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Posted: 11 years ago

Hi Frenz here is the Chapter 17 of the story ,and now it is heading to a Break point from where the story will take even more sweetest and cutest turn with some scratch left on their lives ...

A Sweet and Sour Love Story ...



Chapter 17 : A major Off set ...


The day started like all other normal days with only one difference, all members of both families were gathered at Kapoor Mansion. As planned , we were gathered to leave for SWARG .. for a weekend trip. The elders were excited ... But the excitement of Natasha and Kartik were evident ... and at the same time , annoyance of Ram was notable.

My brother is not so bad Ram..' Priya whispered to Ram as she walked by him.. Ram made a puppy face and tried to answer but left with no choice other than to keep staring at the kids... At stipulated time they left for their destination... In total 5 cars left for the farm house..

While Priya wanted to accompany Ram , there he pushed Natasha and Kartick with them too... He forced Kartick to seat with him in the front seat , while Priya and Natasha were seated on the rear seat. Natasha's pale face was a clear indication that ; she is in trouble. To relax her priya snapped a sweet smile with her hands on her shoulder... Natasha smiled in her nervousness.

Ram starred continuous on Kartick and Natasha , the consequences of that , the car was moving at a speed of tortoise... Even a hand driven cart will over take us...' Priya showed her annoyance ...

Can't you see the traffic ?' Ram answered ...

can't you see that Natasha is sitting with me ...' Immediate answer came from Priya ...

Yeah but they can easily ...' Ram stopped and stared blankly at Kartick's pale face... He accelerated and stopped the car by one dhabha , out of busy city.. He jumped over kartick and held his neck in his fist. Though Priya know that Ram was only kidding with him , but Natasha screamed out of her panic..

BHAIII...' Natasha jumped from her seat to free Kartick from Ram's grip. Priya smiled seeing the trio in muscle fight. While Ram was ignorant about Natasha ,she tried to save her love.

Okay Okay Time up guys ..' Priya pulled Natasha back to her seat , Ram .. my brother is not so bad; that he will get this punishment for loving our sister ...' She added ...

Right Priya..' Ram cam back to his seat , I was just trying to tell him in what trouble he has pulled himself..' Ram giggled ...

What do you mean Mr.Kapoor?' Priya asked narrowing her eyes ...

Means now bye bye to his bachelor hood and welcome to torture hood..' Ram laughed again ... Natasha and Kartick were still expressionless. They were trying to figure out how their little secret affair got public. While the younger siblings were trying to know their extact position where they stand , Ram Priya continue to fight ...

SO you mean I torture you??' Annoyingly Priya asked ...

What ! when I said that ? Priya' Ram tried to defend ..

No you actually meant that only ! you are married to me so , who is torturing you ? Me no.?' Priya said ...

Priyaaa Try to understand , what I was saying !' Ram said turning right back to Priya ...

Huh ! as if I care!' Priya cocked her head aside , in anger ..

That's the problem with ladies .. See Kartick , how much I am suffer-Ring... and you being so happy want to add this Suffer-Ring in your life ..' Ram might not have ended , Natasha intervened hurryingly...

WHAT DO YOU MEAN BHAI ?? I AM A SUFFERING ...' Natasha moved to the middle of the two front seat and looked at her brother ...

Le ek kaam thi ki doosri bhi...' Ram slapped his forehead ... and leaned back,, Jerking neha from her place ... Priya almost clutched Ram's collar , Forcefully she made him look at her , while she spoke , Listen Mr.Ram Kapoor .. You will have a very bad time ahead .. I Tell you !!'

Oh ! Really ... I will love to have Bad time baby ...' He winked ...

Before Priya could reply , Kartick spoke for the first time ... , Please don't fight .. and when we have had halted in front of a dhaba can we have some food...' with a little pause and sigh he added , Please!'

No ...' The other three shouted in Unison , and Ram accelerated away from the Dhaba...

While he was driving , Kartik looked around himself and trying to judge the people around himself by their expressions. He suddenly found , himself out from Ram's scrutiny. He was trying to look for Priya through the rear view mirror. He looked aside to see Natasha ; who was upset and angry at the same time. Rather he got confused when he tried to learn her expressions. Whilst , Priya remain un noticed.

After a while , Ram suddenly stopped the car with a dead brake. The ladies in the rear seat , trembled forward.. they settled back and Priya complained about the same to Ram... Without answering , Ram got out of the driving seat , Opening the rear door , he asked Natasha to get into the front passenger's seat ... while Kartik will drive he pronounced...

Natasha looked at Priya and smiled ... , Ya why not !!' Snapping an odd smile .. She walked away ...

