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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
AWESOME

AMAZING

SUPERB

FAB

SPLENDID

MARVELOUS

DIFFICULT TO GRASP BUT ONCE DONE

IT WAS FLAWLESS :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
8000😲🤣 idio u told me on sat. Bhulakkad!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
Superb OS
amazing
just luved it to the core ... :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
👏 its super dear 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
Amazing os.
Honestly i ws confused when i first read it bt later after i read the p.s. i understud d idea of this os.
Luvd it. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
u actually twisted the 1st portion vry well wth ur italic nd normal fonts 😆😆
but thnk god.. it was shivam who cheated!!!
u really scared me in beginning..😆😆
anyways, loved ur OS...
very well written in a twisted manner...😆😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
At first I was so confused but then I read it again and again and I finally got it :P
That was really nice
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
pehle i was lil confused bt finally
samaj aah hi gyii.. NYccc...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
K finally Commenting so don't be angry

The flow of the story was very intriguing👏
Because it took me a while to figure out that there were 2 male leads
I confused on the lines as to how can one person have two personalities but then realized it was 2 different people
Like you know me always loved the concept of best friend becoming the boyfriend
Loved Kriya's conflicting pov
where she kept trying to explain to herself that her perfect life isn't gonna be shattered

I loved the way you changed their relationship status in the end and yet kept it the same
(this line is typically for you 😉)

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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
amazingly written.. till d last para i was confused.. but truly very well written.. loved it..👏👏

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