OS : JODHA BANI MEERA: PART 4 Page 25 updated Feb 10th - Page 13

beautifully written👏👏 but please dont give my jallu baby anymore pain

Originally posted by: yurimehta11

wow di whatever you write you write awesome everything is perfectly painful but jodha jaldi forgive kar dena jalal ko.he realise his mistake he is repenting so .and plz next part jaldi dena

My dear Yuri... What is your name? I am glad you like this part... soon i will update next part..😃

Originally posted by: JAN_SA

beautifully written👏👏 but please dont give my jallu baby anymore pain

Me Jallu baby ko kaise pain de sakti hu? Thank u😃

AWESOME UPDATE! Whenever you write it's nothing short of AMAZING, and this was definitely it. Very nicely written, loved it, pleas update soon. Thank you so much!!!

Awww the way you describe small little things❤️
I loved it too Bits.
I so so so loved it 😳

You were awesome. 👏 👏 ⭐️

update de do d...kitne din ho gye. kuch update nhi kiya.

Recap: She recall entire court scene...and made her face bitter... He has punished me to leave Agra... He didn't want to see my face ever... why he is showing concern now... She hastily pull her hand from him and turn her face away from him... and cover her face with quilt and close her eyes... her own behavior gave her sting... it was painful for her to ignore him... unwanted tears rolled out from her eyes... Jalal was shatter and broken with her ignorance... He felt helpless and had no courage to call her again... Everyone witness Jodha's ignorance including Hamida, Salima, Moti, Ruku and Hakim... Jalal with shamefully expression looked at everyone around... His guilt was clearly showing on his expression.

Part 3:

Jodha had tears in her eyes... her own sudden reaction gave her immense sting... Her eyes were close... and her mind suddenly filled with many questions and thoughts... she could feel his guilt on his face; he looked so vulnerable, pale with swollen eyes... I have never seen him in this dreadful condition. Did he cry for me? Why his eyes have enormous guiltiness? Why I have tears? Why I am feeling his pain?

Jalal with guilt and watery eyes looked at her one more time... then got up and walked out of the room towards her room balcony... Her ignorance was painful for him... but he was feeling immense peace inside... his heart filled with satisfied feeling of her survival... Pain of her ignorance was so small compare to her survival happiness... He is standing in the balcony, looking at the sky... cold wind was giving him coolness feelings... he felt peace after big life threatening war of his life... he enjoyed early morning bird chirping sound... His eyes still wants to pour out in happiness... he had feeling of screaming out load to world... He sensed in one night his soul renewed... everything change. He closed his eyes again to see her in divine face... smile came on his face with calm and peace...

Hamida remove slowly quilt from her face... saw tears and pain on her face... She caress on her forehead and said... Jodha begum, how are you feeling beta ...

Hamida banno helped her Jodha to sit on the bed with support for her back...

Jodha with smile hold hamida banoo's hand then responds; Ammi Jaan, I am feeling much better. She looked at her with intense love... and said Ammi Jaan... Hume laga tha ki, hum aapse kabhi nahi mil payenge... Her voice sounded very weak... (Ammi Jaan, I thought I will never be able to see you again...)

Hamida with love gave her hug said... Jab tak Jalal hai... tume kuch nahi ho sakta... Hum sab ne ummid chod di thi... Uski duao se aaj tum humse baat kar rahi ho... Humne kabhi Jalal ko kisi begum ke liye rote hue nahi dekha... Uska dard koi nahi samaj sakta... Aaj tume kuch ho jata to yakkinan hum Jalal kho bhi ko dete...

(Hamida banno gave her hug and said...Nothing can happen to you till Jalal is their... We all lost hope of your survival but you are here only because of Jalal's prayers, hope, trust and love for you. I have never seen him this much vulnerable... He had never shown this much concern for any of his begum... His tears were constantly flooding out without any sob... No one can understand what he has gone through... His trust has brought you back from the door of the death...I know only one thing... If you would have died...he would have died with you...)