Ram got into the rear sit , by Priya. She avoided him and looked to the mobing scenic beauty.

They are all the same ...' Ram whispered almost into his angry wife's ears... When Priya looked back , her lips were inches away from his . With a smile Ram , kissed her cheek sweetly..

Ram .. what the ...' Priya pushed Ram away from herself , and tried to look normal , to the juniors sitting in front.

Kids don't look here .. Let you two free .. So excuse Us too..." Ram announced...

Thanks a Lot Bhai .. for your Kind gesture .. by engaging Kartick in the driver's seat.. How kindly rude you are ...' Natasha added...

Look I am so thoughtful ...and Kind..' Ram said with smile added to it ... Natasha refrained from commenting further.. She looked at Kartick who was driving with full concentration.

The SUV was much spacious to accommodate Ram even if he continues his journey in horizontal position.. He lied down nesting his head on Priya's lap. She tried to push his head away from her lap , but Ram restricted her. Fisting her hand he kissed them. With the love touch Priya looked down to Ram , and found him smiling.. She melted in the moment .. Leaping closer to him she sweetly pecked on his forehead ...

"Is it really necessary that we are behaving like strict parents to the kids Ram .. Don't you trust my Brother Ram ? He is a decent boy grew with my values ... You can let Natasha comfortably with him .." Priya whispered , so that no one can hear her actually ..

I trust him .. But not my sister.. She is too much!' Ram added , That's the reason , I was behaving rude and strictly with them ...'

I trust her Ram ... She is born with her family values ...' Priya defended Natasha ...

Okay tell me what do you want ?? Ram asked ..

We can talk with them and can clear out what they want and expect from each other...' Priya looked to the kids , And we can lend them little privacy ... and .. we have had some ...' She smiled , You know what I mean ...' Priya winked ...

Yay yay yay ... I know.' Ram sat up at his place and stared at Kartick like a hungry tiger ... For few minutes , Stop the car ...' He ordered...

Little , worried Kartick drove few meters after the order got delivered to him , Why Jiju , have I done anything wrong !!' He looked back ...

Stop the car ... That's it !' Ram was harsher then ...

As the Car stopped , Ram order the kids , to hop out of the car. Though Kartick obeyed , but Natasha sat like a stubborn kid freezing at her place... Ram asked her to come out constantly. Even when he asked her to do so , standing by the front passenger seat , she denied to follow his orders ...

Kartick tell your girl to come out or else..' Ram rounded his eyes to Natasha ... He was angry ... He had a faint smile , confusing Natasha he added , or else I will announce your marriage tomorrow in place of your betrothal...' With wide open arms , ram welcomed his sister...

With a blank stare of few minutes .

Natasha expressed , her excitement and happiness... Priya smiled while she came out of the car, She hugged Kartick , But you have to promise me , you will take care of Natasha very well ..' Looking at Ram she added , More well than her brother and my husband ... I want you to be the best husband to her...'

Oye bhool jaa , I will be the best husband ... !!' Ram almost jumped and snatched Priya and smiled ...

U r my Star husband ...' Priya pulled Ram's nose... they hugged ... Natasha and Kartick also hugged immediately taking the chance of the moment...

Chod!!!!' Ram scolded Kartick .. Frightened kid stood stunned when Ram added , Hug her like this ...' Ram hugged Priya tight in his embrace to demonstrate ... Kartick and Natasha Smiled...

The four people reached SWARG pretty late... Priya ran inside to meet the elders .. but she froze at her place seeing a very unknown face , who got pretty mixed up with her in laws and other people too...

Priya ...' Krishna Kapoor noticed her , where you all were? Everything is fine .. right beta?' HSe asked caringly.

Yes Maa ...' Priya managed an answer.. still trying to recall if she knows the guest ... When Ram entered with the other two , he smiled broad and welcomed the guest with a warm hug. Priya didn't liked the gesture , though, she smiled.

Priya this is Ayesha ...' Ram briefed before he concentrated back on her , How did you came to know about our visit ?' Ram asked with a smile ..

as if you don't know ?' With a soft smack on his shoulder , You have had invited me over here ...' She replied ... , And Priya it's very nice to meet you ...' The lady walked to Mrs.Kapoor .. Priya snapped at Ram , who made appolozing face to her.

Forcing a smile , she accepted the greeting hug from the lady ... She welcomed Ayesha to the place .. Let me check with the arrangements...' She tried t excuse herself from the crowd.

Priya ..' Ayesha held her back , Consider me as family ... I am very near to Ram , a close friend .. very close friend..' Ayesha leaned close to Priya , I know many secrets of your husband .. Ask me ..' Coming apart she winked at Ram. Priya felt little unwanted. She walked upstairs ...

