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@jas0308

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

wow.. such a cute and loving gift for uthra di and my kuku

loved the os

loved the little flashbacks... and khushi missing arnav!

hayee, their fark padta hai.. mujhe bhi farak padta, hai ❤️.. but merese kissi ko nahi farak padta, tujhe samjh aaya maine kya kaha, coz mujeh nahi aaya 😕

nicely written

PS: I am angry on you, you never pm me or scrap me or tell me about you os's.. katti, mai tujhe dee 😔

Edited by jas0308 - 11 years ago

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YaSha0512

@YaSha0512

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Omg such a lovely OS
Loved how Arnav was the first to confess
N how she realized her feelings for him in his absence
Then way she had flashbacks everything reminding her of him
he way he made her confess was brilliant
N his reaction brought a smile to my face
Anyways loved it thanks for pm n plz keep em Comin

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Sana Sultana

@sana11

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

beautiful 😃 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

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Amanram

@Amanram

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

what a totally adorable OS!

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

beautiful os deeps⭐️⭐️

lovedd itt very much😊

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aashi12

@aashi12

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

DD! Ab hum tumse kya kahen?

This OS! Was beautiful!
To jitni pyaari hai, usse bhi double pyara!

The feelings, the love, it comes on the way.
Knowing each other, spending time with each other, sharing lives with each other. . Makes you know the person around you better!
With each thought of Khushi's, each memory she had of Arnav at those specific places, made her realise her feelings bit by bit.

From claasroom till park. He was all around. Him not telling her bugged her. His absence hurt her. She wasn't herself when she was away from him.

Around him, she felt shy, blushing and happy. - Haan tujhe pyaar hai!

And at last, when Arnav came! OMG! That was really cute! Especially the IPK dialogues that you've incorporated beautifully!

I Farak you yaara! ;)
❤️

Vibha ki to lottery lag gayi. Arnav ki dost. Uthra di as Khushi's mummy! ;)