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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey guys its my first os
a short fluffy funny Kr hope u like it
hit the review or like button below
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Rey sped through the enormous Basement parking of St louis collage. He was in a foul mood today his most prized possession, his Beloved aston Vanquish had almost been totaled. He was still imaging wringing the Delivery boy's neck Who had threatened his poor baby's life
It was in this mood that rey answered his phone
"what" he snapped. "rey singhania is that the way you talk to a lady" a Very familiar and Sexy voice purred at Him from the other end
He could immediately feel his anger vanish rapidly and his muscles loosen.
"my deepest apologies m'lady. I dint know it was you.

"i guess u'll have to make it up to me then"a delicious giggle greeted him

"oh love i will make it up to you later, when we're alone" his voice dropped to a deep husky tone clearly indicating what was running through his mind
"Oh for god's sake get your mind out of the gutter and come to the canteen" she demanded
"your wish is my demand madam, i'll be right up"
Rey quickly strolled through the parking lot eager to see his girl.
He never had thought that he the cassanova, the hunk would ever be so whipped but he couldnt help it
He was completely wrapped around kriya's little finger
He spotted his friends as soon as he step foot in the canteen "hey guys wats up?"
Giving high 5's and bro hugs to the guys rey stopped in front of where his girlfriend was sitting, pausing to drop a kiss on her head
"so what exactly is my punishment?"
"well" kriya Twirled a strand of her Luscious mahagony hair as she looked at rey with her doe eyes.
"You have to play a game with me"
"a game huh.." Asked rey His eyebrows raising
"yes, none of these boys will play.."she shot the other 5 a dirty look"so prettyyy pleaseee you cant say no"

"thats it" rey laughed "alright lets start"
"great" kriya laughed "i will try and pick or hit on you and you have to act like you dont know me Ok and then try and reject me unless of Course you really like one"

"got it"
"so here we go-"Was that an earthquake, or did you just rock my world?"
Rey Shook his head "pretty sure an earthquake"
"I would go to the end of the world for you, my Love!"
"Yes, but would you stay there?"
"Kiss me if I'm wrong, but is your name...John?"

"i like this one" he chuckled "and i dont mind completing the task at hand"
"later" she smirked "when we're in less crowded situations"

3hrs later
Do you have a Band-Aid? Because I just scraped my knee falling for you."
"I'm pretty irresistible, it's true," Rey said solemnly.

Do you have a sunburn, or are you always this hot?"
Are you a parking ticket? 'cause you got fine-fine-fine written all over ya"
2hrs later
"Did it hurt?"
"Did what hurt?" I asked, distracted,
"When you fell from heaven," she said, unable to keep a straight face as she burst out into giggles

Can you empty your pockets? I think you stole my heart."
"you wont believe me but you look a lot like my next boyfriend"
"but im your Boyfriend"
Do you have a map? Because I keep getting lost in your eyes."
"you need to get away from the bar,ur melting all the ice"

"oh for the love of all thats holy stop" groaned rey
At night reys house
If looks could kill you'd be a weapon of mass destruction."
"please im begging you, i will never ever snap at you again"

"ok if you insist" she sighed dramatically
"but i have a last one. The grand finale-"do you believe in love at first site or should i walk by again"
"enough" he growled playfully pouncing on top of her and tickling her.

"stop,stop please" kriya gasped for breath. "How about i show you what i meant about less crowded situations??"
"that" muttered rey smiling mischiviously "has to be the best idea you've had all day"

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pls DO NOT copy this concept in any form
buddy me for further os and ff's on kr and ss
**~addict~**
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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
Woah...its fantastic yar...
Too different nd amazing..the qstns were superb nd so do the shot..
Do write more
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lpve it
poor guy has to play that boring game due to he snap on his love
feeling pity for him
but althrough love it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
Heyya!
This ones cool!!
Well i luvd all the pickup lines u used!!
The best one ws the last one! I had heard it in d movie love aaj kal
Buy still i luvd it!!
All the lines and even the concept was amazing!!
I just luvd it!
Keep writin and welcum to the writers family :) :)
I m shanaya :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#5
Wooowww...
Dat was awsmm yaar...
The pick up lines 🤣
superb...
Do write more...
Would realy love to read them.. :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww it was adorable...

loved it..

cute and funny... :-D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was amazing and superb...🤣 ... os was awesome... loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was awesome.
Superb.
Do write more and pm me your future updates.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#9
I loved this
Its sooo hilarious
Omg kriya is like a bank of pick-up lines
She is tooo good
Unique and innovative
I think the first of a kind on kriyaansh loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#10
amazing OS...
it was really awesome dear...
u wrote it very well...
thnx fr d pm...

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