MG*Sands Of Time... Part 1/ page 8... 08 march 2014

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Prologue

He sat near the river bank looking at the sky, so full of shining stars...It was his usual place to visit after his duty was over or whenever he was free, he some how find lil solace here and forget all his worries, all his sorrow,and try to lessened his pain and forget his sorrowful past but not HER...who became the reason for his pain and hurt, he purposely reminds himself what he has gone through all these years because of her betrayal...

Teri aankhon ki namkeen

mastiyaan,

Teri hasi ki beparwaah

gustakhiyaan,

Teri zulfon ki lehrati

angdaiyaan,

Nahi bhoolunga main,

Jab tak hai jaan,Jab tak hai jaan

He sat there remembering the time spend with her...the good time...

Baarishon mein bedhadak

tere naachne se,

Baat baat pe bewajah tere

roothne se,

Chhoti chhoti teri bachkani

badmashiyoon se,

Mohabbat karunga main,

Jab tak hai jaan,Jab tak hai jaan

Whom is he fooling somewhere he knows that he still loves her...suddenly reminiscing his past he came across her harsh words which she spoke without even thinking once, i have never loved you i was confused with what i feel for you,now i have realise my mistake, now i m sure that i don't love u but Him and i m soon gonna marry him, i sorry for whatever happened between us because of my confusion, forget me and if possible forgive me...

Tera haath se haath chhodna

Tera saayon ka rukh modna,

Tera palat ke phir naa dekhna

Nahin maaf karunga main,

Jab tak hai jaan,Jab tak hai jaan

A film of tears came to his eyes...

Tere jhoothe kasme

vaado se,

Tere jalte sulagte

khwabon se,

Teri beraham adao se,

(Duaon, in original poem)

Nafrat karunga main,

Jab tak hai jaan,Jab tak hai jaan

He wont forget what she did to him...and wont forgive her either...

Poem credit: Gulzar (movie: Jab Tak Hai Jaan)

Story name courtesy: Sidney Sheldon.

Hey friends... You may come to know its not my work...as u must have figured out its beautiful writing😆... This is completely my friends work... I am just posting it on behalf of her... So plzzz like it... comment it...as its awesome⭐️Sorry for any mistakes😳

Thank you😃

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INDEX:

Part 1
Edited by daredevilisback - 11 years ago
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Ok here is my comment:
OMG...this is awesome...
Just killer prologue...joh main tujhe already bol chuki hu falooda..
Me thinking why must have Geet done that?🤔...
Will be greedily waiting for it😃😳😆
Jaldi jaldi de update...so we can have mast mast parts like this...
Love u so much for this story😳❤️
And ha my like bhi count hoga😳😳😃😃
😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res😊

Nice part..
maan is suffering..
i hope nt bcoz of geet bt someone else..😳
nd geet helps him out..

sach hi hai yaar.. jb pyaar hota hai to dard jada milta hai khushiyoon se...😭

waiting to read more...
Edited by Appy - 11 years ago
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stupid IF!!!😡😡
hme reserve nai krne de rha tha!!!🤢

me

too..
Edited by Appy - 11 years ago
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even
bhi...
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lovely prologue and bit painful too
maan loved a girl and she left him because she felt she didn't love him
who the girl is??????
is it geet???
looks like i have to wait for the that😆

beautifully written!!!!
start it soon!!!!!!!😊


and i loved the banner too its beautifully done😳
and it looks amazing!!!!!😳
Edited by -MSKdeewani- - 11 years ago
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hmmm... ur frnd work but u also did a good job in posting...lovely sweety...n continue soon ; )


the poem link
Edited by SOLACEofEYES - 11 years ago
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tu kitne baar res karti re...

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