VirMan SS~Tum Ho Mera Pyaar~Thread#2*Part 39-Pg 76 - Page 53

superb update!!!!!!            liked it                    thanx 4 pm

awesome update
loved it
but who kidnapped manvi ... If its not Tanya who did this then who??
continue soon
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Fab updt...i m sure manvi will teach her good lesson...i hope wich regain his memory soon...cont asap

Brilliant update ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ u hav portrayed maanvi's emotions very well 👏👏👏👏👏👏 how badly she was shattered after knowing dat her hubi is going 2 marry sum1 else n dat 2 infront of her poor grl 😭😭😭😭😭 can't do anything 2 stop him 4 doing dat until he remember about dere wedding himself , liked her outburst whn she was talking 2 herself n complaining 2 her bhagwan dat y he always do unjustice 2 her y can't dat person whom she luvs d most stay with her whole life y she always hav 2 live alone in her life first her parents left her but dat tym her sis was dere 4 her but she 2 left her after getting married but she was happy dat her sis is happy after dat she got d dicease n she fought with it with not only her sis support but sum1 else support 2 who cherished her luved her beyond limits who was always dere 4 her who never let her fall weak who became her strength but after facing all dis wht she gain nothing she is still empty handed with broken heart u described it all very beautifully 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 , even jeevi can't do anything 4 her sis everybody is helpless dey can't see maanvi dat much hurt but can't do anything 2 stop virat bcoz of his health ( but dey can give any excuse 2 delay d wedding ) ,  tanya 😡😡😡😡😡😡😡 taking advantage d whole situation she is using virat very well by her crocodiles tears how mean n selfish she is just 2 see maanvi in pain she scoop so low n doing all dat but luved maanvi n her convo liked maanvi confidence how she challenge her 2 never let her successful in her wrong deeds she luvs virat n her luv is not dat weak which let her luv go away 4rm her just like dat she hav full confidence in her luv which she held 4 virat n she knows he 2 luvs her but just bcoz of his memory loss he can't see it clearly n she will never let dem get married 👏👏👏👏👏👏 , virat is 2 confused btw his feelings he knows he luvs maanvi but can't do anything just 4 tanya's life sake he can't b dat selfish n maanvi got kidnapped ( i thought she left d house but never thought about it ) who kidnapped her n wht he wants 4rm virat d person who kidnapped maanvi knows virat's weakness so he kidnap her without knowing virat doesn't remember anything about it ( i know virat will save her but really happy dat engagement  never held maanvi won d challenge without doing anything 😃😃😃😃😃😃 ) let se wht happens next
Edited by kateyes - 10 years ago

wow superb track manvi kidnapped excited to read more do continue soon😊

Manvi Vs Tanya amazing i like it
Manvi kidnapped by unknown? Hmm is this manvis plan so virat doesnt put the ring on or is there sumthing really bad
Do update soon and pm me please
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VirMan SS...Tum Ho Mera Pyaar...Part 38...

~Recap~

Jeevika: (shocked) Kidnap...?

Everyone was shocked, worried, and confused. Tanya was tensed, upset, and angry. Her engagement with Viraat was left incomplete, just because of Maanvi. She felt defeated as Maanvi's promise was fulfilled. Jeevika went on her knees, crying her heart out for her Sister. Viren was trying to console Jeevika, Beeji and Badi Beeji were crying while hugging each other. And Viraat...He was standing there with tears in his eyes, pain in his heart, and scared for his life. For his Maanvi.

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Dadaji: (looking at Viren/worried) Viren jaldi se police ko phone karo, hume jald se jald Maanvi ko dhundhna hai.

Viraat: (without any expression) Hum police ko call nahi kar sakhte. Usne dhamki di hai ki agar humne police ko kuch bhi pata lagne diya toh acha nahi hoga.

This worried everyone even more.

Jeevika: (tears streaming down her cheeks) Toh meri Maanvi...?

Beeji hugged Jeevika tightly, with tears rolling down her eyes.

Beeji: Jeevika sambhal Beta, sab thik ho jayega.

Swamini Bua looked around and saw the guest were still present there.

Swamini Bua: (hands folded) Aap sabka bahut bahut shukriya yahan aane ke liye, par ab yahan koi sagai nahi ho rahi hai. Hum aap sab se vinti karte hai ki ab aap log yahan se jaiye. Aur please yahan jo bhi baat huyi, un sabka zikar police se mat kijiyega aap sab.

