ASYA: ON MY WEDDING DAY.... MARRIED A STRANGER INSTEAD OF MY BRIDE !! - Page 87

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Posted: 11 years ago
so funny update...🤣
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just one word simply awesomeee :D
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awesome
hey keep updating n pm me all updates
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 12:

guys, this update is my valentines day gift for u all ... love u loadzz !! ❤️❤️

Asad: why don't we act like friends first and gradually make them believe that we are perfect !!

Zoya: this will work, but I've a condition !!

Asad: wat's that ?

Zoya: it's that ... why to act like friends ? we can be friends ...right ?

Asad: see ... Things are happening as my mom wished ... u wanna befriend me !! ... This is wat I don't want to happen !!

I'm telling u clearly ... we are not friends ... not at all ... and will never ever be friends!!

We are strangers who don't interfere in eachother's life ... Got it ?

Zoya: ohk ... U r hurting my ego mr. asad !!

Ususally, boys roam around me like puppies for just a casual conversation ...n here, I'm offering u friendship and u r rejecting it !!

I just can't believe it !!

ok, now listen, I'll never be ur friend even if u insist ...got it ?

asad: so, we should be careful pretending to be friends

Zoya: I don't help strangers, bye !!

She starts moving out of room angrily, asad catches her wrist n pulls her forcefully into the room

They both collide n fall on ground coz of the force he applied in pulling her

Zoya on top of asad ... They both have an eyelock

As her hair falls on asad's nose, he sneezes n they come into senses

Zoya gets up from him uncomfortably n the room is filled in an awkward silence

Asad: why are u always quarrelling with me ? ... Why do u want to befriend me zoya ?

Zoya: even I'm not interested to become friends with u !!

I just want to know ur love story ... N on that day, wen I asked, u said that we r not soo close

We can be close only if we r friends or lovers !!

As there is no chance of our love, I chose friendship !!

Asad: Try to understand me, I don't want to give u any hopes for this relation to go on ... n we both don't want this relation any further !!

We can't be friends ... u can keep any other condition !

Zoya: u should tell me ur love story completely ... n promise me that u'll not hide anything abt ur relationship

Asad: why are u after my relation zoya ?

Zoya: coz ... u lost ur love, all ur dreams were shattered of having a happy married life becoz of my mistake and it's all my fault ... even divorce decision is taken by me and u obeyed it !!

Before our divorce itself, I want to bring back ur happiness, ur life ... everything, as usual as before

N the most imp. Reason is that ... I just love knowing real life love stories !!

I'm a fan of love stories !!

So, is my condition ok for u ?

Asad: I don't have any other option ur highness !!

U r not that bad as I assumed u to be

Zoya: u felt that I'm a bad girl ? ... now u'll understand how gud this girl can be !!

So, start with ur story ...

Asad: not now, tomorrow evening after our dinner !

Zoya: go n prepare well ... !!

They laugh n sleep happily

In varun's room ...

Vanshika: wow varun ... This is amazing ... wat did u do ?

how are we hearing their conversation here ? ... I didn't leave my phone ... n I don't think u'll do such a stupid thing to increase the phone bill !!

Varun: I've kept a mini microphone in asad's room, so that u'll stop embarrassing all of us, evesdropping at their door as before !!

Vanshika: wow varun ... I just have a high tech hubby !! ... love u !

Varun: after many days ... I heard it from u vanshi !! ... Love u too ... !!

I had to do it coz ... I've a really crazy wife who keeps involving into her son's personal life !!

Vanshika: enough varun ... ! ... tel me , how did u stop it ?

Varun: the mini microphone transmits the sounds from where it is kept ... to the radio, which is here in our room ... n now, I stopped the radio !!

Vanshika: so, our plans are working, not the way we want ... but still, they are helping them think abt their relation and abt eachother !!

Varun: we can know his love story from his mouth along with zoya

Vanshika: I don't think he'll be all fair in telling his story varun !! ... he'll hide almost everything !!

