Drabbles: 30. Episode XXXI- Return of the Jallad (Pg 95) [Note Pg 98] - Page 15

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: HemaG

cool one...liked it...!!



Originally posted by: shreya_rc

They also serve who only stand and wait." Milton (On his Blindness)summarizes the whole whole drabble, na?


Thank you! 😊

@shreya_rc- Indeed it does. I chose the title for not just its relevance to Rudra without any other context, but also because of those lines that you quoted. Men of action often find it hard to stand back and do nothing-- which is sometimes the best plan.
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Posted: 11 years ago
The Importance Of Being Aman

Amandeep Chawla came from a family of army men. His grandfather had been a part of the 15th Punjab Regiment's tremendous success at Burma. His father had been part of the Rashtriya Rifles stationed in the North Kashmir Valley, and had lost his life there.

So it hadn't surprised his mother when he'd first signed up for the BSD.

Aman had always been an exceptionally bright, but quiet child. And it was those very qualities that made him such a valuable second lieutenant. He was astute and observant-- so he rarely erred while investigating and following orders.

And it was the same cool head that had helped him evade capture when their mission had gone so terribly wrong. Rudra-- desperate to wrap this matter up once and for all-- had been banking heavily on surprising their opponents. Unfortunately, Tejawat's men had been lying in wait, and had formed a perimeter around them very quickly.

Had it not been for his intuition that had warned him that something was amiss; Aman would not have strayed from his team and climbed a large tree to scan the area again.

The night was still a blur. All he remembered was tremendous gunfire and Rudra being overpowered by four men, before being knocked out. The rest of their men had been killed. It had taken less than an hour.

Long after, Aman had sat stiff and silent in that tree-- shock, grief, and anger coursing through him. At dawn, he had made his way back to the base and reported the matter to Brigadier Singh.

The motive for Rudra's capture soon became evident. Tejawat's men were hoping to secure his release in exchange for Rudra's. It was a crude and desperate attempt that was bound to fail, given that the BSD did not negotiate with terrorists. But Aman had recognized the opportunity it presented to not only buy time for Rudra, but also to try and figure out where the moles in the BSD network were. He had convinced Brigadier Singh to stall and pretend to cooperate, while he came up with a counter-operative.

Today, before leading the second operation to capture the renegades, he had made a silent promise to himself. If Rudra was still alive, he would do whatever was in his power to get him out of there. He knew he was risking court martial by changing the logistics of the operation at the last minute and without express permission from his seniors-- but he was prepared to face the consequences.

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Aman had been combing through each hideout and storage room with increasing despair. He smashed through the old padlock on the door of yet another one with the butt of his rifle. Flashing a light inside the grimy interior, he couldn't help the relieved grin that broke out on his face when a gruff and familiar voice barked out at him.

"Took you long enough, Aman. Now get that damn light out of my eyes."


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Posted: 11 years ago
Note--
My knowledge of Army and Secret Service operations is pitiful. I depend on movies watched and good old Google. If you find any glaring errors, please do let me know.

-TT
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tattle-tale

Note--

My knowledge of Army and Secret Service operations is pitiful. I depend on movies watched and good old Google. If you find any glaring errors, please do let me know.

-TT

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww! Aman is here! Now Rudra can get back to Paro ( yes, that's my only agenda πŸ˜ƒ)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Uff! These cliffhangers. I care little about facts as long as the fiction can keep me in Ruddy land.

But I'm desperately looking forward to the next instalment. Keep up the super-cool work :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
It's good to know Aman and Rudra share a mutual r/ship of being more than just colleagues in the BSD.

Beautiful, in a few words you convey a lot!
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Posted: 11 years ago
That's a nice piece of writing, Keep writing, you've a way with words.
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Posted: 11 years ago

The best apology against false accusers is silence and sufferance, and honest deeds set against dishonest word-

-Milton

Paro's stand brings to mind this particular Milton quote.

I don't know how i missed this fantastic piece of writing, though late, I'm absolutely thrilled i found it!
The written word gives us this one advantage, a look into the mind of the characters and their musings. So so beautifully written!

Respect! 😊

Much Love.
N

PS: Mildly disappointed that i could read only 12 drabbles in a rowπŸ˜† Keep em coming!πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ah Aman! When he is around, I can almost pretend this is a different story, one without the name of love...sigh!

To your question - I know the basic premise of RR and hence reading is fairly simple. Plus where there might be specific references to scenes, I just enjoy your words...Win-win for me...once bitten twice shy and everything...:D

Cheers and good morning (evening to you if you are across the world!)


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