TaaRey SS : Tujhko Jo Paaya {Completed}

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Pooja

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Posted: 12 years ago

#221

Originally posted by: poorni_vishali
superb update loved tat rey notice everything abt taani😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

#222

Originally posted by: hima_taarey
Heart throbbing chapter
I cant explain hw well u wrote
Simply superb
Update soon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#223

Originally posted by: divi_divyana
Update is fantastic.. Rey checking out taani.. Hope he wil acept his felings soon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#224

Originally posted by: shamanbk
Fantastic job
Loved the button scene
Yay, Rey to realize his feelings, can't wait
Please update soon and pm me

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Posted: 12 years ago

#225

Originally posted by: disha93
Awesome update!!!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago

#226

Originally posted by: navu
Wow update !!!
awieee...rey's care for taani :* <3
hmmm...lovdd the scene when whole family was busy talking and only rey left out 😆
thaankew Krishna ji..!!! rey ki shirt ka button todne ke liye !! 🤣
lovdd that moment sooo much...!!!
ohh...rey wasn't regreting it,,,hayeee <3
hmmm think beta rey think..!!!
KYA KARU HAYEE ,KUCH KUCH HOTA HAI !!! 🤣 🤣
lovely update dear :))
waiting for the next ;)
update soon !!!

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Posted: 12 years ago

#227

Originally posted by: Mon_tr
story har ek chapter p interesting hota ja raha h..awesome.egarly waiting 4 nxt part.sry 4 late

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Posted: 12 years ago

#228

Originally posted by: shreya_VD_AJS
rey's care fr taani so cute ...
loved da update

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Posted: 12 years ago

#229

Originally posted by: Sona_loveVD
awesome updt
loved to see rey care and concern for taani
nd noticing her every move
eagerly waiting for nxt part
updt soon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#230

CHAPTER THREE

HERE WITH TAANI

she was thinking that rey didnt like her being close to him and thats why he left from there without saying anything.A tear fall from eyes her eye thinking that he has no feelings for her...taani wipe tear and left for sanjeevni.

IN REYs OFFICE

Rey was trying hard to forget what happen between them but its not happenning their morning encounter was coming infront of his eyes n he cant able understand what is happening to him
But on the other side his father was planning to bring this souls together.

Reys dad call him in his cabin

Rey : yes dad you called me
RD : yes rey i want you to take taani out for dinner today
Rey : but dad
RD : I not here to listening ur no n but...tumahri shaadi ko one month ho gaya hai but aaj tak tum taani ko kabhi bahar nahi lekar gaye
Rey knows that there is no point in arguing with his father so agreed for dinner
Rey : Okay dad...ill call taani n tell ger about dinner

Rey goes from there
RD (himself) : rey tumhe khud taani ko bahar lekar jaana chahiye naaki mujhe tumhe yeh karne ke liye kahena chahiye...hope rey tum jaldi hi taani ki importance samajh jao issse pahle ki der ho jaaye

IN REYs CABIN

Rey : now what to do...yeah i call taani but agar usne mere saath dinner par aane ke liye mana kar diya toh...but ek baar try kar deta hu

He dialed taanis number...taanis cell ringed she look at the caller id n get happily shocked as this is the first he is calling her...she picked up the call

Taani : hello
This is the sweetest voice he ever heard
Taani : hello...rey r u there
Rey come back to his sense

Rey : he..hello taani i called you to ask that
Taani : ji
Rey : kya hum aaj dinner ke liye jaa sakte hai

First taani was not able to understand...is this true her husband is asking for dinner...she was very happy
Taani : okay
Rey can feel happiness in her voice...he too smile
Rey : theek hai...bye
Taani : bye
Rey wanted to talk to her but dont know what to talk

IN NIGHT
Rey come he was feeling very excited reason he himself dont know. . . he entered in his room and the sight infront of made him rooted on his spot
Taani was looking drop dead gorgeous in Net saree he was totally lost in her . . . he notice her from Head to toe in last his gazed stop on ger red lucious lips. . . he so wanted to taste them than he notice that she is looking very nervous and her one hand on back

Few minutes back. . . taani was trying to tie the knot of dori of her blouse when rey entered in room so she instantly turned toward the door and her dori is still open

Rey come out of his dreamland and ask her
Rey : What happen taani . . . why are standing like this

Taani : vo. . Voh

Than notice through mirrior that her blouse string was open . . . he take step toward her . . . while she look at him in confusion
Rey keep his hand on her shoulders and turned her

Rey take the string in his hand. . . his hand touch her skin . . . Rey tie the dori in the process his hand touch her bare back . . . Rey was lost in her. . . hus fingers crassed her soft skin taani was breathing fast

With sudden knock on door both come back to sense
Rey curse himself for loosing control on himself again but he can do after being so close to her he cant able to control himself

Both go downstair. . . looks like their family was very happy with their dinner date

Rey : dad mom we are going...
RD RM : Okay. . . have fun
They bid bye them n drove to restaurant . . . whole journey was silent one both were feening this new feeling

They entered in restaurant. . . Waiter came and escorted them to their table . . . Rey p pulled a chair for her. . . taani smiled and sat on chair he too sat on chair opposite to her

A waiter came there n ask them to order. . . Rey ask taani to order food for them Taani ordered his fav dishes and rey was surprised how she know he become more shock when she tell waiter to not to put black paper in food as rey has allergy from black pappr

They ate there dinner but rey was lost in her . . . in her cuteness he was totally mesmrise by her beauty

All the chappals n tomatos r welcome for this bakwaas update but not eggs m pure vegeterian😳 i know bad joke😆

pls tell me hows it critism is also welcome

Edited by -SunShine - 12 years ago