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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Guys...So as u all can see, I am here again with one of My OS...Hope u will love it.😳


Our Date

It was a cold wintery night... The wind was blowing and rains is at its peak.. Panchi was happy..Ranveer had asked her out for a date..Tomorrow she would be with her Nonu...what more did she want?????she tried to catch a raindrop on her palm..Her face was glowing with happiness..She saw some kids playing in rain and the kid in her took over...She started playing with them

It was late by the time she reached home..She was shivering..Her mom opened the door and glared at her...she bit her tongue saying sorry..

"Kya kar rahi thi bahar itni thand mein??"

"Mom so sorry na..bahar itna acha mausam tha ki main khud ko rok nahi paayi.."she said cutely

:Ab masti ke chakkar mein thand lag gayi na,beemaar pad gayi to''

"Sorry,aage se pakka nahi karungi aur main itni delicate thori na hoon ki itni asaani se bemaar pad jaaun:...she said shivering.

"Ab dekha kaise kaamp rahi hai..ruk mein tere liye chai laati hoon aur ab jaakar apne kapde badal le''

Saying this she left for kitchen and Panchi left for her room..she kept on thinking about today's incidents..How Ranveer asked her out..she was sure that he was going to propose her tomorrow..She was very happy and eagerly waiting for the next day...the knock on the door brought her back to reality..it was the maid with the tea..she took the cup and locked the door and sat on the bed recalling today's event taking her to RaHi dream world again...she drank the tea and laid in her bed putting the comforter over her..she now felt warm..but her nose was twitching..she felt a sneeze coming..oh no..she could not afford to fall sick...tomorrow was the day she was looking forward too since so many days..Thinking about her Nonu she slept peacefully'..

The next day she got up but she felt sick..very sick...Her head was aching badly ..There were cold water strips on her head and her mom was sitting beside her looking very concerned..Seeing her awake she spoke up

"How r u feeling now Panchi?"

"My head mom, Its hurting like hell"

"Don't worry beta...your fever will go soon"

Hearing the last bit her eyes widened...she was shocked.

"Fever?..Mom Mujhe fever ho gaya?"

"beta chinta mat kar abhi thori der mein chala jaayega.tu aram kar..main hun tere paas"

"Aapko to apni friend ki beti ki shaadi mein bahar jaana tha na."

"haan par main tujhe akela chod kar toh nahi jaa sakti na"

"Mom main teekh hoon..ap jaaeye"

"But"

" Mom, She is ur best friend...Aapko jana chahiye.."

"haan beta par.."

"Par- var kuch nahi..aap jayenge nahi to main aapse baat nahi karungi"..Saying this she turned her face to the other side..

"tu nahi manegi na..theek hai..par muje promise kar ki aana khayal rakhegi..

"Promise Mom"

After some time Her Mom left instructing the maids to take care of her.

In room Panchi was very disheartened..she could not meet Ranveer today..how can she ...she was not even able to get up..she buried her head into the pillow and started to weep.

Suddenly she heard the sound of the footsteps near her window..she got up wiped her tears and moved towards her window..Suddenly the person jumped in front of her scaring the hell out of her..she was about to scream when the person placed his hand on her mouth

"Moti, relax its me...koi bhoot nahi hai''

Yes the person was none other than Ranveer Shergill.(obviously it's understood...window se to bas Nonu hi aa sakta hai)

"Nonu tum yahaan kya kar rahe ho"..Asked Panchi surprisingly.

"Tumne yaad kiya aur hum chale aaye"..he said in typical RV style

"Tumhe kaise pata ki main tumhare baare mein soch rahi thi"...She asked surprised.

"Telepathy Moti,telepathy..hamare dil ek dusre se connected hain..so jab tumne yaad kia to mere dil ko tumhare dil ka signal mila aur main yahaan aa gaya'

Panchi looked at him lovingly.

" Moti ab aise hi dekhti rahogi to mera saara surprise mere chocolate cake ke saath melt ho jaayega''

"surprise?????chocolate cake?????yeh tum kya bol rahe ho Nonu??????

Ranveer brought his hand forward from his back and gave her the cake.

Panchi was surprised

"Moti yaar,aisa kya dekh rahi ho..Ab tum nahi aa saki to main aa gaya..ab hamari date continue karein,"

"But Ranveer.."

"But kuch nahi,mere liye toh wahi date hai jahaan tum mere saath ho"

They shared a cute eye lock...Ranveer came in senses first.

"Moti mujhe koi problem nahi hai ki tum mujhe saara tym aise hi dekhti raho par mere pet mein chuhe bhaag rahe hain'

They start laughing like typical cute RaHi.

They then cut the cake together and fed each other'..

Then RV went on his knees and took out the box from his pocket and opened it..it was a beautiful yet elegant diamond ring..Panchi was mesmerized.

"Moti will u be in my life for forever?..will u take care of me forever?...will u be there whenever I need ?...will u listen to my bak bak everyday?...will u Plz accept me in ur life..

Panchi's eyes were filled with tears..she forwarded her hands, he slipped the ring in her finger and they hugged..Panchi broke the hug and said:

"Thanks Ranveer this was the best date of my life."

"Thanks to you Moti for coming in my life and making it beautiful, You are the reason for me to live. I just can't imagine my life without you"...They again hugged, embraced each other tightly.

That was the best day for them...Best moments do not require best things and materials but it requires best persons..

Yup, One more confession based OS..I just can't get over with RaHi confession and proposal..hope u will like it...Don't forget to press like button..😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I would have pressed a love button if only it was thr 🤣

That was sooo good simple but purely rahi ahhh the last words and ranveer coming home awww rahi are sooo rahi lov them
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Geet you are sooo awesome writer👏 hey! dear why don't you write for kisha please its request.Now coming to your OS yaar nonu is sooo sweet that i am just loving this Rahi☺️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ranveer - "But kuch nahi,mere liye toh wahi date hai jahaan tum mere saath ho"
wow RAHI mazzziccckkk...😃😃😃...

Typical RAHI selfless pure love...nice os...loved it...

smriti
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww <3 this is Awesomee Geet 🤗
u r an amasing writer 👏
keep writing more on RaHi😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: NaughtyRa

I would have pressed a love button if only it was thr 🤣

That was sooo good simple but purely rahi ahhh the last words and ranveer coming home awww rahi are sooo rahi lov them


Thanks Shubhra dear
I am glad u liked it

Yupp RaHi are the most adorable couple
Just love them
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: loveukisha

Geet you are sooo awesome writer👏 hey! dear why don't you write for kisha please its request.Now coming to your OS yaar nonu is sooo sweet that i am just loving this Rahi☺️


Thanks Sneha dear
I am glad u liked it

I will surly try to write on KiSha too😳

I too love My Nonu like anything
He is just too adorable

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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww cho chweet😳😳
it was so cute my rahi so adorable
u know whenever I read your work on rahi I fall in love with rahi again and again👏👏
u are awesome Geet luv u🤗
and that window scene sach kaha window se sirf nonu hi a sakta he😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: s2singh

Ranveer - "But kuch nahi,mere liye toh wahi date hai jahaan tum mere saath ho"

wow RAHI mazzziccckkk...😃😃😃...

Typical RAHI selfless pure love...nice os...loved it...

smriti


Smriti dear
Thanks a lot sweetheart
I am glad u liked it
Muahhh

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: RAHI_SS

Aww <3 this is Awesomee Geet 🤗

u r an amasing writer 👏
keep writing more on RaHi😳


Suj
Thanks dear
I am glad u liked it
will surely write more

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