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zona_malik

@zona_malik

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

AWESOME

AMAZING

SUPERB

FAB

SPLENDID

MARVELOUS

DIFFICULT TO GRASP BUT ONCE DONE

IT WAS FLAWLESS :)

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Konpal Gupta

@-CRJ-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

8000😲🤣 idio u told me on sat. Bhulakkad!

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Anjori

@anjoriii

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Superb OS

amazing

just luved it to the core ... :)

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Preeti ArsHa

@preeti_kreya

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

👏 its super dear 👏

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Gunika Mehta

@Thats.me.Guni

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Amazing os.
Honestly i ws confused when i first read it bt later after i read the p.s. i understud d idea of this os.
Luvd it. 😊

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TenTinyBreaths

@TenTinyBreaths

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

u actually twisted the 1st portion vry well wth ur italic nd normal fonts 😆😆
but thnk god.. it was shivam who cheated!!!
u really scared me in beginning..😆😆
anyways, loved ur OS...
very well written in a twisted manner...😆😆

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Nikki

@HR-DMG4life

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

At first I was so confused but then I read it again and again and I finally got it :P
That was really nice

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ArYa/Ash

@Arya.100

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

pehle i was lil confused bt finally

samaj aah hi gyii.. NYccc...

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ShonaSparkzz

@ShonaSparkzz

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

K finally Commenting so don't be angry

The flow of the story was very intriguing👏

Because it took me a while to figure out that there were 2 male leads

I confused on the lines as to how can one person have two personalities but then realized it was 2 different people

Like you know me always loved the concept of best friend becoming the boyfriend

Loved Kriya's conflicting pov

where she kept trying to explain to herself that her perfect life isn't gonna be shattered

I loved the way you changed their relationship status in the end and yet kept it the same

(this line is typically for you 😉)

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TenTinyBreaths

@TenTinyBreaths

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

amazingly written.. till d last para i was confused.. but truly very well written.. loved it..👏👏

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