Coming to her room, she sat on the bed. Startled and sudden anger engulfed her. Clutching the bed sheet, she tried to control the anger... but it couldn't erupt.. because , she knew that she has to talk about Natasha and Kartick to the families. After waiting a little more , she walked down stairs.. As she entered the hall , her eyes went to Ram and Ayesha , they were sitting aside. She wanted to know , why and how did Ayesha got entry to the family get together , but it can be waited but the decision that she and Ram had taken about the kids has to be approved ...

"dadi ... Kuch baat karni thi ..' Priya said making her space to seat for by dadi ...

"Bol na beta ...' Dadi said with a smile ..

It's about family dadi .. If ..' She looked up and showed her indirect ignorance and unhappiness about Ayesha ... She was wise enough to learn about it ... She stood up to leave. Ram followed.

Ram I need you here .. it's a decision that we took not only you or me ..' Priya stopped Ram ..

we are not different Priya ... and Ayesha is not only new to the place but also new to the country let me accompany her ...' Ram waited for Priya's reaction ... When she didn't responded , Ram turned to the elders .

Krishn Kapoor , asked her son to be there for a while , and apologized to Ayesha for keeping her out of the discussion. Ram Settled back to his place. While Ayesha walked out of the room giving Priya a very cold look ..

Smiling , Priya looked at Dadi , Taking her hands on her's she asked , Dadi , can I ask Natasha for my Brother ? Is he that much lucky to be our Son-in-Law...?' With a smile she looked at Natasha and Kartick.

Oh My God !' Exclaimed Shikha ji , From when all these are happening ?' She asked the kids ... They turned red as they blushed... ...

Priya ?? were you aware of this..' her mother in law asked ..

"I knew it .. but just in recent past...' Priya kept her gaze fixed on the kids , as she spoke , But Maa , I can assure , Kartick will be a good husband to Natasha ...'

I don't doubt him at all Priya ... He is your Brother . He has grown up with your values ... I trust him completely ...So what's the plan now ?' Krishna ji asked ...

Maa , we have thought held their engagement ceremony here only, as we think this is the best place. They are lucky to be blessed by all the people present here ...' Ram said but his eyes were travelling to and forth along the room and the garden .. , Priya you brief the rest to the family , let me accompany Ayesha ...' This time he didn't let anyone intervene , before anyone could do the same she walked away from the room ..

Priya ... beta pooja , angunthi yeh sab kaise hoga ...socha hain kuch ?' Dadi asked ...

Dadi wo , mein sab kuch arrange kar lungi .. as they have accepted to kep the engagement ceremony to be a private affair, and in return the marriage to be the biggest event of the year , I thought to ..' Priya was looking constantly towards the door , as she spoke , I will arrange every thing ..' She stood up ...

Priya everything is fine?' Shikha JI asked ..

Hmmm...' Priya was busy in finding Ram , She concentrated back , Ye.. yes .. I was just thinking for the jeweler I should call for ... I have to make some plans , about the same.. will revert back to you guys .. soon..' Priya walked out of the room in hurry .. without wasting time , a jealous soul walked to garden in search of her husband .

Her eyes searched for Ram and Ayesha only ... She looked around and found them walking on the grass... aside... She opened her mouth to call Ram , but she refrained herself at the last moment ... and changing her mind , she walked to her room. Opening her laptop she searched for the best jeweler present in her contacts. After searching thoroughly she choose two from many , and called them to fix meetings with them in simultaneous hours .

Priya was walking back to the hall , she meet Ayesha . Priya tried to avoid her and walk away ... but she stopped as Ayesha spoke ... I and your husband used to have a past..' She smiled .. Before she could add more Priya intervened , I know ... And it's past I am his present and future ...and before you add more non sense ; I have lots of work to do. So sorry and excuse me please...'

You are ...' Ayesha paved her wave... Priya didn't looked back for another second , but something was wrong...

The same night ...

When priya came to her room , after dinner , she found Ram on the balcony. Without bothering him she walked to the washroom with her change. As the door got locked with a click sound , Ram looked back. He walked to the room , and found the door locked and priya's phone lying on the bed ... He fixed his gaze fixed at the washroom door ,locked from inside ... He had no other choice but to wait for Priya to come out ..

Almost after 10 minutes , priya came out in her night gown ... green color suits her the most . Ram stood up from the chair and just opened his mouth to speak ... But before him , priya spoke , without looking at him .. Papa wants to fix a date sooner , it depends on you ... Please talk with him accordingly ..'

Ok .. but ..' Ram wanted to speak but intervened ...

