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My version of SwaRon scene tonight. It's crap but I feel it's something better than what was shown 😕


"Leave me you jerk!" she screached on the top of her voice. But there was no one to listen to her. The room was locked behind her and this huge monster was advancing towards her to fulfill his lusty desires. She never had been so scared in her life till date! Yes, she was a strong and a modern girl who stands up for what is right and opposes what is wrong but experiencing such horrid stuff was really scary. She shouted for help hoping someone would save her from this mess. There was no one around. Everyone were busy in the marriage procession. She constantly pushed him as he came closer shouting out loud. "No Sharon! You are alone! No one is coming to help you!! Do something.. Do something" she talked to herself and kicked him in the place which hurts the most. He growled in pain as his hold on her loosened. She immediately grabbed the steel jug she found and banged him hard on the head. He fell on his knees and without wasting a second she grabbed the camera and opened the door. She immediately locked the door behind her and ran far away from that place just as she bumped into someone.

He sensed she was in danger and hence decided to follow her to Alok's place but was held on by his friends. Somehow he managed to escape from there and rushed towards Alok's place only to notice Sharon running towards him with the camera and looking behind as if someone was chasing her. As soon as she bumped into him he noticed she was panting with drops of sweat on her forehead. Her eyes showed how scared she was, yet there was a sense of achievement in them. She looked up at him. There was care, concern and love in those eyes. She couldn't hide her emotions anymore and started sobbing bitterly. "Sharon ssshh.. Stop it" he said as he wrapped his protective arms around her and rubbed her back assuring her he's there. She just cuddled herself and sobbed as she kept mumbling "he.. that Alok.. Swayam.. ".

Swayam understood the situation and mentally slapped himself for letting her go alone with that jerk. As she calmed down she realized what she has done. She fell weak in front of Swayam which she shouldn't have. She immediately let go of his shirt which she almost crumpled and wiped her tears. "Let's go Swayam. We need to stop the wedding" she said and started walking from there. "Sharon wait!" he said in a stern voice. He knew she was doing it deliberately, just hiding her feelings. Hell he knew her even better than her! She was not in the right state of mind and he wanted to punch Alok for trying to even touch her. Anger and pain swelled up and he held her hand and walked towards Alok's place. "Swayam wait! What are you doing? Why are we going there again?! Stop" she said as she tried to loosen his grip but he was adamant. They entered Alok's house and Swayam started searching for the kitchen. "Stay right here Sharon!" he said as he frantically started searching for something in the kitchen. He could hear Alok banging the door from inside. He grabbed the tin of red chilly powder and handed it over to Sharon. "I'll open the door and you know what to do". "But Swayam! We can just escape. Why all this? Let's go!" she insisted. "Do as I say Sharon!" he said and opened the door. Sharon stood there trembling and as soon as the door opened she mastered courage and threw the red chilly powder on his face! As Alok was trying to clear his eyes Swayam took the wooden rod he found and hit him hard. He handed over the rod to Sharon. Initially she was shocked but then recollected what she was subjected to and gave him left and right. Even the painful screeches of Alok couldn't stop her as she let out her anger and frustration on him.

Once she was done, she threw the rod down and took deep breaths as her glance shifted to Swayam. He was standing there, right next to her with folded hands and a smile playing on his lips. This was the same smile she yearned to see on him for her.


PS: This is not gonna be continued. Just wrote it coz I was upset at things you all are upset at too

And I didn't know how to continue it either..

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TannuVsmSwaRon thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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RES

UNRES

Me FIRST!!! 🥳
Aise bahut rare occasions milte hai 😆
Coming to the OS as I said
I loved it 😳
Something different and not the patent Hero ne Heroine ko bachaya 😆
The part where Sharon hugs Swayam was like a weak moment for both I would say and it was a pleasure to read
Then Swayam encouraging Sharon to hit that jerk was impressive as Swayam wanted Sharon to face it and get all the anger and frustration out of her system
Iss ek write-up main there were different phases of Sharon that we got to see..
From a strong minded and intelligent girl.. to a fragile and vulnerable girl
It was Amazing Work ya 😉
Great Going 👏


Edited by Tan.vish.K - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😭
thank u nami..
loved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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namrata didiii 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: cscs

😭

thank u nami..
loved it...

Charu
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Posted: 12 years ago
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THIS ONE IS MUCH BETTER ..👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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edited my comment on the previous page
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Posted: 12 years ago
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every day i will prefer reading ur version of swaron rather watching ameeta ma'am's swaron 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i wish the scene was like this actually 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I wish they showed something like this... but the new CV's ka creativity

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