Jodha was surprise to hear these big words from Hamida banno... her lips sealed and suddenly little pleasant smile came on her face with tears. Without asking anyone she got answer to everything.

Hamida continue; Jodha beta... Hum aapke shrukra gujar hai... Appne apni Jaan ki parva na karte huye Jalal ki Jaan bachai hai... Aaj aap ne apne aap ko sabse upar kar dikhaya hai... tumari pakizzgi, Ni swarth apnapan ne aaj puri aawam ka dil jit liya hai...

(I am very much thankful to you... You have saved Jalal life and sacrifice yours... You have proved that you are the best in all... your purity, selfless nature, brought respect in entire Agra people... You have won heart of entire AWWAM...)

Jodha with respect said; Ammi Jaan ye hamara kartvaya tha... Is me aabhar vyakst karne ki koi aavshykta nahi hai... (Ammi Jaan, Please don't thank me... This is my responsibility as a wife)

Hamida added with smile; do you know Jodha... You are so fortunate to have friend like Moti... Today she was not afraid to scold Jalal for your sack... She was so much in worried... she didn't fear for her own life... she stand straight in front of Shenshah e Hindustan with all her strength at that time She only knew that your life is in danger... She truly loves you...

Jodha with pleasant smile and with proud looked at Moti... Moti had tears in her eyes... Her happiness was clearly showing in her face...

Salima came and sit next to Hamida banoo and said... Jodha you have proved that you are brave Rajput princess of Amer... and you deserve to be a begum of Mugal saltnat... I have no word to express my gratitude... She folds her hands towards Jodha with tears and respect in her eyes and said Thank u for saving Shenshah... but I like to add that you are survive just because of the Shenshah's prayer for you... He did prayer and lite diya in front of Kanah... He requested entire Awwam to pray for your survival...Entire night his eyes was flooding with tears... I have never seen him this much vulnerable. Jodha was stunned to hear Jalal did prayer to Kanah for her survival... Suddenly a respectful smile came on her face... Salima begum and Jodha both looked at each other with love and with cheerful feeling of their successful mission hug for long.

Jodha was feeling very weak... her entire body was feeling pain and had sudden urge to drink water... She requested for water but hakim said Jodha begum you will have to wait for another hour to drink water... till that time you need lay down and relax... Her eyes were looking for Jalal but couldn't say anything then with little disappointment she lay down on the bed... There was lot of people wanted to see Jodha but Hakim told everyone give few hours, she needed to rest.

Everyone left room other than Hakim... Jodha close her eyes and tried to relax but she was lost in Jalal's thoughts... she was touched by his concern ... her heart filled with contentment... Suddenly her contentment change with sting... something was bothering her... she saw again His dreadful face with immense guilt... brought tears in her eyes again... Hakim got worried seeing tears in her eyes in sleep... She thought she is going through unbearable pain... She almost yells... Jodha begum... Jalal was still standing in Jodha's room balcony... he heard Hakim's worried voice ...His heart stop beating for a second...he ran inside to see Jodha with shock and worry... He saw Hakim checking her pulse... he stand next to her... Jodha is in deep sleep... Hakim whisper to Jalal... She is doing fine but looks like she is in pain and because of that she is crying in her sleep... Jalal with very low and soft voice told Hakim that you have not taken rest for entire night... Please take rest in guest room for a while; I am going to sit next to Jodha begum. Hakim left leaving this loving couple alone and instruct outside everyone not to disturb Jodha begum for another hour.

Jalal is looking at her with love... He wiped her tears and caresses her face... and kissed very softly on her forehead and covered her with quilt... His soft touch wakes her up... She sensed his proximity near him. Her heart was pumping fast... She slowly opened her eyes and saw him sitting next to her with genuine concern and care for her... They both looked at each other with different feelings... Jalal's eyes were full of guilt and Jodha's eyes had full of love... Jalal remembered her ignorance... he had no courage left to face her hatred for him... he got up from there to leave and turn but before he makes his move... Jodha hold his hand... he felt shiver in entire body... he looked back at her... Jodha's tears rolled out again...She wanted him to sit next to her... he understood her unspoken words... without saying a word he sat next to her...It was complete silence in the room... It was awkward silence between them... Their hearts were beating fast... didn't know where to start from... Jodha was still holding his hand... then he went very close to her face... and wait a little... Jodha was stunned with his nearness... he softly wiped her tears again and asked her in low voice how are you feeling Jodha begum.

