REVENGEFUL LOVE #6 Part 47 updatd on P-121 & Teaser P-122 4/1/201 - Page 51

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Posted: 11 years ago

superb update and all excited about the teaser
amazing
please continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
oye teri likes ka target poora ho gaya n ab tho maine b like kr diya ab update kr jaldi :P ;-)

sbse phle ek tight wala hug n love both bhabhi ko...sach me ye maaneet ki mother h yaar...kitna kuch kiya h dono ne maaneet k liye...
hmmm tho brij geet ko Canada le k gaya ...mujhe laga hi tha aisa hi kuch hoga...uff 10 days me maan nai aa paya bcoz bad weather k wajah se flight late ho gai...n geet ne apni wrist cut kr li...mujhe tho pata tha k iss baar tu geet ko hospital bhejegi bcoz tune phle hi kh diya tha k maan ko ab kuch nai karegi...

babu ab main chahti hu ye dono bhabhi na apni apni families ko jam k sunaye ...unka jo ego h na uski band bajaye
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Posted: 11 years ago
ur likes quota is completed ab to update do plsss
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waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sorry thoda late reply kar rahi hu, but am so... happy ki both bhabhis I mean somya and aeysha are helping maaneet, yeh brij ka dimag sach me khisak gaya hai, how can he do this to his own sister, aur geet, I just hope ki maan aye aur do tin kas ke brijko lagaye aur geet ko unse jeet le but in the right way, I mean with both the families ashirwaad and all...
Waiting do continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome 👏updates 44-45

felt fab for maaneet
😭 ... both r in so much pain...actually all r in pain ... but others ego is big then their children happiness

hats off to somya n ayesha .
👏... love both ladies
they did fab job

somya arrange all for maan n sent him

omg..
😲. geet cut her wrist ...


teaser... maaneet meeting ...wow

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nikkirocksss

oye teri likes ka target poora ho gaya n ab tho maine b like kr diya ab update kr jaldi :P ;-)

sbse phle ek tight wala hug n love both bhabhi ko...sach me ye maaneet ki mother h yaar...kitna kuch kiya h dono ne maaneet k liye...
hmmm tho brij geet ko Canada le k gaya ...mujhe laga hi tha aisa hi kuch hoga...uff 10 days me maan nai aa paya bcoz bad weather k wajah se flight late ho gai...n geet ne apni wrist cut kr li...mujhe tho pata tha k iss baar tu geet ko hospital bhejegi bcoz tune phle hi kh diya tha k maan ko ab kuch nai karegi...

babu ab main chahti hu ye dono bhabhi na apni apni families ko jam k sunaye ...unka jo ego h na uski band bajaye

thanx alot jaanu :*
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Vidhi24

Sorry thoda late reply kar rahi hu, but am so... happy ki both bhabhis I mean somya and aeysha are helping maaneet, yeh brij ka dimag sach me khisak gaya hai, how can he do this to his own sister, aur geet, I just hope ki maan aye aur do tin kas ke brijko lagaye aur geet ko unse jeet le but in the right way, I mean with both the families ashirwaad and all...
Waiting do continue soon...

thanx alot sweety
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: maanshi

<font size="3"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">awesome </font></font>👏<font size="3"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">updates 44-45

felt fab for maaneet</font></font>😭<font size="3"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif"> ... both r in so much pain...actually all r in pain ... but others ego is big then their children happiness

hats off to somya n ayesha .</font></font>👏<font size="3"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">... love both ladies
they did fab job

somya arrange all for maan n sent him

omg..</font></font>😲<font size="3"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">. g</font></font><font size="3"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">eet cut her wrist ...


teaser... maaneet meeting ...wow</font></font>
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thanx alot dear
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PART - 46

Beep... Beep... Beep... The sound of machine which giving the signals of her life is going dim by every passing second. Docs and nurses rushing to save her life at any cost. Her pulse is sinking. It seems she lost intrest in her life. She. Geet wont respond to any of her treatment given by the docs.

Maan's flight lands finally. His heart beat is beating much faster then ever. He is parted from her her for whole month. Some how he manage to breath in those gloomy days but now when he is so close to her,his throat is chocking. Heaviness lays on his chest as he is carrying heavy weight there. Shoulders and jaws get stiff. Rather getting happy his body reacting in totally different way. He himself was confused why this happening to him. Why he wont able to smile. Why his heart scared for her? Maan step out of plane. His feet kissed the land of Canada and strong cold breeze touched his body.

