Rey Ki Bassanti ~ KriYaansh SS *NOTE On Pg. 11*

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Heya peeps!!!!
Kaise ho???
I m here with a new dhamakedaar stroy!!! Waise pehchaana mujhko?


Nahi toh koyi baat nahi mahi bata deti hu m Nikki 😃 Kya Hua shocked? Don't be..😆

common yaar mai bhi likh sakti hu, haa yaha ke great writers ki tarah nahi but mujhe mai bhi ek chutku si writer hai 😳

I had a lot of fun while writing this ss... So guys ready to read a masti bhara ss???
Hope aap log bhi uthna hi enjoy kare while reading it

Guys this is my first attempt to write something,hope u all like it
agar pasand nahi aaya toh ur free to throw jhoota,chappals on ABHI 🤣

chalo bohth hogayi meri bakwas


INDEX
chappy 1- page 1
chappy 2- page 6
Note. - page 11

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Posted: 11 years ago
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welcome again,here is the part-1 of this SS,hope u like it
arey ha bolna bhool gayi,this SS have only 3 parts,actually TS socha tha lekin kuch jyaada hi hogaya.

so finally a big thnx to my bacha devil party (SIM,ABHI,NEHA) 🤗,who helped n enocuraged me to write this.

happy reading,neeche milte hai

After Mini Mela Kriya Was Sitting in her room and thinking about her life, just some time back she got to know abt Rey-taani relation,Kriya gets upset.

"kriya ye tu kya kar rahi,ithna kyu soch rahi hai tu toh yehi chahti thi na ki rey apni life mai move on kare tujhe bhulake,toh tujhe ithna dhook kyu horaha hai,lekin wo mujhe ithni jaldi bhool gayee.kya rey aur mera pyaar ithna kamzor thak ki wo ithni jaldi kisi aur meri jagah dedi. Enough kriya ab tu rey ke baare bilkul nahi sochegi,tu kuch din mai se yahase chali jayegi n rey bhi kuch din mai tujhe bhool jayenge,so from now enjoy the last moment in india with ur friends n STAY AWAY from rey" With this she rubbed her tears n fell asleep.

Next Morning she woke up with a determination that she will move on in life,she will no more cry for the person who forgot her soo easily.But she thought that she will fulfill her friends dreams by HOOK or CROOK

"chal kriya bohth late hogaya,tujhe tayar bhi toh hona n abse no thinking about reyaansh... hmmm reyaansh who kon hai,mai koyi reyaansh ko nahi jannti aur jana bhi nahi chahiti (with full attitude), mai toh sirf apne friends ka sapna poora karna chahti hu aur wo mai karke hi rahungi" with a broad smile on her face she calls someone n talk to the person n soon she gets ready with her luggage so they can start for rey's farmhouse.

While she moving oout with luggage in her,with great difficulty pulling it rey came to her to see whether she is ready or not

R-arey kriya yeh tum kya kar rahi ho,mujhe bulaleti mai tumhari help karne aajata. Give the luggage to me,mai lejavunga

K-no thanx Mr.Singhania,I don't need to help,mai khud aapna kaam karsakti hu,waise bhi I have troubled u a lot by staying at ur place

R-kria ye tum kya bolrahi ho,maine khud tumhe yaha lekar aaya tha n tumhe help karne mai mujhe koyi problem nahi hai.

K-Mr.Singhania...

Before she could say anything swayam came there

Sw-hey kria kaisi ho,tumhari taabiyat kaisi hai

K-hey swayam,m perfectly fine ab toh pair mai jyaada dard bhi nahi hai

Sw-pair mai dard nahi hai,iska matlab yeh nahi ki tum dance karsakti ho,u still need to take rest n chalo mai tumhe car tak lejaungi

K-sure mera Best Friend mujhe utana chahta hai toh mai ye mauka kaise jane desakti hu

R-swayam tu rehne de mai kriya ko lekar avungi

Sw-nahi rey tu kria ka luggage lekar aaja mai kria ko lejathu hu

With this swayam lift kriya n walk out

R-ye kria ko kya hogaya,ithna different behave kyu kar rahi thi

Sw-rey jaldi chal sab tere hi wait kar rahe hai

Gang hires a bus n start their journey towards rey's farmhouse, throughtout the journey everyone were enjoying except rey because kria was planly ignorin him as if he doesn't exit. It was soo difficult for him to stayaway from,he is used to pamper her but suddenly everything is changed, he still don't know y she was avoiding him.

They reached rey's farmhouse at 9pm,all were soo tired because of travelling so without talking much they had their dinner n drifted into sleep.

Next Morning everyone was in garden having a gala time when they heared car screeching sound n they turned to see who it is,there was Taani with Vishesh, everyone was happy to see them.

TaaVish greeted everyone,even kria,taani was soo glad to see kria there

Rey was shocked to see taani there but later he was happy because she is moved on in her life n is happy with vishesh,without any hard feeling he greeted taani n hugged vishesh.

Kria dint see all this,she was avoiding to look at rey,she thought he will be happy seeing his love n may be sad because she is with someone else. She thought rey still love taani n she know the pain to see her love with someone else.

While kria was thinking there was another sound n a Handsome Guy was out of the car n coming near them,all were confused to see him, no one knew who was he???

