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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6





I am really very disappointed with maanav's reaction...how could he so selfish...Archana is right jaisa baap waisa beta...perfect words to describe him...

Maan ko abhi pata hi nahin hai ki Geet chali gayi...very good...

apni beti ka bhi khayaal nahin hai...

but what is surprising me is the reason why he misbehaved with Geet... he didn't accepted Geet because he promised Muskaan and his father, grandfather always respected women...they were very loyal to their wife so he also walk on same path and remain loyal to his wife Muskaan... did Muskaan told him to remarry...agar itna hi uske liye loyal tha to marr jaata par doosri shaadi nahin karta...Maanav can be brought up by his family...there was no compulsion...why he married Geet and destroyed her life...

very weird reason really...who was Geet to him then...ok he promised his deceased wife not to love any other woman but that promise was made to a live lady not dead...there was no condition attached regarding dead...and Geet was also his wife only...if he is so small baby that to make decisions he has to look upon his father or grand father so he could have asked them that what he should do now in this situation when he is again became husband to another women so what is his loyalities towards his deceased wife and towards his live wife...

what is changed whether Geet was his Daadi's first choice...the reality is that first Muskaan was his wife so he have duties towards her and now when she is dead and he is married again then he has duties towards his present wife...

very interesting update...

waiting for next part...

thanx for pm...



yaar hav patience... More to flash back. Next part me Pammi's flashback is on. U'll get small idea. But puri bath u'll understand with geet's and maan'S flashbacks oly.
thanku for the wonderful comment dear
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -indu-




Waiting for an update...I have checked so many times whether u have updated...Plz Plz Plz update karo na...


update aaj possible nahi hoga but will give tomo defo by eve yaar. Aaj kuch kam hai but tomo me time nikal dungi as I have written 60 % already
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111

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update tomo eve ko de dungi yaar. Defo. Kam hai.
so tomo dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
Please post soon ... Waiting
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so much emotional waiting for more
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Waiting for you
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waiting dear pls update
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he is just fooling himself. you'll know more yaar.
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Originally posted by: ambbiha

A very emotional story

Thank you yaar
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Next Part

Before update... one clarification.

Till now the night has not passed.

Maan and others apart from Archana dono that Geet and Kushi has left the house.

Pammi knows only that Geet's parents has left.

Now the update

Pammi heard a sound coming from outside. She opened her door to see what the commotion was only to hear Archana's words before she left the room. She quietly watched her granddaughter in law enter the guest room. Her words Jesa bhap wesa beta.. both are so ungrateful. Kept repeating in her mind. How true these words were. But in this she was also included. It was more like jese ma wesa beta. She was also ungrateful. She has now realised her mistake but alas it was too late. Signing she turned into her room and closed the door. She walked towards the family portrait where her MIL was smiling. Her face and her eyes showed the warmth and understanding of a mother. But her whole posture showed elegance. How jealous she had been of her. She sadly clucked thinking how she had thought her MIL was nothing but an overly pampered woman who was very dominating. She wished she could reverse time and undo the things she had done. But it wasn't possible. She sat down on the bed as tears of regret fell from her eyes. She was alone now. She dint know how to save this family now that the dark shadow of the past was spreading into her house. She had tried to redeem herself by getting Geet married to Maan forcibly cos at that time she thought all would be well but how foolish she was.

Mummyji aapne kaha tha. She whispered as she cried. Par me..me.. tho nahi suni. Ub me kya karoongi.. she cried into her pillow unable to sit anymore..

Past

Pammi was a happy woman. She had at last beat her MIL and got her son the wife of her choice. She smirked at her victory mentally. Now she would become the next Savithri Devi of the house. She hated how her MIL was worshipped by everyone of this house. Even her own son shared and discussed things with her rather than his own mother. She had taken all this s**t for all these years but not anymore. She had internally burned when her husband who usually was all kind and caring towards her would become an obedient dog in front of his mother. She had cursed mentally when every decision was made only with the consent of that old woman. But now she had the upper hand. If Geet had come into the family, she would never be important. She would be side-lined again. Now with this timid girl, she had the control. She sat on the sofa and looked around as thought she was the queen of the world. How proud she was of herself for achieving this. Just then she heard giggling sound and then entered the girl she despised without any reason. Geet.

