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kaveriw2008

@kaveriw2008

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Posted: 11 years ago

#431

tumhe lob karna hai and mein na aau aisa kaise ho sakta hai

where is update

u said na ki sunday ko dungi

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@hunny1993

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Posted: 11 years ago

#432

hi guyz back with the nxt part .sry 4 keep waiting u guyz .par iss month meri bohot hi busy time chal raha hai .so update dene me late ho rahi hai .but nxt month se update regularly milega wo v new story k sath pakka .😊

PART-37

Ariya sleeping in each other arms peacefully .arjun after about 2 years sleeping peacefully like this .every night roshni's screaming buzzed in his ears .

But 2day he can sleeping peacefully bcoz of riya .riya is his wonderful dream of this painful life .she reduced his pain quite .but still arjun burying his some unfolded past which he never wants 2 open .

Sun rays fell on riya's face .it disturbed her sleep .she opened her eyes lazily .but when she found herself in arjun's arms a swt dimple smile crept on her face .he is .sleeping calmly just like a cute baby .his hair is mash up & most attractive sight he is out of shirt .his broad smooth chest is visible .it is enough 2 make riya blash remembering about the last night .it was the most beautiful night of her life .like every girl she also dreamt 4 a luving husband .and yes 2day her dream comes true .

Riya(pov):kitni ajeeb baat hai na arjun ...2 years pehle v hum dono ek dusre ko jante tak nehi the .bilkul aj nabi the .fir ek din achanak se hi do ajnabe ka takrar ho gayi (she remembered about their first meeting .she just smiled thinking about it).fir pata nehi kab iss ajnabee ki taraf khicha chala jaa rahi thi .unki dard se mujhe dard hone laga .unki ankahi bate jaise mein sunne lagi .fir uss din ...(remembering the bacteria incident) uss din uss hadse ne sab kuch badal di .mein to uss din hi apni akh band karne se pehle apni dil ki baat apse bolna chahti thi .par sab kuch akho ki samne ek daam sa dhundla ho gaya .fir mujhe kuch yaad nehi .uss waqt mujhe laga tha ki shayad mein dubara wapas nehi aa paungi .par bhagwan ko kuch aur hi manjur thi .unhone mujhe arjun se eke saal tak dur jarur rakhkha .par fir se mujhe unk zindegi me lautne ka mouka di .aur jo kahani uss din adhuri reh gayi thi wo aj pura ho gayi .aj meri mang me (remembering their marriage moment in mandir) apki num ki sindoor hai .gale me apki naam ki mangalsutra hai .apne sirf mujhe ek behtar officer hi nehi banayi mujhe pyaar karna v sikhayi .aj wada khudse ki mein hamesha apka sath dungi ,apki saya ban k rahungi .aur apki zindegi ko roushan kar dungi .apko aur ek bund dard v nehi hone dungi .

A tear drop fell 4m her eyes .but it is not the tear drop of sadness .it is the tear drop of happiness .suddenly she felt his hand touching her cheek wiping her tears .she raised her gaze & found he is awake .

Arjun :kya baat hai riya ???tumari akho me asu ...

Riya just nodded her head & gave a slight smile .

Arjun :agar kuch hai nehi to akho me asu kaisa ???

Riya :bas aise hi ...

Arjun :aise hi kissi ki akho me asu ati hai kya ??? koi problem hai ???mujse share nehi karoge ???

Riya :uffo arjun !!! ap har cheez negetively kyu lete ho .ye khushi kind asu hai .hamesha ye jaruri to nehi hota ki hum sirf dukhi hokar hi roye .khushi hokar v ro sakte hai ...ab sys ...

Arjun :samaj gayi .akhir tum samjhao aur meine samjhu aisa ho sakta hai ...waise riya aj ka subha badi hi beautiful hai ...hai na ???(in naughty way)😉

Riya got his intention very well .

Riya :ha so to hai .par ab mujhe uthna hai .uthkar ready hona hai .fir office v to jana hai .

Arjun (in sad tone):ye kya riya mein itni romantic mood me hu aur tum ho ki unromantic bate kar rahi ho ...

Riya :nehi arjun .balki mein to apki fav place ki baat kar rahi hu ...etf ki office .aur fir ap to mujhse v jyada punctual hai office me jane k liye .kyu ...😉

Arjun :ha .par soch raha hu ki rathod se aj hum dono ki chutti mang hi lu

Arjun smirked .riya blashingly hit arjun's chest .

