taarey os concrete angle

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Posted: 11 years ago
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this is a story of a girl name taani who used to be abused everyday by her mom. she din't have her dad with her. her mom used to hit her everyday.

a 7 girl is sobbing in a room cause her mom hit her this happened every day but today she missed her dad very much. she wanted some body to embrace her to be with her to comfort her but she was all alone. with all bruises on her arms and legs. it was hurting her she wanted to get away from that pain she wanted to be happy.

the little sad soul slept there only crying.

the next day

the girl woke up the next morning went the rays of the sun hit her face she sees the time and it was 7:30 her school starts at 8:00. she had no one who could care for her. make her ready for school just like all mothers did for their children. she got ready wearing the same clothes that she wore yesterday. brushed her teeth and left for school taking her lunch box that she packed.

She walks to school with the lunch she packed
Nobody knows what she's holding back
Wearing the same dress she wore yesterday
She hides the bruises with the linen and lace,oh

she walks on her way to school on reaching school she sees all children happy playing enjoying and laughing walking past through them she sees a girl hugging her mother and her mother kissing her forehead and saying good by to the girl oh how she missed all she she wished even she would get loved.
she entered the school and sat on her desk she could see all her classmates chit chating until the teacher enters.

The teacher wonders but she doesn't ask
It's hard to see the pain behind the mask
Bearing the burden of a secret storm
Sometimes she wishes she was never born


the class starts the teacher see the bruises on her arms but chucks it off. it was break time all the children were playing but she was sitting there under a tree and watching them. then from no where a boy comes and sits beside her. he passes a smile at her she does the same. she smiled after a long time she felt good.

Through the wind and the rain she stands hard as a stone
In a world that she can't rise above
But her dreams give her wings and she flies to a place
Where she's loved concrete angel


they started talking. they became good friends. he used to used to crack one of his stupid jokes and she used to laugh her heart out. and he used to just look at her and smile.
they played the hole day taani din't go back to her school after break. she had fun with rey she went to a park and played with him after all they were 7year olds. after playing a lot they go home hand in hand.

Somebody cries in the middle of the night
The neighbors hear but they turn out the light
A fragile soul caught in the hands of fate
When morning comes it will be too late

as she reached home they leave their hands she walks upto the door and turns around to look at him he passes a smile at her she does the same and enters the house and goes straight to her room she was scared that her mom would be angry and hit her.
she goes to her room window and to her suprise taani sees rey at the neighborhood's window the windows were close to each other she gets a smile on her face looking at him. they were talking and like always he made her smile. but suddenly out of no where taani's mom entered and caught taani's arm in a tight grip and started shaking her and yelling at her. taani just her face to meet rey's he was looking at her with a confused look and then it changes in to an angry one.
taani's mom grips her face in a tighten grip and turns taani to face her in a way now taani was facing her mom again. rey realized that her life story was just like his. taani's mom drags was yelling at her and shaking her rey couldn't stand the sight and just turned his face down. taani's mom drags her to the right side of the room so know rey couldn't see her but he could see her shadow in the other half of the room her mom was hitting her he could hear her screams but couldn't do anything he looks up praying to god that she is fine.


Through the wind and the rain she stands hard as a stone
In a world that she can't rise above
But her dreams give her wings and she flies to a place
Where she's loved concrete angel

the next scene
the ambulance and the police arrived all the people from the neighborhood were gathered there. rey was standing there and watching all this with tears in his eyes he couldn't do anything. her body was taken. taani's mother was taked to the jail.

A statue stands in a shaded place
An angel girl with an upturned face
A name is written on a polished rock
A broken heart that the world forgot


the next scene
the funeral was going on taani's name was written on the graves stone. all the ceremonies got completed. he gave a last glance to the grave and turned around and went past through a man standing behind him no one noticed him. and there he sees his angle standing with a smile on her face he hugs her and catches her had and takes her with him to a place where there were about 20 kids who were all abused by their parents and pulled to death. they were all little angles. she sees all of them and goes running to them they all hug her and start jumping happily. rey smiles looking at her he also goes there. no more tears no more pain she was know in another world. she would get all the happiness that she ever wanted she is gonna live her live with all of her friends and the most important person who was her prince her rey. rey was an indeed her angle who made her happy no matter what.

Through the wind and the rain she stands hard as a stone
In a world that she can't rise above
But her dreams give her wings and she flies to a place
Where she's loved concrete angel


i know i know this was crap. this was my first ever os.
please comment








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Humzy thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow loved it
Felt bad for taani
Just awsm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res/unres
it was so beautiful
& lovely os
keep rocking dear😊
Edited by navk - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great imagination...
Wonderful imagination..

U were superb..
No one can guess its ur first time...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome story
luv each n every part
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amazing os... :)
concept was awsum...:)
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this is beautiful. It has that essence that made me about to cry. You know what you did a fab job and yeah I LOVE YOU FOR THIS🤗👏 keep doing good work
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its soo emotional
u made me cry
ur great writer

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