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Part - 40

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Shruthe - Tons of Thanks and 🤗 for this wonderful banner Dear.

Poem by @nishu regarding Geet's feeling
surat-e- haal ,
dil ka mere ,
main tujhe bayaan, kar nahi sakti !

woh koun si hai chah teri
jo phir se,mod degi raha teri
hai ruh betaab meri,
sun ne ko chah teri
main chalne ko shole pe
hu tayaar
agar ,isse mil jaaye mujhe
phir se tera dewaano sa pyaar
aakhiri saans ,bhi meri
na sun paaygi aah meri
karte hue puri chah teri

rok nahi sakti !
ab yeh duniya mujhe
main deewani hu teri
mera aaj aisa hona bhi
ik,
pyaar ki nishaani hai teri!

tu bol,ek baar
har jaayu main ye sansaar
tu dil main rahe
toh jinda hai hum
warna ,yeh saanse kho jaaye
nahi hai iska bhi gum
Thanks Nishu Dear

All the while one thing going on his mind - Will she be able to fulfill those simple wishes of him. If she can do that then according to him no power can break their tie no one can take her away from him ever. She badly and insanely loves him, he can see that in her each act and word but those two simple wishes of him will confirm her passion and determination to their relation.

When they reached his jeep, Geet was so lost and blushing, she was continuously looking down.

"Geet, you OK" Maan asked sincerely yet there was teasing in it.

"hmm" all lost Geet could utter. "then lets get in the vehicle"

Without realizing anything Geet got in the jeep and was about to sit when she realized she was sitting on driver's seat.

She immediately came into sense but was so embarrassed "aap bohut bure hoo"

As they reached the hotel room and Maan locked the room, it was first time in life she felt kind of physical tension with him around. The looks he has been giving her whole day and his sensual touched has stirred something in her.

But geet soon felt his hand on her wrist. He was behind her. She kept standing, her entire being shaking from the feel and then this closed room of hotel. Maan twisted her wrist but she kept standing and then there was sudden jerk and she landed on his chest.

"yeh kya ker rahen hain Chote Thakur" she whispered with heavy breath.

"Are you ready to fulfill my wishes" Unable to speak she just nodded her head for yes.

Maan made her sit on the bed and himself sat in front of her on the ground on his knees.

"Chote Thakur aap" He held her hand in his "shhh... let me speak and you listen care fully"

Geet smiled and nodded for yes. This was completely new softness she was seeing in him. He looked so much more youth.

"Geet" he continued "these are very simple wishes of mine, one is for you and one is for myself. I will start with the one in regards to you."

"You don't have to explain me anything Chote Thakur, You just put it as order."

"NO, I want you to do these from heart." "OK"

"Geet, my first wish is, you have to stand for yourself and your self respect in front of all including my family. I am always there to speak for you but I want you to stand for yourself and your self respect. Promise me that from now onwards, you will not let any one, especially people of my family, to harm your self respect. And doing this will not make you disrespect them but respect yourself. Promise me, from now on, you will not let anyone say or do anything to you for any reason and show you down"

He paused for a while as he was rubbing her hands with his "It hurts here when that happens" he sais pointing his finger at his heart.

Geet was quiet "Promise me Geet, promise me." Geet was realizing, it was not only matter of her self now but it pained him when anyone said anything to her and now she will not let anyone hurt him, especially for her. And she has promised to herself that there was no backing off now.

"I promise I will."

"Thank you, Thank you so much" There was spark of confidence in his eyes. He then sat down on bed near her and took her face between his palms

"The second promise is for me. Apne liye pehle baar kuch maang raha hoon tumse, pura karogee? "

"If you say so, can I ever say no." She had line of tears in her eyes seeing him plead with so much softness.

"Geet, this may seem silly to you but it will break this small thin wall between us, which is not letting you or me to completely open to our relation. Today I want you to break this invisible thin wall between us. Only after this wall breaks between us we will be able to discover and find a new level of passion to our relation"

Geet was confused "What thin wall Chote Thakur. I don't see any wall between us."

"There is a wall of respect. You respect me so much Geet that our love is getting buried in it. Please accept me more as your lover than anything else, Please Geet"

Geet was listening, his word were now again stirring her from within. There was so much passion in his words that she felt she will burn in it.

"From today onwards don't call me Chote Thakur, CALL ME MAAN."

Geet's eye widened. She had guessed all weird kind of wish from him whole day but she had never guessed this.

"How can this happen? " and Maan had different shine in his eyes "this will happen coz you promised me to fulfill my wish. Now goodnight I am off to bed."

With that he went to change and took the side of bed. But before dozing off "and yes, my ears are not working to hear Chote Thakur from now on" he gave her a naughty wink.

Geet just kept watching him with her open O shaped mouth. But Maan really dozed off.

Geet blushed remebring his naughty wink. Only the thought that she will call him Maan had brought something different in him. Something the feel of them being equal was giving him liberty.

Maan was dozing off but Geet was now left to think, she can't deny him and how can she fulfill it.