Tanya was shocked and upset at the same time. She tried to say something but couldn't. Everyone nodded, folded their hands towards the Vadhera's and Chaudhary's and left.

Badi Beeji: (crying) Koi meri Bacchi ko bachao. Meri Bacchi ko mere paas laao, laao na usko mere paas.

Dabbu: (teary eyes) Beeji, aap roye mat, Maanvi Di ko hum laayeinge na.

Viren: Dabbu tu Badi Beeji ko andar le kar jao.

Dabbu: JI Jiju.

Dabbu took Badi Beeji into her room, while everyone else where thinking how to save Maanvi from the kidnappers, except Tanya. Jeevika wiped her tears, stood up hurriedly and went towards Viraat, who was standing there without any expression on his face.

Jeevika: (teary eyes) Viraat tumne pucha tha na, ki woh chahte kya hai, kya kaha tha usne? (shaking him by his shoulder) Bolo na Viraat. Kya kaha tha usne?

Viren: (walking towards Viraat) Viraat bol na kya kaha tha usne?

Viraat: (without looking at Viren) Kuch nahi kaha, bas kaha ki phone ka intezaar karna.

Dadaji: Kab tak phone karegein?  

Viraat: Pata nahi.

Swamini Bua: Pata nahi kisne aisi harkat ki hai. Iss ghar ki Bahu...

Swamini Bua was stopped by Vanshika Maa. Viraat looked up at Swamini Bua, little confused.

Swamini Bua: Bahu..ki Bahen ko kidnap karne ki.

Beeji: Mujhe bhi nahi samjh aa raha Swamini Ji, meri Maanvi ke saath koi aisa kaise kar sakhta hai.

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In the small, dark room, entered a tall Man. He walked towards Maanvi and moved the cloth that was covering her mouth. After that he opened her hands that were tied with the ropes and he sat beside her.

Man: (handing her the plate) Chal khana khale.

Maanvi: (crying/shouting at him) Kyun laaye ho mujhe tum yahan? Dekho mujhe jaane do warna tumhare liye acha nahi hoga.

Man: (glaring at her) Humare liye kya acha nahi hoga, uski fikar tum mat karo. Chup chap khana khao.

Maanvi: (pushing the plate away) Nahi khana mujhe tumhara diya hua khana.

The Man angrily stood up from his seat and held the plate in front of Maanvi's face.

Man: Tumhara yeh natak mere samne nahi chalega samjhi, khana khana hai toh khao, warna bhuki hi raho, mujhe usse koi farak nahi padhta.

Maanvi: Tum bahut badi galti kar rahe ho. Mera Viraat tumhe nahi chodhega.

Man: Woh mujhe chodhe na chodhe, main tumhe tab tak nahi chodhunga, jab tak mera kaam nahi pura ho jaata.

Maanvi: (confused/worried) Kaunsa kaam?

Man: Tumhe marne ka...

Maanvi looked at him shocked, worried, scared, with tears uncontrollably rolling down her eyes.

Maanvi: Maine tumhara kya bigada hai? Kyun marna chahte ho tum mujhe?

Man: Tumne mera nahi, par kisi aur ka kuch zarur bigada hai.

With that, the Man tied her back with the ropes, covered her mouth with a cloth and left out of the room, taking the plate along with him.

Maanvi: (thinking hard in her mind, with tears in her eyes) Main kiska...? Kahin Tanya toh nahi...?

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Tanya: Aisa kaun kar sakhta hai...?

Tanya was walking around the hall, worried. Unable to understand who is behind this kidnapping.

Tanya: Kahin Maanvi ne khud ko hi toh kidnap nahi karwa liya, mere aur Viraat ki sagai rokne ke liye..? (sits in the couch) Nahi, woh aisa nahi karegi. Itna bada risk nahi legi woh yeh jante huye ki main yeh sagai kisi bhi kimat mein rukne nahi dungi. Iss mein zarur kisi aur ka haath hai. Aur mujhe pata lagana hi hoga ki aisa hai kaun? Aur usne Maanvi ko kidnap kiya kyun hai?

Tanya got up and ran towards her room. She quickly changed her clothes, carried her purse, grabbed her keys, and left the house without informing anyone.

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Viraat...Viraat, Viraat please mujhe bachalo, Viraat, mujhe yahan bahut dar lag raha hai, please. Viraat please mujhe yahan nahi rehna, yahan bahut andhera hai, please mujhe le jao yahan se, please mujhe bacha lo, Viraat...

