ArHi TS: Perceptions. *Part 2. Pg 25* (Completed)

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Deepa jha

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Let's not spam. People won't like the attention this thread is getting and may get it closed😃

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RasgullaSP

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Removed.

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The note in the signature kinda stays true even now.

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arshifan91

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Posted: 11 years ago

#153

Res 😃

~~~~~~Unres~~~~~~~

First thanks a ton !!! I was just rambling something to u in one of my comments about a first res , now see what u have done !!! I never thought u would take it so strongly and make it a point in fulfilling it !!! So thanks for your commitment , dedication and the love u showered on me 😊

Now its the time to say sorry for 2 things !!

a) for the late unresing

b) for troubling u with the posting of part 2 because of my hindsight !!

So now coming back to the story , I know u are a queen of surprises and all your stories have provided ample amounts of it but this is something which I had never imagined !!! You have totally changed their background as compared to the show but retained the essence of the characters 😃 a selfless yet strong and independent Khushi , a complex Arnav with insecurities and behavioral eccentricities !!

You have brilliantly portrayed the mindset and the thoughts of a middle class lad who is insecured about his position and love in the eyes of his wife and the expectations she might have with respect to the comfort and life style and his inability to satisfy the same and the adjustments she need to make to lead a life !!

But anth bhala tho sab bhala !! So she finally made her decision to pour out her heart to him and solve the issue and he made his decision to let her know about his feelings towards her and the reason for the indifference in his behavior . And what we got as a result of their confession was a teasing and a naughty Arnav 😉 and a bold and playful Khushi and more than a puchak kiss 😛😳 inspite of an almost kiss which was earlier eventually disturbed by NK and not Aman !! 😆

The conversation between them was so touching and was simple but sweet😃 her questions and his answers !! Straight forward , clear and connected a chord with my heart !!

Thanks for writing , sharing and fulfilling the promises to your readers 😊 Tu der aaye par durust aaye in writing and wishing them on their birthdays !! 😳

PS: Dee , the banner is really beautiful !!! 😃

Edited by arshifan91 - 11 years ago

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Deepa jha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#154

Dee!

Edited!

Since I've already read and told my view on it, I am gonna post quotes :D

"I love you without knowing how, or when, or from where. I love you simply, without problems or pride: I love you in this way because I do not know any other way of loving but this, in which there is no I or you, so intimate that your hand upon my chest is my hand, so intimate that when I fall asleep your eyes close."
Pablo Neruda, 100 Love Sonnets

"Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind,
And therefore is winged Cupid painted blind."
William Shakespeare, A Midsummer Night's Dream

"So it's not gonna be easy. It's going to be really hard; we're gonna have to work at this everyday, but I want to do that because I want you. I want all of you, forever, everyday. You and me... everyday."
Nicholas Sparks, The Notebook

"We love the things we love for what they are."
Robert Frost

"We fell in love, despite our differences, and once we did, something rare and beautiful was created. For me, love like that has only happened once, and that's why every minute we spent together has been seared in my memory. I'll never forget a single moment of it."
Nicholas Sparks, The Notebook

(I seriously felt khushi wanted to say this. Mr. Darcy ❤️)
"In vain have I struggled. It will not do. My feelings will not be repressed. You must allow me to tell you how ardently I admire and love you."
Jane Austen, Pride And Prejudice

"No relationship is perfect, ever. There are always some ways you have to bend, to compromise, to give something up in order to gain something greater...The love we have for each other is bigger than these small differences. And that's the key. It's like a big pie chart, and the love in a relationship has to be the biggest piece. Love can make up for a lot."
Sarah Dessen, This Lullaby

Enjoy reading these!😛

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Pooja agarwal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#155

Res :)

Bhaaat was dat 😲...

I mean. I was hell cnfused bfr.. Bt later padhte padhte sab samjh ana laga humka 😳

Bt u do have d way to make everythng curious wile reading dnt u 😉

I liked d fact.. Dat a father choosed a boy seeing his nature nt d bank balance.. 👏

He did every monopoly to make arnav his son-in-law..

He was greeedy for his daughter happiness wich isnt wrng in anyway

Bt u r evil.. 😡 U made another almost kiss 😕.

Wrgn tyming NK dude 😡

He never touched her 😲 bcz he thought he wasnt worthy enough to her 😡

Urrgghh didnt he see his fathe choosed him of all d boys ...Damnit . !!

I loved d question khushi kept frwrd..

I felt bad wen arnav didnt take her to lucknow for his sis marriage