Nameste aunty ji. Geet greeted Pammi folding her hands. Didi utgayi kya?? She asked unknown of the feelings and thoughts this woman had for her.

Pammi glared at her. How dare she come and ask all this to her. Was she a servant to see what her sister was doing all the time? But before she could say anything, Savithri Devi entered the room.

Geet beta.. she called lovingly. She dint know why but she has developed so much of love for this girl in such a short time.

Nameste Dadiji. Geet came forwards and touched the lady's feet. Dadi instantly stopped her and hugged her. This was seen with jealousy by Pammi. She remembered that Geet did not touch her feet as she did with her MIL.

Dadi ji can I go and see didi? Geet asked nervously. She wanted to see her didi last time before she left to Bangalore. Her pre-board exams were nearing and she had to be there.

Arrey beta this is also your house. You don't need to ask me anything. Go to the left and 3rd door is your didi and jeeja ji's room. Savitri Devi smiled, gently patting her cheeks.

Geet's face immediately lit up and she thanked her and ran to see her didi. She knocked the door but there was no response. She remembered how rude Maan was last night and she dint want to intrude and get verbally bashed again. She knocked few more times only to get no response. She slowly opened the door, praying to her Babaji to help her. But to her happiness or disappointment the room was empty. She looked around the huge room and was happy for her sister. She shyly looked at the bed knowing well what last night was for the newly married couple. She smiled seeing the bed made perfectly. Didi bhi na. she murmured knowing well how her sister was a clean freak. Just then the bathroom door opened and Muskan entered with a sad face. She came out only in her blouse and in skirt.

Didi yeh kya?? Geet asked surprised to see her sister like this

Geetu.. oh God tum agayi. Thank you so much... Muskan cried as she hugged Geet.

Didi kya bath hai? Geet asked seeing her sister like this

Geetu, help me in tying sari na. tume tho pata hai I dono how to do it. Muskan said pouting sadly.

Itni si bath, me hun na. Don't worry saying Geet took the sari and wrapped it around Muskan

Challo ab teek hogaya na. Then give your sister a big smile. Geet said admiring her beautiful sister.

Tho Geetu itni jaldi yaha pe? Muskan asked as she sat down to do her make up.

Didi app makeup math karo na. You look beautiful just like that. Geet grumbled.

Kya?? Are you nuts? No way your jeeja ji will run away seeing my real face. Muskan said horrified by her sister's suggestion.

Kya di, if he had to run he would have done so last night itself after seeing your face aur wo bhi sleeping. Geet giggled seeing the shocked face of Muskan.

Geet was just teasing Muskan but Muskan took this to heart. Thought she giggled with Geet but still somewhere the thought lingered in her mind.

Anyway didi, I'm leaving to Bangalore today. You know na meri preboard hai and I need to be in Nani's house. Geet said getting all serious.

Arrey han. Dekh Geet put your full effort in studies. No going out with friends for you till your exam finishes. Teek hai. Padai ke sath take rest also. Muskan started her dos and donts and Geet listened to all this with a smile on her face. How she missed her didi back in her Nani's house. If only her parents dint shift to hoshiarpur, she would never leave her didi and family to study in Bangalore. Getting emotional she hugged Muskan and started sobbing.

Didi you won't forget me no?? she sobbed in her arms

Pagal hai kya?? Never Geetu. Tu tho meri jaan hai. Muskan said holding onto the sobbing Geet

Ab tho aap maan jeeja ji ke Muskan ban gayi. Mera kya hoga. Meri Muskan jeeja ji ne churaliya hai. She cried more

Geet me hamesha tumari sister rahungi. Whatever happens. And rahi bath Maan ji ki tho he is my husband. Unki jagha alag and yours too. Khamakam don't upset yourself.

Par Didi.. Geet started cribbing when the door opened to find a sweaty Maan enter the room. Geet's eyes stuck to him. She had never seen a guy like this.

Maan at first dint notice the sisters. He removed the t-shirt he was wearing for jogging and threw it inside the washing basket.