She was confused with her own feelings... She was longing for his care and nearness from him but at the same time, she was feeling uncomfortable with his sudden approach. Suddenly she felt hesitant in laying on the bed in front of him... She tried to get up by herself... but she was so weak... she was struggling... Jalal again went very near her and gave her support to sit on the bed... Her body trembles with his closeness... She tried to hide her blush and act normal... but Jalal figured it out... and finally a little smirk came on his face... He asked her again... How are you feeling Jodha begum... She responded with low tone; better than before... She was feeling very thirsty... Jug of water and glass was little far from her... She requested Jalal, can you please call Moti... I want to drink water... Jalal got up and got glass of water and instead of giving her glass he brought glass near her mouth and she drank water they both are looking at each other...

After drinking water she felt much better... She smiled at him and said thank u... Jalal came back sat on the same bed very close to her... Jodha could see his confusion...he was searching for words... where to start... She knew he wanted to apologies... Finally Jalal gathered strength with proud and respectfully said Jodha begum...humare paas koi labz nahi hai... aapki kurbani ke samne shukriya ka koi vajood nahii... Hum aapka shukriya ada kar aapki tohin nahi karenge. (I have no words for what you have done for me... You put your life in danger to save mine...I do not want to thank u for this... Thank u is very small towards your great sacrifice.) Suddenly his voice started tremble... And continue with Jab aap Jindgi aur Maut ki Jung se larh rahi thi tab hame ye ehsaas hua... ki aap ke bina hamara koi vajood nahi... Hamari Zindgi aapke bina ... He realized what he was saying he stopped and looked at Jodha with intense look...(when you were fighting between life and death... that time i realized that... without you my life has no meaning to it...without you ...)

Jodha was looking at Jalal's blush on his face... with teasing sound asked him... Shenshah... aap kya keh rahe the... Hamari Zindigi appke bina... Hum kuch samje nahi.. (Shenshah, What you are saying... that with out me your life...what...I didn't understood can you explain...) and she smirk at him... She was enjoying Jalal's blush... She had seen all expression on his face but this is first time he look shy...

To change their conversation Jalal advice Jodha begum, you need to take rest...Jyada baat karna aapki shehet ke liye accha nahi... Ab aap aaram farmaiye hum aapse baat mulakat karenge...(you need to relax and rest... you shouldn't be talking much it will give you lot of strain) Jalal could not look in her eyes straight ... he was feeling shy and guilt at the same time... Suddenly he felt he will have tears in his eyes and it was impossible for him to control his emotions... last entire night has change Jalal entirely... His heart stared to beat again... He still couldn't apologies for not trusting her and his extreme rude behavior. To hide his emotion he got up without looking her and turns away face from her... Jodha swiftly grab his hand again before he walked out... She knew his guilt is killing him inside... she couldn't bear his pain...

Jalal again with surprised and tremble with her touch... His eyes were wet... He still not looking at her... his words were chocking... his sobs was stuck in his thought... with heavy voice he said... hame abhi Jane dijye...

Jodha with tears in her eyes... Shenshah, hum bhi aaram karna chate hai... hame pata he jab tak aap hamare paas hai ham surkshit hai... hume kuch nahi ho sakta... (Shenshah, I want to relax and rest...but your presence gives me assurance that as long as you are near me nothing will happens to me)

Jalal with intense emotions and tears looked back at Jodha...

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I have written this chapter in very much Rush and sorry for this chotu chapter...next one i will try to make it long one... Please ignore grammar and spell errors... I will modify it soon

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