MG*Sands Of Time... Part 1/ page 8... 08 march 2014 - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6




very interesting prologue...

waiting to read more...

why ur friend is not posting her story with her own id...why u have to post on her behalf...

bcz she uses mobile...
so she requested me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey jalebi just for u ...
link of poem on first pg...in my comment ;) after all my SRK poem y won't I give...;) *me blushing hard*
Edited by SOLACEofEYES - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: SOLACEofEYES

hey jalebi just for u ...
link of poem on first pg...in my comment ;) after all my SRK poem y won't I give...;) *me blushing hard*

ha ha pata hai meri maa..tera srk...
baad me edit karti hu abhi mob se hu
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Posted: 11 years ago
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intersting
love ur banner can i save this pic plzzz
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow jalebi ur banner is superb didn't I told u...see d above comments...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: daredevilisback

ha ha pata hai meri maa..tera srk...
baad me edit karti hu abhi mob se hu



hayy u also called him mine...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
congrats Mayu for the new concept
can't tell you if i will be able to read it or not
but will try as I m not able to read all the stories of all writes..
kyunki apni story ke lambe lambe updates ke liye bhi to time dena pdta hai na
Hope you won't mind..
mujhe lagta hai mki pahle apni Bhula na dena jaldi se khatam kar lo
uske baad shuru karna😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
Wow this is interesting ⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 1

He settled all his luggage in his house & asked the staff member of the institute who came to receive him to go back to headquarter & inform Air commodore that he will be shortly there in a while...

His house was the place far away from main city & less than a kilometers away from cant area...where all the defence personnel stays...he got fresh and ready in his uniform and left the house for reporting...

At headquarters...

As he entered he looked around nothing has changed in this seven years...except for little renovation which took place...the same lawn garden...the same infrastructure...everything is same...only time & he has changed...this place reminds him so much of her...how they used to meet...steal glances...the blissful moment with her...

He looked around,this is the place for both combined air force and army bases...there are two offices one for army n one for air force...along with air force training institution for new comer & army medical college n hospital...

At Air Commodore office...

May i come in sir...he knocked the door...

Oh! Yes Squaron Leader Maan Shekhawat,replied Balraj Singh Air Commodore & incharge of airforce base & institute...

Nice meeting you Maan after so many years...

Even I am happy to meet you sir...how are you?

I m good...i heard you didn't move in the villa allotted to you in cantt but instead in your own house...

Yes sir would like to stay at my place...

It would have been better if you stayed in cantt...

Yeah indeed it would have, but i assure you i wont lack in my duty because of me not staying in cant...

Oh! No i didn't mean that...i know you are a responsible officer...

In that case i will be happy to stay at my place...

Ok as you wish but you can move whenever you feel like...

Ok sir, when do i have to resume my duty...

You can from tomorrow...take rest today its not so urgent you know...and yes along with your duty you have additional work...

Additional work??

You will have to mentor in airforce institute... dont worry its temporarily...

Ok, i dont mind...i just want to be busy anyway...he thought to himself...

Is there anything else sir...

No that's all...

Then i may take your leave...

Sure...

Next day Maan started his duty,n as a mentor taught them flying fighter plane etc...few more classes as their mentor has gone for some important work out of state for few month...

But wherever he went he could not help but remember her...its getting difficult day by day...few days went by like this...it was almost one and a half month after he came here,he actually felt her presence...as if she is here, somewhere near him...Maan stop ur imagination...she left you...she must b married with kids now...how can she be here...oh! You traitor stop beating so fast... punching his chest & pushing the the imagination aside, he proceeded for his work...

Sorry for any mistakes...Thank u all for supporting...


Edited by daredevilisback - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ME FIRST!!!!!!!!!!!🥳

by chance😆
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