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Last chapter was so awesome blossom...

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Awesome

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But bhut chota tha
Rry nd taani no conversation

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CHAPTER FOUR

Taani and rey eating their food silently but Rey didnt like her silence


Rey (Himself) : taani aaj itna chup kyun hai...gharwalo ke saath toh chup hi nahi hoti aut mere saath chup hi raheti hai...should i start the convo...yeah .taani mere saath paheli baar bahar aai hai i should make her comfortable first

Rey : Taani
Taani look up at him
Taani : ji
Rey : can i ask u something
Taani : hmm

Taani innocently nodded her head for once Rey got lost in her innocence
Rey : Tumhe kese pta ki yeh sab meri fav dishes hai aur mujbe black paper se allergy hai

Taani : Voh mumma ne bataya tha shaadi se pahle
Rey : toh tumhe abhi tak yaad hai
Taani : haa

Taani again got busy in her food . . .
Rey (in mind) : yeh toh fir busy ho gayi ...koi baat ek aur baar try karta hu
Rey : so sanjeevni mein sab kesa chal raha
Taani : acha chal raha hai... vaha par sabhi bahut friendly hai
Rey : thats good
There was again silence

Taani (herself) : taani tu bhi kitni stupid hain ...rey kitna try kar rahe hai conversation start karne ki aur tu hai ki...ab khane par se dhayan hata aur thoda baat kar

Taani : aapke office kesa chal raha hai
Rey feels happy with her respones...soon both got comfortable with each other and start talking freely without any hesitation

After sometime both finish their food and moves out from restaurant

Both are walking toward their car When taani notice a ice cream stall...Taani wants ice cream but she is feeling little hesitate to ask him
But rey had already notice her childish Expressions of craving for ice cream
Rey grab her hand and take her to ice cream stall...taani look at him in amusement
Rey : which flavour u want
Taani : strawberry
She answered him in her sweeetest voice

ice cream wendor gave them two strawberry ice cream
Taani was eating her ice cream like a child and rey was looking at her intensly...feeling extremly happy seeing her smile

Taani was super busy in her ice cream totally forgeting about her surroundings...she was crossing a road as their car was park on other side of road...a car was coming in full speed toward her but she didnt seem to notice

Rey notice the full speed car moving toward taani...he was shock but soon come out he need to save...He ran in full speed and save taani on time...Both lost their balance and fall on ground...Rey on top of taani


Rey hug taani tightly the fear of loosing her was most hurtful thing for him...he cant afford to loose her

Both stood up...taani was still shock...what might have happen he didnt save her

Taani : Th..thank you R..rey
But rey again hug her assuring himself that she is safe
Rey : tum theek hona
Taani : ha main theek hu

Rey Broke the hug still holding her in his arms...He kiss her forehead..eyes..cheeks and finally He place his lips on her...this kiss is not of any desire or lust but it is a kiss of Love ...Rey wanted to feel her...he wanted to satisfied himself that she is safe and with HIM

He kiss her pouring his love for her in kiss while taani was shock to react on anything

He kissed her till he felt breathless...he broke the kiss and look at her his eyes were teary

Rey : tumhe kya ho gya tha u should be careful while crossing road what if some thing happen to you
He ask her in little angry yet concern filled voice...taani felt haapy after seeing his concern

Taani : sorry

Rey : its okay...come lets go home
rey held her hand securely in his and cross the road

IN CAR
Both were silent...bothe are remembering the Kiss but not to dare to talk to each other

They reach home...evryone in house were fall asleep as its already 12...they thought not to distrube anyone...Both entered in their room

Taani : main change karke aati hu
Rey nodded his head...he change in room itself

IN WASHROOM

Taani look at her reflection in mirrior...her gaze went on her swallon lips...this is the effect of his kiss

Taani (himself) : Rey ne mujhe kiss kiya...iska matlab kya woh bhi mere liye kuch feel karte hain...unka concern...unka pyaar se daanta...uff taani tu bhi kya sochne beth gayi...jaldi change kar aur so ja...kal swayum bhayia ki shaadi ki shopping ke liye bhi jaana hai



taani comes out of washroom after changing...rey was sitting on bed...taani walk toward bed and took the pillow and was about to walk away but rey hold her wrist

taani look at him in confusion

rey : kya tum bed par so sakti ho pls

taani look confuse with his sudden change of behaviour but nodded her head in yes seeing his serious face


taani laid on othe side of bed..soon fall asleep...rey too laid beside her n kept looking at her
Rey (himself) : tumne mujhe kitna dara diya tha...if something had happen to you i cant able to live anymore...par mene ese kyun react kiya aur voh kiss..kya mujhe sach main tumse pyaar ho gaya hai

after few minutes of thinking about taani

rey : ha mujhe pyaar ho gaya hai aur iss baar sacha wala...that time i thought that i was in love with kriya but now i know that i dont love her neither that time i loved her that was just a stupid attaraction but after u came in my life i know what real love is...pyaar kya hota hai yeh mene tumse sikha hai...i love you taani

with this realisation rey too slept embrace her in his arms hugging her tightly

IN MORNING

Taani woke up first and the scene infront of her was shocking one...Rey was sleeping beside her hugging her tightly like a child hug his teddybear

"Hey krishna ji kya yeh sach hai" Taani thought not able to belive

Taani saw the time its already 7:30...she is late today...taani tries to remove his handfrom her waist without waking him but he tighten his grip on her and pull her more into him
In last taani decided to wake him up
Taani : Rey

She shook him little praying to god that he dont yell at her because he rMIL told her that rey didnt like if anyone distrube his sleep


Taani : rey
Rey : hm..hmm
he moan in sleep
" kitne cute lag rahe hai " she thought
Taani : rey wake up

this time rey open his eyes amd see her face so close to his this is the best scene ever...he look at her lovingly

Rey : good morning
Taani : good morning

Rey again lost in her cute face
Taani : mujhe jaana hai
Rey *still lost* : kahan
Taani : kitchen
Rey *comes in sense* : okay

Taani look at his hand which is on her waist...rey too look at their position and understood...he unwillingly take his hand back...taani got up and goes in washroom for get ready.

while in room rey was smiling like an ediot with his new found feelings
Rey (himself) : I SO LOVE YOU TAANI


hope i did justice with this chapter

Edited by -SunShine - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
res/unres
this update was awesome
just love it a lot
taani ka accident honewala tha...😲
and taarey kiss 😳
finally rey realized that he loves taani 😃
pls update soon... waiting for tr confession
Edited by khyati2000 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
aawww...so sweet updt...dil garden garden ho gaya...
love the way rey is trying to start a convo wid her...and finally they r comfortable wid each other...taani want ice creame and rey understand it...aawww,lovely...the kiss scene was so sweet...finally rey realise his feelng...morning scene is so adorable...cant explain how much i loved it...waiting for his confess...pls updt soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome yr
loved the way rey tried 2 start the convo
and the kiss superb and loved rey's realisation
superb update thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
It was awesome dear...
Yipieee! Rey realized his feelings for Tani!
Such a cute & romantic update!
The icecream scene was awesome!
Rey KISSED tani! Omg! 😉
Wow! Rey smiling to himself, just makes it more clear that he's madly in love with her!
Pls update next part soon!!

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