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akila_arshi

@akila_arshi

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

nice concept ..
waiting for the next part...

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palaayan

@palaayan

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

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ameena671

@ameena671

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

wow amazing start loved it thank you for pm.

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Izza

@memories_im

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

really nicee.. please do pm me when u update :)

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ShikhaKhushi

@ShikhaKhushi

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

It was so beautiful I cried... =') Thanks for the beauty, Mannoji! <3

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msmarple

@msmarple

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Wonderful start.

Your insomnia is good for us readers but probably not so good for your health dear. Take Care😊

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ShikhaKhushi

@ShikhaKhushi

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

resss phar da nxt =P

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Why so short????😆

Khushi's past is so painful. She really was not to be blamed but I guess I can try to understand Shashi too...

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rati123

@rati123

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Really interesting and emotional story !

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

It's always interesting to read when someone gives a makeover to Arnav's character. Really enjoyed this new angle which you gave him.

Strange to see him so out of control and helpless. But it gave the story a new flavor and made it unique.

Seems like both have them have suffered from basically the same thing and this will bind them.

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ayushma

@aycma98

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#40

Ah! New story! I loved that you brought such a contrast to Arnav's personality that we've seen on shows. Yes, he has been going through the trouble of losing his parents, he tend to lose himself in alcohol, whereas in the show he tend to diverge his mind at work. This is a beautiful setting, and I loved that Khushi used her painful past as a stepping stone for her future. Loved it.