Riya :ap v na arjun ...😳

Suddenly a telephone near the bed started ringing .

Arjun (irritatingly):ab ye subha subha kiska call aya .aur wo v iss telephone par ???ye firm house par to koi v nehi rehta ...

Riya :apko kaise pata ki yaha koi nehi rehta ...

Arjun :kyu ki ye rathod ka firm house hai

Riya :what !!!!😲

Arjun picked the phone .as usual rathod is in arjun's romance time .🤣

Rathod :ha rawte itna der kyu lagayi phone uthane me ???😉

Arjun :kyu mein kya koi call centre me kam karta hu jo tumare phone ane k sath sath mujhe receive karni padegi .aur waise v aisa time pe koi phone deta hai kya ???😡

Rathod :ha wo emergency hai .achanak se ek case aa gayi hai .so u both have 2 come quickly !!!

Arjun :rathod !!! i know u very well .ye prank tum pehle v kar chuki ho .

Rathod :shit !!!! mein vul kaise gayi ki teri aur roshni ki saadi ki pehli subha v meine yahi prank ki thi .waise uss time maza bohot ayi thi .tu to doudta doudta (runningly) office chala gaya tha .wo v sunday k din .🤣

Arjun :just shut up !!! ab agar apni bakwas khatam ho gayi ho to phone rakh .

Rathod:yr gussa kyu kar raha hai .achsa wo sab chod .meine actually ye batane k liye phone kiya hai ki tum chaho to aj ka din dono hi chutti le sakte ho .(changing his tone in serious)but aj thoda takleef kark aa jate to achsa hota .office me bohot important ek kaam hai .aur shayad tumara yaha par rehna jaruri hai .

Arjun :ek minute rathod .u r sounding so strangely .kya hua ???

Rathod :mein tumhe phone par nehi bata paunga .office me ane k baad tume khud ba khud pata chal jayega .ok mein phone rakhta hu .

Saying this rathod cut the call .

Arjun sensing something strange in rathod's voice .

Arjun (pov):ye rathod aise tarah se kyu baat kar raha tha .kya wajah hai jisk liye meri aj office me rehna jaruri hai ???😕

Riya (shaking him):arjun ...arjun ...

Arjun :ha .

Riya :kya baat hai ???ap kaha kho gaye ???kab se apko bula rahi hu .par ap to kahi aur khoye ho .kya kaha rathod sir ne ???

Arjun :wo riya ...chalo utho .jaldi se ready ho jao .hume office jana hai .

Riya :kya baat hai arjun .ap itne tensed kyu lag rahi ho ???koi case aya hai kya ???

Arjun :nehi .bas kuch important kam hai .aj office me jana jaruri hai .

Riya :ok .par mere kapde to dijiye .

Arjun :c'mon riya mein thodi hi tumari kapde pehenkar soya hu .

Riya :ohho !!! ap bhi na arjun .mere kapde apki side me hai .

Arjun :to aisa bolo na .

Arjun giving her dress

Riya :achsa arjun ek baat meri samaj me nehi ayi .apne kaha ki ye firm house rathod sir ki hai .kya ye baat apko yaha par ane se pehle pata tha ???

Arjun :tha .

Riya :fir apko jab wo phone call aya to apko jara si v doubt nehi hua tha ki ye ek prank v ho sakte hai ???

Arjun :kuch der k liye laga tha .fir jab tumari khayal ayi to sare doubts maan se nikal di .

Hearing this riya felt really bad .

Riya :arjun meri ek req manege ap

Arjun :kya riya ???

Riya :ap mujhe apna kamjori maat banayiye .manti hu ki apko meri fikar hai .par isk matlab ye nehi ki ap apne bare me puri tarik se vul jakar sirf meri bare me soche .i want u 2 b strong in all situation .plz arjun rakhenge na ap meri ye req ???

Arjun could understand what is bothering riya .yes ,she is also right .this time he can't make his luv his weakness .

Arjun (touching her cheek):i promise u riya .mein hum dono ki pyaar ko kav kamzor i nehi banne dungi .balki hamesha usse apna strength banak rakhungi .par tumhe v mujhsr wada karna hoga ki tum v meri khatir hamesha apna khayal rakhogi .

Riya :wada .

Riya hugged arjun & he also hugged her back .

Riya :i luv u arjun .

