IPKKND: overprotective Raizada!! SS

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey guyzz
This is my new SS hope u like it!!

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In this SS Arnav is really caring and protective and since Khushi married him, she's never even had a slight cold or cough!

I'm this SS, Khushi is from a rich family thanks to her brother Rahul, and Khushi is quite modern and she loves Arnav a lot!

All characters are the same except I've added a new character named Rahul, and he's Khushi's and Payal's older brother.


Please like mad comment, should I continue ?!?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi


Chapter 1

Arnav: Khushi!

Khushi: ji ( yes)

Arnav: Khushi I need to go for a business trip, so pack your bags

Khushi: why

Arnav: because your coming

Khushi: no

Arnav: what!

Khushi: I mean, I can't

Arnav: what do you mean you can't?

Khushi: Arnav, I need to take care of the house, I can't go!

Arnav: di, Payal, and everyone's there!

Khushi: but still

Arnav: Khushi no!

Khushi: why not Arnav? Why can't i?

Arnav: firstly I can't stay without you, secondly, you never take care of yourself! Once I wasn't there at home for a day, and you nearly fell ill, and now I'm going for 2 weeks and your not coming?! No way Khushi?

Khushi: Arnav please!

Arnav: NO!

Khushi: okay fine, I'll take care of myself really well, and I'll call you everyday and I'll keep texting. Please Arnav

Arnav: Shut up Khushi! YOU ARE COMING!

Khushi: Arnav!

Arnav: Don't talk to me like that Khushi!

Khushi: sorry, but please Arnav

Arnav: I've already said your coming and I'm not changing my mind!

Khushi: I've already told you I'm not coming!

Arnav: KHUSHI!

First time Arnav shouted at Khushi really loudly!

Khushi couldn't take it, so she ran off, but she had tears in her eyes and that didn't go unnoticed from Arnav, Arnav can't stand Khushi crying, it hurts him a lot, he ran after her.

Arnav: Khushi, im sorry! Khushi please listen to me damn it!

Arnav pulled Khushi and she crashed against his well built body.

Arnav: ab sonogy? ( no will you listen?), I'm sorry Khushi, I'm really sorry, Khushi you know I can't leave you, please understand.

Khushi: Arnav your not understanding! And you never do!

Arnav: Khushi please!

Khushi: I don't want to understand anything!

Arnav: Khushi stop it!

Khushi: what if I don't, what will you do?!?


Arnav: don't ever say that again! You know what I can do!

Khushi: Sorry Arnav, I shouldn't have behaved with you this way, but Arnav I'm staying, I'm sorry Arnav, but I need to stay!

Arnav: FINE!

Arnav just walked off angrily, he knew there was no point, arguing with Khushi!

Khushi realised she made Arnav angry and once he's angry, it's really hard to control him! And pacify him!

How was it? Should I continue, or just end it?
Please comment and like !'



Edited by Arihiya-Raizada - 11 years ago
MarriedLove thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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really very nice...
pls do continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
its really good start
how will khushi pacify arnav?
plz continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#5
awesome concept
perfect update
loved it
plz continue soon
thanks for the pm
nano123 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#6
Fantastic update.
Continue it soon.
Try to give quite long update please
..Neha..PM thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Waiting to see how Khushi pacifies him!
Continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#8
Hmmm nice i wndr y she is not ready 2 go with him...nxt chp sooon!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update
Arnav is really over protective for Khushi. Why does he think that only he can take care of Khushi even Khushi is incapable of doing this job. It kind of suffocate her.
Continue story

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Interesting concept...awesome chapter...Arnav is very possessive and caring...thanks for the PM

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