And I have arranged everything for tomorrow , the jewelers will come tomorrow morning I have called two person , we will chose one from the each .. be present there .. and about the decorations and food , I have made arrangements too .. Masi will come tomorrow morning .. she has not left the country yet .. she also had no problem ...' This time Ram turned Priya to himself with a jerk , he held her tight so that she cannot move away .. and looked intensely into her eyes so that she can't let herself think anything else ...

leave me ...' She stammered almost ...

No .. Look at me ..' ram ordered as Priya stole her eyes from him ... priya LOOK AT ME .. I said ...' ram rose his voice this time ... Priya closed her eyes tight ... Cupping her face , he spoke softly , I know you are hurt because I walked out when I was supposed to be there . But Ayesha she is a guest and throwing her out was looking very bad .. that's why I went to accompany her ..' Ram leaned closer to kiss her forehead , but inches away he stopped as Priya pushed him back

Please Ram .. Let me go ...' Priya stepped away from her husband ...

Priya ... but ..' Ram tried to stop priya , but she walked away from the room , wrapping a shawl around. She was disturbed and little distracted from the reality. To find peace , and calm down , Priya decided to have a walk on the lawn. Priya was walking silently around , when she found ram arguing with Ayesha . Though she was least interested about Ayesha , but when her husband was there , she couldn't resist herself from listening to them secretly ...

Priya heard them ...

why you came to India Ayesha when I asked you not to interfere in my life...?' Ram asked Ayesha ..

Why don't you understand Ram Priya is not meant for you .. Not at all .. we are meant to be together .. Did you forgot our past days .. how much happy we were together .. and when I came to India .. you were the first person to come to me .. You were the happiest person .. What were those Ram ?? Don't tell me that you were just happy to see an old face ...' Ayesha said holding Ram's hand ..

Exactly . Ayesha ..i was excited and happy to see someone from my college days ... Nothing else ... I have no such intentions ...' Ram defended ..

Don't tell me that Ram ... Then why had hidden our truth from your wife ?' Ayesha surprised Priya , she stood there listening to Ram and Ayesha , why didn't you disclosed about us to Priya ..' Ayesha asked .. Ram didn't answered back , Ayesha continued , because still there is something between us ram , we didn't have a fake relationship , those days were precious for us Ram .. and I know when I am here you regret ,that you have married Priya .. But Ram I am ready t accept you even after your marriage ... Please Ram come back to me ... Please ..'

there is nothing between you and me !!! that's it Ayesha ...and I will not talk about this anymore ...' Ram walked away without waiting for another second ...

If priya wanted she could have confronted Ayesha then and there but she walked back to the room , expecting Ram to be there , but to her surprise he was not there... Priya didn't tried to find him out , but sat there fighting with herself ... She looked around , and found Ram's phone lying ideal on the table .. she couldn't stop herself from stalking ...

She knew the passkey to Ram's phone .. she quickly , without even thinking for once went through the call list of Ram , and found many conversation evidences among Ram and Ayesha .. there were many sms conversations too , but maximum of which were deleted manually , though the history of it remains as evidence , but the conversation were deleted. It made Priya more suspicious .. She decided to stalk into Ram's past to know what he was hiding from her ... Silently she walked away from the room ...

She was about to knock at Ayesha's room , she heard ram's voice inside .. She tried to hear , what he was talking to the lady , but she was not so lucky to hear the full conversation but she heard a lit bit of it and those phrases were enough to make her believe that Ram was hiding truth from her ...

I don't want to remember what I did .. but now I want to live Ayesha ... May there was something between us .. but now there is nothing.. I am sorry for what I did to you ...' These few phrases were audible in the silence of the night ... Priya froze there listening to her husband .. her eyes became teary ... she glued at her place . Her jammed brain didn't allowed her neither to listen nor to think ...

But she collected herself , and ran back to the room ...

Almost , after 10-15 mins when Ram came back to the room ,... he switched on the lights and was shocked to find Priya crying sitting at a corner of the bed .. he paced up to her .. but he was stopped by her in between ...

Stop Ram ... Stop ...' Priya said ...

priya ...' ram wanted to speak , but Priya didn't let her to ...

I am asking you for the last time what you are hiding Ram , Don't lie to me .. I don't want to hate you ... I don't want to die again ... I don't want to dwell with a lone life again ... Tell me the truth I will accept it ..But don't lie ...' priya said ...

What you are talking about Priya ...? When did I Lie to you ...? I have said everything to you even about me and Ayesha , there is nothing to hide then why should I lie ...' ram almost shouted...

Don't shout .. if you have nothing to hide about Ayesha then why did you deleted all your sms conversation .. then why did you went to see Ayesha at this odd hours . is there any specific other reason Mr.Ram Kapoor?' Priya surprised ram ..