A long breath and monitoring machine show Geet's life line turn normal suddenly. The moment Maan landed on the land of Canada Geet again comes to life. Suddenly she start responding. All were amused,the girl who was on the verge of death,at sudden get back to life. Some kind of miracle is happens but what they wont understand. All doc sighed as she is out of danger now. Finaly they suceeded in overpowering her condition.

"congrats Mr. Singhania,your sister is out of danger now. Dont know how it happens but it is." Doc come out and informed shattred Brij. Doc not only save her life but also gave life to Brij and Ayesha.

Brij stood up and confirmed with doc once again. Doc again confirm with a wide smile. He asked to see her but they wont allowed as she is still under ovservation.

Maan came out of airport after clearing all formalities and looking for Samar. Samar saw him and run towrds him. Both met with a hug. Maan glance his face. He have a same expression of tension on his face which he have.

"Samar i want to see Geet right now." Maan said frequently.

"Maan wo..." samar's voice died in his throat. He wont found words to tell him the truth of Geet. He is fearing of his reaction. Maan himself was not well fully and now Geet's situatin is going to break him,he knows. Maan read his face and his frustration rosed.

"Samar what happened? Please tell me? Where is Geet? I want to see her. Lets go." Maan commands him.

"Maan wait yaar. Geet SM me nahi hai abhi." he said meakly.

"to kaha hai? Wo jaha bhi hai mujhe uske paas jana hai samjhe tum. Samar please dont tormenting me like this. I request you took me to her." Maan's voice contaning both helplessness and frustration. Every passing sec raising his unknown fear regarding Geet.

Samar hold his shoulders,"Maan Geet is waqt hospital me hai. Usne apni wrist ki nas kaat li and now her condition is complicated." Samar wont stare in his eyes,fearing of his reaction. Maan's heart skip many beats the moment he tell him about her. He felt as someone sucks his life energy from his body. His blood turn cold and legs shuddred badly. He become numb stuck for a minute.

"she cuts her vein but why?" Maan's voice fluffred. He whimpered meakly.Samar told him everything. Tears drps escape from his eyes. "Samar mujhe abhi jana hai meri Geet k paas. Please."

"i know how you feeling but its not a correct time. Maan waha security or Brij dono honge." Samar make him aware of the reality.

"i dont damn care about anyone. Today no one can stop me to reach my Geet. Samar if you scared then gave me the address i can manage at my own." Maan's frustration come out in a form of anger and he burst on Samar.

"i wont scare of anyone. Fine agr tum yahi chahte ho to. Par hume hospital pahunchane me kam se kam 5 ghante lagenge." Samar calmed him and both go to parking area. Samar drove the car at full pace. Maan's restlessness is rosing.

After two hours Geet came back to concious. Brij went to meet her but she turned to other side,showing her lack of intrest in talking to him. He broked with her rudness. Ayesha signaled him to come out.

"please Brij badi mushkil se hosh aaya hai. Ap pls use force mat kariye. Abi wo nahi karna chahti aapse baat." Ayesha make him understand,Geet's condition. His phone buzzed and his employee reminds of him some important and urgent meeting. Brij wants to deny but Ayesha compell him to for leaving. "dekhiye aap waise b yaha reh k kya karenge. Geet k liye doc hai or main hu."

"ok call me if any emergency is occur." he doent want to leave but Ayesha forced him seeing Geet's reaction. Brij left for a meeting. Ayesha taking care of her but Geet turn into a stone. Neither she talk nor she respond to any thing. Just laying like a life less body.

Samar and Maan reached to hospital. "Maan tum yahi ruko. Pehle main jake check kar leta hu. Please its a request." Samar wants to make sure about hurdels if any, in their meet way.

Nurse bring soup for Geet but she denied taking it.
Ayesha trying to convience her but Geet is not an easy task. Doc summon Ayesha. Ayesha went and leave her alone.

"nurse take this soup. I am not gonna suckle it." Geet said with a dominance. She is not looking at even there. Just hiding her face in pillow.

"agr main kahu tab bhi nahi." a voice grab her all attention. Her life less fragile body turn energetic and she twisted to another side. The glimpse of her life delighted her unbelievably. Where her all hopes died,she again get her source of life. Maan is just standing few inches away from her. Geet raised herself to touch her. Her dead eyes gleamed and dried lips curved into a smile. Her fragile body collect all her energy and she sat immediately. Maan come and sit near her.