Viraat was lied down on his bed, tears were rolling down his eyes. Maanvi's words were echoing in his ears, her cries, her fears were audible in her voice. He was hell scared for his Maanvi. He didn't know what to do? How to get her back to him.

Viraat yahan bahut andhera hai aur yahan par ree...

He clenched his fist tightly as he remembered the thud sound, the slap sound that came from the other side of the phone. He looked up with his bloodshot red teary eyes.

Viraat: (fuming in anger) Uski himmat bhi kaise huyi Maanvi ko haath lagane ki? Nahi chodhunga, bas ek baar mere haath aa jaye woh jo bhi hai. Chodhunga nahi main usse. (stands up) Main yahan baithe baithe nahi reh sakhta. Mujhe Maanvi ko dhundne jaana hoga.

He quickly grabbed his car key and stormed out of the room.

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Viren, Madhan Chachu, Inder Chachu, and Viren were in the study room, waiting for the phone call.

Madhan Chachu: (looking at the phone) Pata nahi yeh phone kab aayega. (teary eyes) Meri Bacchi pata nahi kahan hogi, kis haal mein hogi?

Viren: (hand on Madhan Chachu's shoulder) Chachu, aap please fikar mat kijiye, sab thik ho jayega, hum Maanvi ko dhundh nikaleinge.

Dadaji: (worried/confused) Meri toh samjh mein nahi aa raha hai ki aisa kaun kar sakhta hai. Woh bhi Mussoorie mein.

Inder Chachu: Samjh toh mujhe bhi nahi aa raha Bauji, aisi harkat kar kaun sakhta hai aur woh bhi iss ghar ki choti Bahu ke saath.

Viren: Hum police ki madat bhi nahi le sakhte.

Dadaji: Police ki madat na le sakhe toh na sahi, par hume khud kuch karna hoga. Maanvi ko dhundhna hoga hume.

Inder Chachu: Aap thik keh rahe ho Bauji, hume Maanvi ko dhundna...

Inder Chachu stopped his sentence as he saw Viraat walking away in a hurry.

Inder Chachu: (confused/looking out the window) Yeh Viraat kahan jaa raha hai?

Everyone turned towards the direction where Inder Chachu was looking. They hurriedly ran out of the room to stop Viraat.

Viren: (shouts his name) Viraat...

Viraat stopped in his tracks as he heard Viren's voice. They all ran towards him.

Viren: Viraat kahan jaa raha hai tu itni jaldi mein? Uss kidnapper ka phone aaya?

Viraat: Nahi Bhai, mujhe uska phone nahi aaya. (looking at everyone) Usne aap mein se kisi ke paas call kiya?

Viren: Nahi, hume bhi uska koi phone nahi aaya. Waise tu aise kahan jaa raha hai?

Viraat: Maanvi ko dhundhne.

Dadaji: Maanvi ko dhundhne?

Viren: Viraat pagal ho gaya hai? Kahan dhundhega tu usse. Aur upar se itni raat ho chuki hai.

Viraat: Mujhe nahi pata Bhai, bas itna pata hai, ki mujhe Maanvi ko dhundhna hai. Pata nahi woh kis haal mein hogi, usse bahut dar lag raha hoga. Mujhe usse dhundhna hai Bhai.

Viren: Main samjhta hun Viraat par tu itni raat ko kahan dhundhega usse? Woh yahin kahin gum nahi huyi hai, Kidnap huyi hai, usse un logo ne kahin band rakha hai.

Viraat: Janta hun Bhai, par main haar nahi maan sakhta. Mujhe usse dhundhna hi hai. Main har ek koshish karunga usse dhundhne ki, apni jaan laga dunga, par usse dhundh kar rahunga.

Inder Chachu: Hum samhajte hain Viraat par tu hi soch itni raat ko usse kahan dhundhegein? Hume toh pata bhi nahi hai ki woh kahan hai.

Viraat: Chachu please mujhe mat rokiye. Main bina Maanvi ko sahi salamat dekhe chain se nahi baithunga. Mujhe usse dhundhne jaana hi hoga. Aur mera dil kehta hai woh mujhe mil jayegi.

With that, Viraat went out the Vadhera Mension.

Viren: (looking at Viraat, who was leaving) Viraat...(turns to Dadaji) Dadaji main bhi jaata hun Viraat ki madat karne Maanvi ko dhundhne mein. Shayad uska dil jo keh raha hai, woh sach ho.