Varun: we'll think abt it tomorrow, now gud night !!

They also sleep

[ author's note: sry for disturbing in middle, but no one is reading if i'm posting it at the bottom 😆

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Next day :

After asad leaves, vanshika asks zoya to speak with her for some time ... as she was busy these days !

Zoya sits beside vanshika

Vanshika: are u happy zoya ?

Zoya: yeah ... very happy aunty !

Vanshika: so, is asad behaving properly with u ... I mean .. is he okay with u ?

Zoya: we are fine with eachother aunty

Vanshika: does that mean ... he forgot aenna and acepted u as his wife ? ... did he tel u abt her ?

Zoya: ( not knowing wat to say ... ) he said that ... he'll tel me his love story tonight aunty !

Vanshika: gud to know that u both are trying to workout this relation !!

Zoya: ok aunty, I'm getting late, got to go, bye !!

Night ... varun n vanshika in their room and asad n zoya in their room !!

Zoya: start it fast asad, I can't wait anymore !

Vanshika: shall I go n give them his diaries now varun ?

Varun: wait vanshi, first lets hear wat he'll say n then u can go n give them !!

Asad: we met in our clg and became friends later we realized that we love eachother n decided to marry

Vanshika: OMG !! ... we can't do anything with this boy ... Is this the way to tel his so-called love story ? ... I'm going to give his diaries

She knocks asad's room n he opens it

Asad: mom, at this time ? ... wat are these in ur hands ?

Vanshika: zoya, these are his diaries ... he writes everything in his diaries ... take these !

Zoya takes them

Asad: why did u give them to her n how did u get those ? ( asked angrily .. )

Vanshika: today morning zoya told me that u wanted to tel her ur love story ... so, I searched for ur diaries n ... I'm giving them for ur assistance, so that ... u can tel her everything with clarity ! ... bye n gud night !

Asad: u told mom ? ... why ?

Zoya: coz she asked me wat are we upto n I didn't have time to think , so I told her

Anyways, it's not a bad idea mr. asad !!

U didn't say me anything abt ur love story wen given chance, so ... I'll read these n know myself

Asad: u cannot read other's diaries, it's not manners zoya

Zoya: who said I've manners ? ... u only told that I'm bad right ? . .. yes, I'm very bad !

Asad: no, I accept that u r very gud n sweet, please give them back !

Zoya: u gave me word asad ... I can know abt ur relation !! ... ok, we'll both read the diary ...together n u can explain me things better also ... ( she winks at him n he turns away )

See... I told u ... typical girly behavior mr.asad !!

Asad: no, urs is a typical flirt's behavior !! ... how can a girl wink at a boy zoya ? ... please don't do this again ... I hate it !

Zoya: then I'll do it more ... to irritate u !

But now, lets start reading ...

They read till 8th jan 2013, that is ... upto where varun n vanshika read !!

After feeling a lot of discomfort by letting her read his mind n heart ... that is, his diary, he decided to take a break !!

Asad: we'll sleep now, it's already late !

Zoya: ok, gud night !!

Next day:

Asad's office ...

Asad: cancel all appointments today ... n leave me alone ( he ordered n locked his cabin ... )

Asad started writing his diary:

Why am I so much effected with her presence ? ... though these things happened recently, why am I feeling like ... they were of by gone ages ?

Was I so confused at that time abt aenna ?

N those stupid questions of aenna ... Did she really meant them ?

I can't really relate to them ... But I still feel my love for aenna

Again, zoya's thoughts are overtaking my mind ...

Her not-possible ' expression ... wen she read that I wanted to meet her n win against her

Her smiles n giggles wen she read our first meet n my thoughts on aenna

Her excited face ... wen she read that ... she was my sleep disturbing girl '

I wanted to pull her cheeks n say ... " u r looking too cute "

Seeing zoya's response to my every single word n detail, I felt like ...