Both's eyes shedding tears in a similar rythem. Geet raised her hand to touch him but Maan stopped her. "dont touch me. How could u? Itnasa b trust nahi tha apne Maan pe? Ek baar b nahi socha ki tume agr kuchh ho jata to mera kya hota. Is time maan to kar ra hai ek thappd lagau tumhari is harkat k liye. I wont forgive you Geet. Tum wo cheez kaise le skti ho jo tumhari hai hi nahi." Maan's fear come out and he burst on her. In pretext of scold he actually showring his love. He too died several time the moment he hear about her condition. Maan wont even care about his wounds for once. But Geet's one wound nearly killed him.

Geet slipped and hold his hand.
"hit me Maan. Isi bhane chuoge to sahi. You wont know how i spend past one month without you. Please Maan dont behave like this. I will die without you." Geet whimpered meakly. She is longing for his touch,for his immence love. Tears rolling over her pale cheeks.
Maan wont bear her in pain for any reason. He embraced her tight instantly and she too hugged him back.
Pulling her into his arms,he caress her back tenderly. She could feel the warmth of him. All pain vanished in this moment. Both met like they were seeing each other after ages. Maan kiised on her head many times and snuggle to him more and more just enough which she can bear in this delicate condition. Both crying constanty.

"i am sorry jaan. I am sorry. Please dont cry. I dont wanna hurt you,but promise me you never hurt yourself again." Maan repeats. She can sense the anguish sound of him.

Maan broke apart and cupped her face to kiss away the tears she clung to him,and when he kissed her mouth she kissed him back with all the love that was filling her heart. The room was chill,but she both felt cosy and warm in each other's embrace. Her eyelids drifting shut again. Her body is weak and she again felt sleepy. Maan read her body's silent language. He make her laid but she is getting possessive,not letting him go away from her. Her condition is like a small baby who always craving for her parents and clung their clothes to stay with them always. Maan laid by her side so she can laid comfortable and get some sleep.
Ayesha and Samar saw all the view from ouside. She is adoring both. Tears of happiness wet her eyes. "thanx Samar Maan ko yaha lane k liye. Dekh rae ho kaise jee uthi hai uske aate hi." Ayesha show her grattitude towards him.

"nahi aap please thanks mat kahiye aap b Somya di k jaise hi ho mere liye. Or firr inhe to milna hi tha. Bhagwan b nahi chahta ki ye alag ho. Subah jab apne Geet k bare me btaya to main bahut darr gaya tha. Par dekhiye Maan k aate hi wo theek ho gai."

"tumne Somya ko inform kiya? Please tell her also. She is getting worried for both."Ayesh reminds him.

"yes di i told her about them." Samar confirmed with a happiness.

Ayesha and Samar both get inside the room. Geet first scared as she wont know that Ayesha planned everything about Maan's arrival with Somya. Ayesha scanned her paniced eyes and tenderly stroke her head. "bachhe shant,i am not your enemy. So just relax."

Geet clung to him more."parzaiji please aap veerji ko Maan ke bare mat btana. Nahi to wo firr se Maan ko mujhse durr kar denge." Geet pleading to her. Her whimpering sound piercing her more.

"relax Geet Ayesha bhabhi is not against us. Tume pata hai yaha tak main sirf Somya or Ayesha bhabhi ki wajhse hi to pahuncha hu." Maan composed her by telling the truth to her.

"Angel brij loves you alot isliye wo ander se dare hue hai tere future ko lekar. Par main janti hu Maan really loves you. Or dekhna ek dinn wo b maan jaenge." she said softly in a soothing voice.

"Maan i think abi hume chalna chahie. Kaffi der ho chuki hai or Brij veerji kabi b aa skte hai. Khamkha scene ho jayega. Or firr Geet ko ab rest ki zarurat hai." Samar wants him to leave now as any time Brij can arrived in the hospital.

"no Maan is not going anywhere." geet told her decision instantly,hoglding his shirt more firmly. She dont want to parting with him again.

"Angel jidd nahi karte. Tujhe Maan se milna hai na wo kal firr ayega promise. Wont you trust me?" Ayesha monify her like a mother do with her child.

Geet burried herself more in Maan. Maan is also not less but he convience himself for her sake. He palmed her face."Geet Ayesha bhabhi is right. Let me go. I know you dont take rest unless i am here with you. I promise i will come tommorrow."Maan's voics is lacking confidence as he himself dont want to go and her teary eyes making more difficult for him to leave her.

Ayesha signaled Samar and both leave them alone for some moment. Maan kissed on her whole face. Both hugged each other in anticipation and stayed likes this for few minutes. He kissed on her lips last time before leaving the room...

PRECAP:- Geet get discharged and Maan climed again to meet her 😆

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