You were stalking me and you talk about trust Priya .. if you couldn't trust me , the why do you expect to get the truth from me Priya ... Tell me ?' Ram shouted this time .. really loud...

Don't SHOUT ... I can do the same too Ram ...' Priya outstate Ram this time ... , I expected loyalty from you .. when I kept the darkest truth of my life , which could have made anyone hell on this earth hate me ... But I kept it .. I opened it in front of you .. But you didn't have this guts that you can accept your past relationship even ?' priya waited for Ram to reply ...

I don't believe this ..' ram was shattered , You are disgusting ... just disgusting ... when I said you there is nothing between me and her then why the hell I should hide it from you .. and if I have had deleted the messages from my mobile then I have a valid reason , and you don't have any right to invade there ... That's my personal space priya ...' ram sounded very angry .. even he didn't knew what he was speaking ...

yes you are right Ram , I don't have any right to invade into your Private life .. after all I am an intruder right ...' Priya said sadly ...

Realizing what he said , Ram tried to speak to her , but Priya behaved like an arrogant kid , she restricted and walked out of the room ... Ram thought to wait till Priya reverts back to her normal state again ... But next morning something more shocking happened ...

Next Morning ... When ram woke up , he found Priya packing her bags ... He tried to speak to her , but Priya completely neglected him ... As Priya walked out of the room, he followed her ... Ram found that Priya walked into Shikha ji s room , directly walking out from her room ..

priya... here you are .. come and arrange everything with us ..' Shikha said ..

darling .. I have to go back ..' priya declared ...

What !! Di but ... how ? I mean without you how can I ..' Kartick demanded an answer ..

kartick , the Japanese clients they are coming today .. and I have to be there ..' Priya defended , but I will come back before the engagement ceremony .. but for now I have to go ...and Maa Dadi , don't worry I have arranged everything for the ceremony , the jewelers will come soon too and Ram is here only he will take care of every other thing I guess .. and Ayesha can help too .. I will come back soon ...' priya bend down and took blessings from the elders ... Even Shikha ji failed to stop Priya this time .. Disappointing every one Priya walked away from the place ...

Till it was between us .. I was okay with it ! But you crossed every limit dragging the elders between ... ram felt bad for Kartick and Natasha ...

After Priya left , The elders wanted to postpone the engagement but , Ram lied that priya had a talk about the meeting with him and he also assured that Priya will be on time, and way ago the engagement ceremony .. ram decided to take revenge form Priya , for spoiling the full family's mood ...

While ram thought Priya to lie, She drove back to Mumbai , direct to her office to attain the clients on urgent basis . She wanted to make Kartick's future secure , by getting the biggest deal of her life with the Japanese clients ...




What's Next awaiting for Ram and Priya ... Is it not true that " Only one misunderstanding , if not worked on at the very right time , can destroy a relationship forever' how will Ram and Priya will cope up with teh situation , or it will get more worse by the time ...

Edited by IM__NB - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update..
Misunderstandings r really d base of al probs..
Hope u cum up vid d nxt soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
great that ram and his family has accepted nuts kartick relationship and agreed for their marrige but can't understand wat is ram hiding form priya a small mu can create big problems on other ayesha is upto something hope raya sort out their problems
continue soon the update was fab thanx for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice..curious to know wats next..pls update soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
progressing well... so a big MU between RaYa... :(
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Posted: 11 years ago
super long update :):) update soon pls..
Hope evrythng will b gud btwn raya pls
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update
Uff...ya misunderstandings...aur raya...
hope next update they solve their mu. 😔
continue soon!!!
and thanks 4 pm!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
thank you for the pm.
interesting update
will this be the start of the reason for their separation?
knowing about priya's past and her dislike about lying i think ram should be more cautious in handing priya
very much anxious to know what would happen next
continue soon...


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Posted: 11 years ago
Thx for the pm.
One more brilliant update.
Priya n ram fighting, the whole conversation in the car between raya, karnuts was funny n lovable.
Priya is more possessive towards her relation with ram, she is no wrong, when ram behaves n neglects her, n ayesha tries to intrude definitely things might go wrong. However strong, for a sec or so a person becomes suspicious, n ram n ayesha's conversation is making it more strong.
Loved their fight too.
Whats next
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for PM ..

aww this ayesha na. If there is nothing why did he go to her room again n again. there is something fishy he is not able to tell her the truth. Somewhere i suspect priya is going to take some drastic step. I dont think Priya is wrong. but I feel it was Ram's fault.

do update quick .. this was one ff i always wait for..

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