TAAREY HORROR FF : SSSHHHHH... RAAZ HAI! *PART 11*Pg 51* - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
Wow!! Another horror story...
Mai toh khushi se pagal ho rahi hu...
CS was amazing...
Plzzz part 1 jaldi update karo... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Amazing cs..cant wait to read...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
nice concept and nice cs
update soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It's 10:00 pm in Los Angeles. Keeping her mobile between her ears and shoulder, a girl opens the door of her house. She could hear the phone ringing. Placing the keys on the dressing table, she shifted the phone with her other hand.

"The number you are trying to call is not responding. Please try again later. "

That was it ! She had heard that message atleast 10 times now. She disconnects the call, throws her cell on the bed and takes off her coat hanging it on the coat stand. Picking up a comfy set of clothes - a loose top and cotton shorts; she goes for a shower.

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Its the most busy work-time in Mumbai, after all its 11:30 am. She was busy in a financial meeting, her mobile in vibration mode. She had seen the call, or rather calls. She knew her sister was going to be too angry with her but even her work was important.
"I'll call her as soon as the meeting gets over." she thought.

"So Mrs.Shekhawat, we are ready to invest in your designs" someone said in the meeting.

Sh : (thinking : Finally the deal's done) Thank you so much. Lets proceed with the paper works.

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Coming out of her shower, she checks her phone for any missed calls but there were none. Angrily she threw the towel on the couch, and stood near the window. She could see the snow-flakes falling and forming a thin layer of snow on the ground.

"By tomorrow there would be a thick layer of snow in front of the door. How much I miss you Sharon... Wish you were here" she sighs and falls on the bed.

She was too tired and immediately fell asleep.

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Girl : " CHODIYE HUME !"
Boy : "TO AAP RAAZI HAI HUMSE NIKAAH KARNE KE LIYE ?"
Girl : "AAP SE NIKAAH KARNE SE PEHLE HUM MAR JANA PASAND KARENGE !"
Boy : "AAP KI ISI AKAD, ISI ADAA SE TO HUME BEINTEHAAN MOHHABAT HAI TAHANI. "
Girl : "APNI GANDI ZUBAAN SE HUMARA NAAM MAT LIJIYE !"
Boy : "AUKAAT ME RAHIYE !!!" ( and makes a deep gash on the girl's wrist)

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The beautiful girl sits up suddenly on her bed. Her waist long hair falls on her face, acting as a cover for the fear and pain evident on her angelic face. She raises her left hand and notices the mark. Sweating profusely, she touches the mark on her left wrist and a searing pain bursts through her body making her scream

" AAAHHH !!!"
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At the same time in Mumbai, a handsome, young business tycoon was discussing official matters with his partner, Swayam Shekhawat. He was about to say something when his head started paining. A pain that made him wince. He felt his head would burst, and held his tightly with his hands.

Sw : Hey, tu thik to hai na?
Boy : (painfully, speaking through his teeth) GET ME SOME PAIN-KILLERS!!!
Sw : (taking out a bottle of pain killers from the drawer) Tujhe fir se sudden head-ache ho raha hai na? Tu doctor ko kyu nahi dikhata hai?




Note : Writing a horror story for the 1st time. Hope you guys like it. Plz do like and comment. Criticism is always welcome. This is just a small intro to the characters.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#15

ohh!!

so nice miss india,
keep writing dear,
update next chapter soon,
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
awesome start loved it continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
OMG!! Thanks for the pm!!
I loved the character sketch!!
Part 1 was amazing!!
Taani's anger is always mashallah!!
Taani and rey are connected!!
Please continue soon!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Awsm update
Loved the suspense
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
nice concept
cs is nice
intresting and different story
start is super
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
Superb concept nd cs
Update was really nice..
I think rey nd Taani ka past kuch related h..
Update soon!!

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