Dadaji: Haan Viren, tum jao.

Inder Chachu: Main bhi chalta hun tumhare saath.

Madhan Chachu: Main bhi.

Viren, Madhan Chachu, and Inder Chachu left, while Dadaji folded his hands and looked at the idol of Goddess Durga.

Dadaji: Hey Mata Rani, meri Bahu ko wapas iss ghar mein laa do.

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Tanya: Kya pata chala?

Detective: Madamji, iss kidnapping ke peeche ki wajha hai paisa. Woh insaan uss ladki ke ghar walon se paisa chahta hai.

After coming out of the Vadhera Mansion, Tanya appointed a Detective to find out who kidnapped Maanvi and why.

Tanya: Aur iske peeche kiska haath hai woh pata chala?

Detective: Haan bilkul. Kidnapper ka naam Zafar Khan hai, Delhi mein rehta hai.

Tanya: Zafar Khan, iska Vadhera Family se kaisa rishta hai?

Detective: Pata nahi Ji, par agar aapko pata lagana hai toh aap (handing her a piece of paper) iss address par jaa kar pata laga sakhte hain. Yeh wahi jagah hai jahan uss ladki ko chupaya gaya hai.

Tanya took the address and looked at it.

Tanya: (smiles) Thank you. (handing him the money) Yeh rahe tumhare paise. Aur yaad rahe, iss baare mein kisi ko bhi na pata chale, kisi ko bhi nahi. Na main tumse kabhi mili, aur na tumne mujhe kahin dekha. Samjh gaye.

Detective: (takes the money/smiles widely) Ji Bilkul Samjh Gaya.

Tanya got up and went towards her car. She started the car and drove to the place, where her enemy was kept.

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Viraat was going crazy. He was tired, worried, tensed, scared, and what not. It was 4:00 in the morning, but he was still looking for his Maanvi. Viren, Inder Chachu, and Madhan Chachu were also looking for Maanvi, but they got no clue of her. All three of them gave up and went towards Viraat, who was looking around every corner.

Viren: (hand on Viraat's shoulder) Viraat chal ghar chal, bahut raat ho chuki hai.

Viraat: (walking away) Nahi Bhai, mujhe Maanvi ko dhundhna hai.

Viren: (stops him by holding his elbow) Viraat baat samjh, bahut der ho gayi hai. Hum itni der se yahan wahan fir rahe hai, kuch nahi pata chala. Ab wapas chalna chahiye.

Viraat: (looks into his eyes/teary eyes) Bhai please. Mujhe usse dhundhne do. Please.

Viren: Viraat teri tabiyat kharab ho jayegi, toh tu Maanvi ko kaise dhundhega? Please Viraat abhi chalte hai, I promise kal hum fir Maanvi ko dhundhege.

Viraat: Please Bhai.

Viren: Viraat please. Kal pakka hum sab Maanvi ko dhundhege.

Madhan Chachu: Haan Viraat, abhi ghar chalo.

Viraat agreed and started walking with them towards their car.

Viraat: (stops/looking at Viren with painful,teary eyes) Woh kal mil jayegi na Bhai?

Viren saw so much pain, and fear in Viraat's eyes. He didn't know what to say, so he just nodded and helped him walk towards their car.

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Tanya reached at a small house near the beach. It was an old small house hidden behind the bushes beside the beach. She looked around and found no one there. She went towards the door and tried opening it, but couldn't get it open. She looked around and went towards a window, but she couldn't see a thing from there as it was closed. She walked to the other side of the house, and found nothing that she could peek through.

Tanya: Yahan se toh kuch dikh hi nahi raha. Main kaise pata lagaungi ki yeh Zafar Khan kaun hai?

She was looking around, when suddenly she saw a door at the corner, which was hidden by a lot of bushes. She walked towards the door and tried pushing it to open. After 2-3 pushes, she finally opens the door. She peeked inside the house, and found no one there. Entering the door, she looked around to spot Maanvi in the room, but she couldn't as it was pitch black in there. She started walking further ahead, looking around, cautiously.

Tanya: (low voice) Itna andhera hai yahan toh. Yahan kisi ka chehra kaise dikhega?

Her eyes widened as the lights were turned on. She slowly turned around, sweating, scared, worried.

Unknown Voice: Welcome Tanya...

Tanya: (shocked) Tum...

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Edited by Artii159 - 10 years ago

awesome update continue soon can't wait to see what happens to tanya update sooon