Arjun (kissing on her 4head):i luv u too riya .😊

in etf office

Chotu was sitting with sad face .shree watching videos & photos of ariya's marriage .

Shree :chotu dekh riya iss photo pe kitni beautiful lag rahi hai .

But chotu was lost somewhere else .

Shree :chotu ...

he shaked chotu .chotu came out his thought .

Chotu :kya hai ???

Shree :kya hai ye to mujhe puchna chahiye .kis soch me khoyi hai .kabse tujhe bula rahi hu .jawab hi nehi de raha hai .

Chotu :ha wo ...

Shree :kya baat hai chotu ???kal raat se hi tu bade ajeeb behave kar raha hai .kya hua ???

Chotu :yr meib soch raha tha ki mein na firse apni wo 11.30 wali k sath chalu ho jati hu .

Shree :par kyu ??? I mean tujhe to ankita pasand tha na ...

Chotu :nehi re .wo mera type ka nehi hai .

Shree :chotu mujhe aisa kyu lag raha hai ki ...ankita arjun sir ki behen hai issi baat se tujhe dikkat hai .

Chotu :ha yr .wo arjun sir ki ek lauti behen hai .aur arjun sir ko agar pata chala ki mein unki behen ko pasand karta hu to wo mujhe kachcha hi kha jayegi .nehi nehi ...behtar yahi hoga ki mein usse dur hi rahu .

Shree :chotu tu arjun sir se itna darta kyu hai ...aur fir wo itna v bura nehi hai .wo hum logo ko danta jarur hai par hum logose naraz kav nehi hota .aur iss waqt ye problem ye nehi hai ki arjun sir kya sochenge .ye janna jaruri hai ki ankita k maan me kya hai ???

Chotu :yr iss jagah pe v problem hai ...ankita baki ladkiyo ki tarah nehi hai .usse samaj na meri tarah "gobar" dimag wala insaan ki liye to namumkin hai .

Shree :ha ye to tune bilkul sahi bola hai 🤣

Suddenly sakshi ,ankita & liza entered in the room .so choree stoped their topic .girls wished them gd morning & they also wished them back .

Liza :hey speeky tumari akho ki niche aise blacksheds kyu pad gayi hai ???

Shree remembered the last night incident .he couldn't sleep bcoz of chotu .but at this moment his anger is 2wards liza .bcoz of this word "speeky"

Shree :waise "lizard" aj kal tum subhe subhe tum meri akhe dekhna suru ki hai kya .

Liza :don't call me lizard !!!😡

Shree :kyu !!! jab tum mujhe "speeky" bulate ho tab ye khayal nehi ati !!!😡

Liza :nop !!! bcoz u r speeky .

Shree :then u r "lizard"

Liza :just shut up u "donky "!!!😡

Shree :oye chup kar "chudail"!!!😡

now both started their cat fight .sakshi wanted 2 stop them .but ankita stop her .

Ankita :hey sakshi ruko na ...dekho subha subha itna achsa entertainment ho rahi hai .plz ...mujhe dekhne do ...

Sakshi :what !!!!😕

In the mean time rathod entered with ayesha .seeing sheerza fight he bcam angry .

Rathod (shouted):kya ho raha hai yaha !!!!😡

Hearing his voice everyone sis stilled at their position not uttering a single word .

Sakshi 2 ankita

Sakshi :lo ab aur ek drama hogi ...

Rathod (looking 2wards sheerza):tum dono ko itna mana karne k wajud v apne harkat se baj nehi aoge .ap to tum dono ko punishment dene hi padenge .

Ayesha :punishment ???😕

Rathod :ha punishment .aur punishment ye hai ki aj adhe din shree liza ko lab me help karegi aur baku adhe din liza shree ko technical lab me help karegi .and that's my order !!!

Shree & liza couldn't believe their ears .it is better if rathod gave them transfer punishment .but staying with each other full day is near 2 death .but they couldn't protest .poor they r 😆

Same time ariya also entered .

Arjun :kya baat hai rathod subha subha in bechare pe chilla kyu rahe ho ???

Rathod (turning 2 arjun):bechara aur ye dono !!! subha subha office ko saar pe utha li hai ...
Waise tum batao kaisa tha sab kuch ???😉

Arjun-riya both started coughing 2gether hearing the embaraceful question .seeing them everyone chuckled .

In the same time they heard a voice 4m door .all turned 2wards the direction & found akash is standing there .