Kria sensed the silence n looked up to see what happen n a big smile crept on her face when she saw the person infront of her, without giving a thought that her leg is hurt she ran n hugged the guy tightly, the guy stumbled for a sec but got hold on himself n hugged her back with equal force.

All were shocked to see this but one soul was burning (u might have guessed till now)

K-karan tum yaha,kab,kaise,kyu

Ka-shhh relax baba pehle sans toh lele

K-ouch mera pair, holding her leg

Ka-princess kya huva, with a worried face

R- kria tum pagal hogayi kya,ur leg is injured n ur running, before he can continue karan spoke

Ka-kya princess ko chot lagi,ye kya hai kritz tu aapna khayal nahi raksakti n ithna bhagne ki kya zaroorat hai,mai toh tere pass aane wala tha na, with an angry epression

K-sorry muffin mai tujhe dekar ithna excite hogayi ki mai bhool gayi thi ki my leg is injured, with a cute face

Ka-ok now stop making faces, don't worry ab mai agaya hu tujhe sambalne, with this he kissed her cheek

All gals were like awww they are sooo cute,but something is burning badly

K-arey muffin mai toh tujhe sabse introduce karwana hi bhool gayi, (to gang) guys this is karan my bestesssttt friend in NY

With she introduced karan with each n everyone,later everyone left to have lunch

Rey was still in garden thinking about kria-karan, he was hell angry n jealous but even he don't know the reason, there was a mini-bar in farmhouse he went there n drank till he lost his senses

It was night n everyone was searching for rey,then they heared a thud sound from terrace n all looked up to see what happened. There stood rey with bear bottle on the edge n dancing

G-rey tu upar kya kar raha hai,neeche utar

R-dosotooo mai suicideee kar raha hu suicideee,in slur tone

G-kyaaa all with shocked expression


rey sucide karega ya nahi,ye jaane ke liye bane rahiye mere saat next update thak

till then tata bye bye 😆

ok guys if u like it,neeche ek like button hoga, ripya karke usse press kijiye n agar pasand aaya toh comment bhi kijiye 😃

mai bhagging yaha se n haa yaad haina,jhoota chappals for abhi not me 🤣

abhii ke aane se pehle mai toh nikli yaha se



Edited by Princess_Devil - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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😃 res!!!!
meinne first res Kia!!
unres!!!!! Yuhhhuuu
didu pehle sholly !!!
and den didu!!! Luv uu!!!!! :*
waah di kya mast likha hai aapne bahut hi mast!!!!
waah di waah!!!! I m telling start writing!!!!
accha ab cuming to the update...
wooowww kria ka changed behavior her attitude it is awesomeee loving it!!!!
phir kria ka bhvior towards rey hahahahahahaaa
mr.singhania!!! Hahahahahahaaa and den s
wayam ki entry mast scene!!!!!
rey jealous!!! Hahhahahaaa uska janam sidh adhikar :p
taavish ki entry didn't matter... :p
but karan ki entry!!! Wooowwwiiieee!!!!!
luvd DAT kria-karan convo!!
rey drunk hahahahaaa
yuhhhuuu!!! Di bahut mast!!!! M loving it!!!! :*
Edited by arsha_simran - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res
finaly m unresing..
Unress...

Nikki firts thing kamini marja tu..

Kamini meri waat lagyi tu..huh ese dost hote hai..

Haye haye meri kamini itna aacha likhti hai mujhe pata hi nhi tha..

Aacha hua ab pata chalgya ab toh tujhe update likhwane lagaongi hi me..

Aacha aacha now coming towards updat...

Awsum update nikki loved it..

Haye kriya got to knw abt rey nd taani..

Haye kriya ka change behavior..

Eeppss karan wahi haye..wow uski entry nice..

Loved karan nd kriyas convo cute tha..

By god rey drunk..omg

that scene gosh mera haas haas ke pet dhuking..

Update soon toh bol nhi sakti as u already have updated..

So sorry nikki unres nhi karne ko..
Edited by Abhilashaarsha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Resss!!
*evil laugh*
u said no posting..
Res karne ko na nai kaha tha 😉 😉

Unresss...
Nikki ruk ja ek minit..
😆
😆
😆
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Haan ab bol.. Maine pet bharke hans liya!!
Kya mast likha yaar?!!
N u say main filmy hu!! Seriously???
Oh god!! How cn any1 nt fall fr this jealous rey!! Hayyyeee!!
I so luv kria's attitude!!
The best part nikks is tht tune pehle hi kria ko taani ka truth bata diya..
Chalo mu kam hogi..!
But no.. The best ws d one n only..
SUCCCIIDDEEE!!!
Lol lol lol!!
Hayyyeee nikki kya superrr ss h!!
Luvd kriyaansh!!
Luvd this ss!!
Luv ya!! ❤️
Edited by Lovelylavender - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congo nikki...a new story...maze hamare to...
All the best
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Posted: 11 years ago
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waiting fr the update of the story ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its so interesting
awesome start
loved it
update next part soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesum update...
Loved d first part...
Karan-Kriya scene was good.

Rey ko aur Thoda jealous karao...😉
Do cont soon..
N
Thnks fr d pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved it
rey as a dhramender

waiting fr hungama
cont soon

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