Maan.. kya kar rahe hai aap.. Muskan called in a very high tone.

This bough Geet back from her ogling session. She felt ashamed to be gawking at her sister's husband. She quickly hugged her sister and wiped her tears.

Bye didi. I'll call you sometime. Saying she turned towards Maan. Who was still standing bare on the top.

Wo.. me.. she stammered. She dint dare look up. She felt shy and ashamed at the same time. Before she could say anything Muskan came to the rescue

Geet is leaving for Bangalore today. uski preboard hai. Muskan said as she came forward. She stood in such a way that Geet could no more see Maan.

Hmm.. Maan hummed as his face showed how not interested he was with this information, making Muskan happy and Geet hurt again.

Accha me chalti hun saying she left the room with a heavy heart. She dint know why she felt like this. She dint know why she expected anything from this man. Suchmuch danav hai. She thought. Dus sir wala ravan hai. She thought and giggled as she imagined Maan with a big moustache and ten heads.

Geet beta where are you going?? Came dadi's voice bringing her out of her imagination.

Ji... wo.. Geet stammered and then quickly got control of herself. Dadi ji, I'm going home. She answered and smiled at the kind lady

Bilkul nahi. I just got a call from your mother and she told me ki you are leaving today to Bangalore. So I want you to stay for breakfast. Moreover aaj tho Muskan ka pehla din hai. Won't you stay back and encourage her? Dadi said in a no nonsense tone.

Geet had to accept as she dint want to say know to her. But one thing she felt sad was that her own didi dint stop her. Brushing it aside, she sat near Dadi and started talking.

After 20 min, Muskan and Maan came down. Both of them took blessings from every elder of the family and then Muskan entered the kitchen. Everyone was waiting for breakfast but there was no sign of Muskan. Geet got worried and asked Dadi to let her go and see Muskan. She entered the kitchen to see Muskan crying.

Didi kya hua??

Wo Geetu mene kheer jala diya. I was so nervous and tensed. Muskan cried

Didi first go and wash your face. I'll do something. Saying she quickly took another vessel. The only sweet which can be done quickly is Wheat halwa. So she took ghee and then atta and started making it. By the time Muskan entered the kitchen the halwa was ready and the whole kitchen was smelling awesome

Thank you Geetu saying Muskan hugged her and then took the tray and left the room. Geet washed her face and sat down with others and mentally smiled hearing them praise the halwa. All were happy except Pammi who was taunting Muskan for doing such a simple dish. But Dadi just shut her up.

All went well and Geet was bid bye. She was about to enter the car when Pammi came to her

Dekh ladki, I know you prepared the halwa. She spoke rudely. Does your sister know nothing to prepare or is it that you want to take her place. She spit venom with words making Geet hurt.

Wo aunty ji Geet tried to say something

I don't want you to come here and do all this. Yadhi tume yeh sab karne ka shouk hai tho do in your house or better I'll tell your parents to get you married so that you can cook and kill people of that house. Samji saying she walked away leaving a very hurt Geet behind.

Precap: more of Pammi's memory.

Mumma I will work in the caf and it's decided. Said Kushi adamantly. She was getting frustrated by her mother's continuous rejection

No daughter of Maan Singh Kurrana will work understand spoke Geet in a stern manner.

BUT I AM NOT HIS DAUGHTER she yelled

SLAP the sound echoed in the whole of the empty room

Geet closed her mouth in shock. She had never raised her hand on her children. How could she. And most of all what pricked her heart was the knowledge that Kushi knew. She got up from her chair and ran into another room, shutting the door behind her.

Kushi's eyes filled with tears and heart cried in pain. This pain was not out of the fact that her mother had hit her, no.. it wasn't, but it was out of the fact that she had hurt her mother. She had in fit of anger told her mother the truth that she had heard what her sperm donor thought abt her.

That is all for now yaar. I'm very tired today. This update is 1879 words in toto. Will make the next bigger. No maaneet in this part and the next one too. Actually for the next 4 or 5 updates you'll get flashbacks and little of the present. You'll have more of Muskan in the next. If possible you'll know who the stranger is also.

For pms pls buddy arthi_r

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