Akash (walking into room):gd morning every1

Seeing him sakshi slightly blashed .but it was not escaped 4m ankita's eyes .she pinched her playfully .sakshi just show her a fake anger .(but maan me to laddu hi phut raha hai na ...😉)

Arjun (with stern voice):tum yaha subha subha ???

B4 akash could answer rathod answered him .

Rathod :akash aj se hamare sath kam karegi .

Arjun :what ???😕

2 b continue ...

PRECAP : truth bhind the past ...

Guyz ,i have a very high fever .i wanted 2 write more .but my health didn't permit me .really sry .
Plz leave ur opinions .don't forget 2 hit the like button.thank u .

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@hunny1993

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Posted: 11 years ago

#433

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008
tumhe lob karna hai and mein na aau aisa kaise ho sakta hai

where is update

u said na ki sunday ko dungi

Lo de di 😆

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Anika_VR

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Posted: 11 years ago

#434

*unres*
awesome blowsome update.
Loved it a lot.
Start was beautiful...
Ariya moments were beautiful.
So,Akash is joining ETF.
Arjun and Sameer bhai worried and thinking about some past.
Sakshi happy to see Akash back.
Precap is interesting.
Continue sooonish... :)
thanks for the pm.

Edited by zebbie0504 - 11 years ago

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kaveriw2008

@kaveriw2008

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Posted: 11 years ago

#435

ariya ka romantic moment is always make me speechless...but the way riya told arjun to keep her as his straight not as his weakness is so cute

and here come the very famous kabab mein haddi of ariya...RATHORE

lol he played the same prank on ariya which he played on arni...

bechara chotu usane to har man li ...arjun ke behen matlab arjun se direct panga...

lekin shreeza is always awesome entertainment for etf

poor both got punishment to spent entire day with eachother ...lol ab kya hoga

hunny iss bat tu bach gayi...nahi to i love to lobb you

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abhya/akanksha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#436

Originally posted by: hunny1993

kaunsa update anku ???? 😛

Hunny kyon pitney waaley kam kar rahi hai...??????

Wrote nxt part which u asked last night n thought to send it to u today but not anymore...

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@hunny1993

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Posted: 11 years ago

#437

Originally posted by: Aks13

</div>Hunny kyon pitney waaley kam kar rahi hai...??????
<div>Wrote nxt part which u asked last nightn thought to send it to u today but not anymore...😡

Ha ha update mil gayi .ab to meri demand ka tere pas koi mol hi nehi .meri futi kismat !!!! 😭

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@hunny1993

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Posted: 11 years ago

#438

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008
ariya ka romantic moment is always make me speechless...but the way riya told arjun to keep her as his straight not as his weakness is so cute

and here come the very famous kabab mein haddi of ariya...RATHORE

lol he played the same prank on ariya which he played on arni...

bechara chotu usane to har man li ...arjun ke behen matlab arjun se direct panga...

lekin shreeza is always awesome entertainment for etf

poor both got punishment to spent entire day with eachother ...lol ab kya hoga

hunny iss bat tu bach gayi...nahi to i love to lobb you

I always luvd 2 b lobbed by u 😳

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abhya/akanksha

@Aks13

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Posted: 11 years ago

#439

Captivating update dr...!!!!!

Riya's POV was beautifully written...!!!!!

Ariya moments were cute n romantic until that Sam disturbedthm...!!!!

Sam tried to tricked him by is same old idea but couldn't succeeded this time...!!!!!

Loved the promises they made to eachother...!!!

OMG poor Chotu seemed so much scared of Arjun...!!!!!

Loved Shree n Liza's nok-jhok...!!!!

Wow Rathod saw thm like that n punished thm both to help eachother...!!!! I hope that thy won't kill eachother...!!!!!

Awww Rathod's cheeky ques made Ariya embarrassed...!!!!!

Wow Akash is joining ETF...that's great...!!!!! It will be exciting to see Arjun's reaction on this...!!!!!!

Precap looks interesting...!!!!

Loved it...!!!! Continue asap...!!!!!!

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@Aks13

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Posted: 11 years ago

#440

Originally posted by: hunny1993

Ha ha update mil gayi .ab to meri demand ka tere pas koi mol hi nehi .meri futi kismat !!!! 😭

Seriously yaar thought to gv it to u today in the morning but my nephew came n was not ready to leave me even for a moment... spend the whole day with him... sorry will surely send u the nxt update asap n also penned down something else... will also send it to u to knw ur views...😃