" yeah ... this is the way I want anyone to react to me ... I can tel this girl anything n everything, just to see ... how perfectly she wil reciprocate to my feelings n emotions, as if she has known me over years !! "

But, I still don't understand why she wanted to retain our marriage for 3 months ... I'll find out soon from her !

OMG !! ... am I seriously thinking soo much abt her ?

A complete 1 pg in my diary abt her ... !!

Looks like shez conquering me ... I wil have to put a stop to it !

But, should I keep this pg in diary or tear it ?

we'll soon be reading this diary also ... wat if she'll know abt all these ?

it's better to lie that I've stopped writing diary n hide it in this office itself ...yeah .. the best idea !!

he kept the diary in a shelf n locked it !

zoya in her clg:

she was sent out of class for not paying attention n she sat in library thinking ...

how well did he project himself in the diary ... hahah !!

but yeah .. they stay with us for life time ...

she immediately took her new notebook n wrote the date ...

I'm penning down my life from today, but I need to make sure that ... no body ever knows that I write diary ... it's the worst thing that can happen !!

Yesterday, I could see his face completely embarrassed as I was reading his diary n that too ... abt myself n his personal life ... soo funny n enjoyable for me, ... at the same time ... it would have been horrible to him !!

I don't want that to happen to me ... I'm very selfish n I know it !!

I could feel his continuos gaze on me ... his soo cautious eyes noticing each n every expression of mine ... as if he was judging me for an audition ... lol !

His face reflected mine many times n ... though I felt a lil unconfortable, I enjoyed it ... I enjoyed his complete attention !

It's the nature's greatest force that ... opposites attract, n very fastly also ... hahah !!

I donno how he loved aenna even after soo many mismatchings ...

Aenna was jealous of me without even knowing me ... n I was shocked that girls can be soo stupid at times !

Whatever it may be, hez a really nice guy n I've ruined his life for sure ... so, I'll make it up for him n aenna !

Every girl dies to have a partner who loves her immensely n hez the perfect example !!

I'm so gorgeous that every guy would just go on his knees for me ... n this so called mr.asad doesn't even want my friendship !!

Hez leaving me for an average girl like aenna ? ... I mean ... who would do it except an ideal lover ? ... I appreciate him from the bottom of my heart !!

Am I praising him too much ? ... but thinking abt him is very nice ... I'm feeling very happy, donno why ... May be writing diary for the first time is making me happy !!

Zoya, varun n vanshika will know why asad accepted aenna from asad himself ... u all wil also know abt it, along with them in next part ... ;)

This is the longest update I've ever given ... hope u enjoyed it !!



i want long comments for my longest update


********** love ... reyna

This story will be updated every Thursday !!


my first story: BEST FRIENDS TO BEST LIFE PARTNERS

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Edited by reyna. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
yippie me first!!!
Love it.
Totally awesome now i just cant wait for the next update
Ur an awesome writer Reyna...
and i have added ur pm account too😊

Edited by delena_ - 11 years ago
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that was awesome Reyna..
too gud it was..
Vanshika is just too much..😆 i just enjoy while reading about her..
nd AsYa were so adorable in this update..
now eager to know y the hell did Asad choose Aenna..
hope that they both will start accepting each other..
continue soonish sweetheart..!!😛

Edited by pwenCezz_symrun - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was soo sweet update
Asya started admiring each other
Hope soon they will sort out there feelings
Did you get the answer for my question about validity of asya marriage?
Edited by Az07 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
loved it
so both of them have finally started thinking about each other 😳
and both of the are hiding their diaries from the other one !
Your AN in the middle killed me ! 🤣
You're very smart 😆
Still laughing about it
Eager to read your next update
Continue soon
thanks for the pm 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nyc update baby.
Finally they bth r feeling something for eachother. I am happy tht uh r taking the pace. Brilliant.
I love d update.
Plz continue soon dear.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very nice update dear...
Loved it... Thnx fr pm...
Eagerly waiting for nxt chapter...
Pls continue soon...

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