I loved how she was asking her right to be a wife

I loved how she said she is his wife nd wil be happy wid watever he provides

I loved how easily she opened her heart to d man she loves unconditionally..

P.S I loved dis TS ❤️

P.P.S I love u more for giving dis TS 🤗

P.P.P.S I dnt want promise frm u 😃Bcz if u wil be ready u wil surely give ur readers wat dey demand..😳

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vandana.sagar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#156

Re read only as Farah helped with it...so how could I not...

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vgedin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#157

Main bhi 😃

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Accha buddhu banaya tune!

I knew you had something up your sleeve but I couldn't have guessed this! (kudos to those who did)

But, I loved the story, especially Khushi's character. Arnav's insecurities though justified did get on my nerves once they were married. But since he does love her, I won't complain 😊

But this Khushi totally stole the show. With her love and her strength and her will. 😃

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nishu_shorna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#158

Saiyu...my WiFi got disconnected and I had to leave after reading only 3 lines yesterday...let me tell you the effect of only those 3 lines on my tiny little brain...
ArHi background sounds so different...she from rich and he from middle class background...so I was right, its a different story...or may be not...Saiyu must be taking about Anjali-Shyam...she was trying to make us fool...but she isnt one who would write directly on the show...or may b I was wrong, she indeed wrote on shows background...but there was no mention of Shyam in previous chappy...it has to be ArHi...God, I have never missed my internet connection more than last night...ever...
anyways, my initial assumption turned out to be right...its actually them...ArHi...
well Saiyu...its actually different...specially after reading the first part, I never expected this...then again, when have u given us what we thought...so yeh toh hona hi tha...a BIG twist...and a plesant surprise once again...
now I get why was she counting daily expenses, why he thought she was faking it all, how he married her for his sis, and everything...
come to the beginning...Arnav's fallen for her unknowingly, despite all rational thoughts, at first sight...and Khushi too was...both of them were way too affected by each other...
and Shashi, I think both her parents, too wanted him to be their Son-In-Law from the beginning...liked the way Shashi acted as a cupid to make them cross their paths again and again...
and Arnav, his mind couldnt stop his heart naa...upar se roj Khushi se milnaa, time spend karna, may that be for professional reason...and Khushi, wanting to be noticed by him...even got the glimpse of his love or care, whatever that might be...
but again and again the reality, the reminder of financial difference was holding him back...he had to run away...he had to stop his heart...
and the marriage between them...how he agreed to Shashi's deal, but never took any facilities for his own, his only concern was his sister, and its not wrong to be a little bit selfish for your loved one's happiness...its natural only...
loved how he decided to let Khushi face the reality first, then decide what she wants in her life ahead...but once he noticed the small drop in her face, and came to conclusion that he can never give her what she deserves...his already decided brain was showing him only what he thought of seeing...didnt let him know what she actually wants...
Saiyu, I fall in love with their conversation...its amazingly written...
Khushi is really a wise girl...no, not girl, a mature woman I will say...how she questioned him, not accusing him for once, only trying to make him open up...
And Arnav...how he decided to answer her honestly, coz he cant see her heart-break, how he heard all her unvoiced question, how he kept his bare heart in front of him, how he confess...
all of this is sooo beautiful...so amazing...cant tell u how many times my heart skipped a few beats...
and the ending...its worth all your effort Saiyu...it can never be any better...this is THE BEST...loved it so much...they way they start their happily ever after...AWESOME...

my dear Saiyada Patel (thats what your name is, right?) u once again made me confused, which is my favorite OS or TS of yours...I love them all, but cant decide which I love most...from today, "Perceptions" is added with "Naming Her" and "To Reach Home" in my most fav list...it sound so silly...3 "most favorite"...lekin main kya karoon...yeh sab aapki gaalti hain ji...
and I am gonna read it thousands more times and will be back again and again...be prepared darling...

Edited by nishu_shorna - 11 years ago

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Uthra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#159

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AAARGH !!!! How did I not see that coming? How could I ever forget that the sisters love role reversal?!!

I loved both of them equally. No partiality towards Arnav, like I always feel. Khushi has so much of strength to her character, while Arnav has sense of righteousness.

Loved it !! Except for the fact that tumne mujhe ullu bana diya !!😔

Edited by Viji79 - 11 years ago