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Krishika

@Krishika209

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

ohh zats y u were nervous😛

ress ress

Unress now..

First Congo for a new story..

I must say very good try deary😳 hehehe

Well Arshi are so full with pranks yaaar, they are so cute while fighting..

Lol Chuhiya!!! 🤣 hahahaha gud one😊

Aaaw poor Khushi she got slapped although she was not in fault..

Years passed, their friendship grown with much pranks, that's real friend 😆

Oh now what happened, did their parents got an accident!!

Now i think they had passed away and to keep their friendship alive Arshi will become, AND if it's like that Am pretty excited to read more... 😊

Update Soonish My Khoon barii taang🤣

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ARSHI FF FORCED LOVE BECOME LIFE https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3664505/arshi-ff-forced-love-become-life-link-to-t2-on-page-1

ARSHI FF FAKE LOVE https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3715331/arshi-ff-fake-love-thread-2-link-on-page1-26-1

Edited by Krishika209 - 11 years ago

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ssyahoo

@ssyahoo

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

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First of all jas congratulations on your first piece of writing! Loved your concept of Arnav and Khushi sharing a special relationship since childhood. Great job incorporating their naughtiness and special moments in their past, which will surely help define their future.

Khushi's nickname "Chuhiya" was too cute! Sorry for the late unreserve as my AD is very busy. Will read next two parts soon so I can find out how the childhood friendship blossomed into something more :)

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drashtimeetu

@drashtimeetu

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Awsome update
loved it
why I think there parents ka accident ho gya hoga
or may be they will be dead

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

FANTASTIC update 👏

Arnav and khushi fight like a tom and jerry even they grow up.

Chuhiya and laad governor😆

Their are dearest to each other mom.

Worst news of his life???? i think their parents died.

Update next part ASAP.

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_Chaverah_

@_Chaverah_

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Jeez!! That was beautiful! First piece of work & a tremendous way of pulling it out! All the best buddy! Thanks a lot for the PM.. Do continue and plz do send me the PM.. Would love to read more!!

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Aliza

@ChamakChalloO

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Wow very nice story really loved it nice work continue and write more loved it pm me next time for sure loved it so so much 🤗

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Milsha

@Dandelion.

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Wow is this your first? :O It's fab, Jas! I think your should write more ;) And yeah, PM me the next part pileej! 😆😉

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Uthra

@Viji79

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

This was indeed a surprise Jas !!

Aaaw!! Thanks for the dedication jassi. You know I love you !! 🤗

The story has a great start !! It is very difficult to tell a story about kids and you have done it with ease. 👏

The friendship between the Raizadas and the Guptas is very endearing. It was also a sweet thought that Arnav was attached to Garima and Khushi to Ratna. I did not have a good feeling when the kids promised never to leave each other to each others mothers.

That they continued to fight even after years is very logical.

The next update is going to be very sad I guess. I am bracing myself for it.

A very beautifully written story for a first attempt. 👏👏👏

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Skiran

@Skiran

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Res 🥳
UnRes

Chota Arnav with jaw clenched and fists tightened..awesome 😊 'what the' bhi bolta 😆

Loved Ratna - Khushi relationship(reminded me of LI 😃) , the sweet bond they share ❤️
Garima and Arnav's bond is amazing, with her making little Arnav understand that ArHi need to take care of each other..too good 👏

Wow! Amit,Ratna, Shashi, Garima were friends at college. The families share mutual love for their kids which is shown aptly. I adored the atmosphere of both the families with their naughty kids and their petty fights

But the phone call is making me apprehensive 😔

Waiting the next part already..😊

Congratulations Jas for your first story on IF and it is a superb start..loved it 👏 ⭐️ 🤗

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

OMG...😲 Jas...u write so well...👏 kab se...apni talent chupa kar rakhi thi...😉 😛

this is so cute and adorable... LI ki flashbacks ki yaad dila di...but here Arnav too is naughty...their cute fights, shararat, playing pranks, yet defending other...beautiful...loved the relationship between Ratna-Khushi & Garima-Arnav...and Khushi is Chuhiya...like really...even years after teenager ArShi still fights like Tom & Jerry...Its so enjoyable to read...But what bad news Jas, what happened, and whats awaiting for us next...continue soon dear...