"Dushta kahin ke... how can I do this" she pouted seeing him sleeping in peace and leaving her all troubled. But there was no other option left for her...

Geet did not realize when she dozed off. But she also woke up early while Maan was sleeping in peace...

She looked up to her babaji and pouted "dekhiye tou babaji, meri neend chura ker kaise so rahen hain aaram se"

But then an idea struck her "he is sleeping, it nice time to practice it."

First she did not have courage to call him by name even when he was sleeping but then she gathered all courage. After all she have to do it, it was his weird wish.

She threaded her finger in his hair "Maan" came out for first time from her lips. She immediately placed her hand on her mouth.

But calling his name made her feel so closer to him; she traced her finger on his face "My Maan" and she giggled with shy and closed her eyes.

"how can I do this? " her heart was beating so fast, saying his name was not a simple thing for her. But it was his wish and the naughtiness and youngness that this wish had brought in him, how could she forget it.

He was sleeping and she could take some liberty. She smiled at her thought, bent down and kissed his forehead "Geet ke Maan"

She then kissed his eyes "Geet ke Maan" it felt so new and fresh. Only speaking his name out of her mouth made her feel her more right on him, it really felt so equal and she knew this is what he wanted.

She moved forward on his cheek and kissed it, her own cheeks turning red and broad smile on her face "Sirf Geet ke Maan".

And then her eyes moved and stopped on his lips. Geet's heart was beating fast with her own game. His lips were so close to hers. She kept looking at it and she could not stop admiring it, so beautifully shaped, she could feel her heartbeat with the bold imagination she was doing with them.. "Geet Jhalli, bas ker" she scolded herself in mind. But before she could realize she was in a suddenly on the bed and Maan on top of her.

"how long will you make me wait" Geet was nervous, confused and red. Her heart was already out of her control and now this

"Ji.. ji"

"Ji ji kya...everywhere kissing was so easy and why it took so long here" he said softly rubbing his lips on hers making her feel her heart will come out of her own self.

OMG he was awake all those while "Ji woo nahi" Geet struggled to get her hands free so that she can hide herself in them but in vein asit were in strong grip of Maan on either side of her head.

"Bolo na phir se, I wan to hear it again, see with my eyes open how your lips move while you say my name, how you blush while you say my name"

Geet turned her face in anger "choree choree chupke chupke sab sun rahe the. Embarrass ker diya mujhe"

Maan turned on bed and placed her on top of him, he was lying on bed and she on him

"What embarresing? It was so beautiful, phir se bolo na, please" he so cutely made a pleasing face. She had never imagined him so cute. Really this calling his name brought new him, like a big burden of difference and responsibility was shed off with it.

Geet closed her eyes, smiled and with blushing cheeks very softly said "Maan"

"aise nahi" he pulled her to him sending thousands volts in her body

"Continue from where you stopped, you were doing something, right? "

Geet hid herself in his chest and hit his bare chest. Ohh my... went in heart of both. It was heaven and none wanted to break it. After a while "Geet, bolo na" came his husky wisper, making her stick to him more.

But then after a while she looked up at him and to his surprise kissed his lips softly "Maan" She was smiling and looking at him and then bit her lips at her act...

"Uff ..." he turned her on bed and he came on her top

"You gonna kill me with these antics of yours" "shhh" she placed her finger on his lips

"don't ever say that" Maan looked at her playful self, uff he had no idea she could be such bold. "I never realized this side of yours" he said

Geet wrapped her hands around his neck "3 years, medical college and on top of it Bindas hostel"

"well I really have missed a lot. But lets see if my passion over takes you or you can surprise me more" Geet giggled filling the whole room with her sweet laughter. It was music to his ears.

"say it again" "Maan... Maan...mere Maan... sirf mere Maan" Geet said looking directly into his eyes "but why did you make me do this. Jaise meri aastha he todhwa di"

"See you did it" Maan boasted her "kerna pada, your wish is above all for me"

Maan again rolled her on top of him "you deserve a gift for it" Geet just smiled. Both had no idea in which world they were, both had lost their identity in each other, in the beauty and boldness of moment.

"these lips which made my name sound so beautiful deserve a gift" and with that he placed his lips on hers.

Slowly and slowly, they went on loosing. Sensually their lips parted and Maan made them roll on top and bottom in turns as their tongues explored the hotness inside. They were both burning of fire and clung to each other.

Whole day went in this lazy... Maan was enjoying his name ceremony and Geet could not miss this closeness of which she had just hopelessly dreamt all these years.

Next: In KM Maaneet, Dev and Family PART 41

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Edited by tellyme - 11 years ago
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Atlast geet broke the thin wall between them .
Maan over the moon
Geet getting to know her new maan

beautifully written

my head thinking of some weird wishes . but it was simple and sweet but little difficult for geet



Edited by mishtib - 11 years ago
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Haey me in Maaneet Dreamland:)
awesomly awesome update yar :)
loved it a lot :)
Edited by sona-rai - 11 years ago
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wow . lovely update. loved maan's wishes.

Edited by mannu_minnie - 11 years ago

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