If only the CVs had cast me in this role - Day 2

Sumer , one of Mohini's ladlas came into the house at lightning speed to take on Rudra and avenge the humiliation of mother and bhabhi at Rudra's hands... He starts to break open the door to his ( Rudra's room ) but is stopped at the nick of time by Rudra ... They come to fisticuffs and he treminds Rudra of the scar he has given him in his childhoold ( Voldemort) style .. Insults are traded and things get violent ... he almost gets a scar of his own ... but then Chachaji intervenes and he gets a slap instead!!

I feel that while the fight was good , the dialogs could have been better.

If the CVS had chosen me for Sumer , here's my dialog... this would have surely done more than the insult dialog from childhood😛

Sumer : Comes running into the house shouting "I will see how Rudra occupies my room"!😡

Rudra : Pulls Sumer away from the door in the nick of time... and holds him by the scruff of his shirt..😡.

Here's where the dialog changes into Hindi as the spirits of Shashi and AB enter Rudra and Sumer but with a twist!!😉

Sumer : Jiss raaste pe tum chal rahe ho uska anjaam tumhe patha hai?

Rudra : Haan patha hai... Jiss raaste pe tum chal rahe ho uska anjaam bura hi hoga...

Sumer :Bura kyun... tum to Chandangarh chhodke bag gaye the... Aaj bhi mera diya hua nishaana hai tumhaare paas... aur kuch nahin!!

Rudra : Kya nahin hai mere paas , BSD mein major ki naukri , dedh saare phatphatiye , dedh saare raybaan , yeh ghar aur Pa( bites tongue)... tu to wahi ka wahi reh gaya... Tere paas kya hai... Yeh nishaan bhi nahin hai jo mere paas hai

Sumer : Mere paas maa hai!

Mayhem!!!!!!!!!!!

Audience : Kya insult tha!!! See CVs , I can write jhakaas dialogs too!

Apologies to the original from Deewar and AB and Shashi!!!