veera woh humne ek larka dekha hai tere liye, tujhe koi dikat toh nahi hai na

Veera -'(a bit surprised, after some thinking) Nahi veerji, mujhe koi dikat nahi hai

Ranvi - (happily) thik hai phir, tayaariyaa shuru karte hai

Veera smiled

Veera - (in her mind ) maine pyaar kiya lekin woh mujhe pyaar nahi karta, par usse zabardasti bhi toh nahi na kar sakti thi, jo veerji ne socha hai wahi karungi

Then Veera goes downstairs who is caught by Chaiji

Chaiji - Larke wale teen baje aa rahe hai, jaldi tayar ho ja

Veera - Lekin larka rehta kaha hai

Chaiji - Koi dusre pind, paas mein hi hai, le Gunjan bhi aagayi

Gunjan - Chal Veera aaj main tujhe tayar karti hoon

Both girls go upstairs to Veera's room

At 2:00 baldev and his family come and at 3:00

The boy's name is pratik jaitly (shlok's sister's husband in iss pyaar ko kya naam doon ek baar phir)

Pratik's mum - Namaste

Ranvi - Namaste

Chaiji - Namaste

Ratan just folds her hands which the boy's family find weird

Chaiji - Bethiye na

Pratik mum - Ji, agar aap Larki ko le aate

Chaiji - Ji ji, main buls ke aati hoon

Chaiji goes and brings Veera from her room. Veera is dressed in the same red churidar suit that she wore when she was about to confess her love to Baldev. When Baldev saw veera he could see that she was sad.

Veera came and sat down between pratik dad and pratik mum

Pratik mum - Toh beta tum kaha tak parhi ho

Veera - College pura kiya

Pratik dad - Kyu na larka aur larki kahi akele mein baat karein

Chaiji - Ji kyu nahi, veera tu pratik ko chat pe le jae, aur gunjan baldev tum log bhi saath jao

Baljan - Ji

Veera and Pratik were walking beside each other looking down with Gunjan at the side and Baldev was at the back

When they reach the terrace veera pratik sit on the swing and balJan at the front. It has been 5 mins and no one has said a word yet, so Gunjan started of

Gunjan - Toh hone wale jiju aap ko humari Veera kaisi lagi

Pratik - Ji bohot pyaari aur khoobsoorat hai

Baldev hated the words pratik said but ignored the feeling

Pratik - Veera ji

Veera - Aap mujhe sirf Veera bhi keh sakte hai

Pratik - Veera aapkovmain k kaise lagta hoon

Veera - Aap bhi bohot ache hai

Pratik smiled along with Gunjan but Baldev was getting Irritated

After a bit of talking All 4 come downstairs

Pratik dad - Toh puttar kaisi lagi Veera

Pratik - Meri haa hai

Everyone smile

Ranvi - Aur Veera tu

Veera - (looking at baldev and baldev looking at her aswell) (5 seconds later) HA

Everyone smiled and started meeting each other but veeba were in thier own world

Chaiji - To teh raha Shaadi agle hafte hogi

Everyone go

Note - I'm going to skip the wedding and all, cause the main part is the suhaag raat

Veera is sat on the bed like a bride but there is no sign of Pratik, then suddenly the door opens, Pratik comes in drunk

Veera - Pratik ji ( in shock )

All of a sudden Pratik fell on the bed and slept

Veera made him sleep properly

Veera - Yeh aise koi aaye

Veera was confused but went to sleep

Next Morning Veera woke up at 8:00 and got ready in a red saree with hair open and straigtened

Veera made paranthas for breakfast and put them on the table then everyone else came

Pratik mum - Kuch aur nahi bana sakti thi, ya phir is me zyada ghee

Veera - Maaf kijiye ga lekin zyada ghee ya tel sehatke liye acha nahi hota

Pratik mum - Kal ki aayi chokri ab hume batayegi ki humare liye kya acha, jaa la doosra nasshta

Veera found the family's behaviour weird but went on to make thier choice of breakfasy

She came with the breakfast, after having breakfast they had something to say to Veera

Pratik mum - Chalo ab tujhe batate hai iss shaadi ki sachai, tere veerji ke paas bohot paisa hai na bas isi liye shaadi ki. Ab tujhe humari har baat maan ni hogi aur abhi pag phere ke liye jaana hai, waha se paise zarur le kar aana warna ghar aakar tumhara yeh hashar karoongi ke tu yaad rakhegi

Veera was shocked and terrified but she learned to accept what destiny had for her

At 12:00 she asked Pratik if he could take her but he was too lazy to go so she got told to go by herself

At 2:00 she reached pritampura, and went to her house, she met rveryone and also everyone else in the village

Gunjan - Veera bata na kaisi thi pehli raat

Baldev was listening to them from a distance

Veera - Thik thi

Gunjan - Bas thik, unhi ne kuch kiya nahi (teasingly)

Veera - Kuch baate ki aur so gaye

Gunjan - (serious) Veera tu khush yoh hai na

Veera - (head shot up) Ha kyun

Gunjan - Kyun ki jab se tu aayi hai kuch sehmi sehmi si hai

Veera - Haa main thik hoon. Gunjan didi aap ke paas thore paise hai, chahiye the

Gunjan - Haa kyun nahi, ye le abhi ke liye yoh 500 rs hi hai

Veera - Chal jainge (teary) shukriya gunjan didi

Gunjan - Arrey isme rone ki kya baat hai,

Veera smiled and then bid everyone goodbye and went home

Precap - Veera living a hell in her in-laws
Veera pregnant

Yeh..kya tha..veera ki shaadi hogayi????n abhi pregnant bhi...oh no...jaldi update karo...we want sum veeba dear..yeh ki kar dittha tune..???