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Radhika

@perfection

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

hi guyzz am thinking of writing a stry😃 so shall i strt the stry.😊...i need support frm u guyz⭐️..if u guyzz will thn i will strt writing😃my concept..
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POV OF MANYATA...
I USED TO BE MY MOMS MOST LOVING DAUGHTER...MY DAD USED TO LOVE ME TO THE CORE...AND MY SMALL SIS WHO USED TO PLAY WID ME ...USED TO GO EVERYWHERE WHERE I GO...WE USED TO BE A VERY HAPPY FAMILY...BUT NOW AM ALL ALONE..
..WHERE ARE THOSE GOLDEN DAYS????WHERE???
THEY SNATCHED ALL HAPPINESS FRM ME...YA THEY SNACHED IT...THEY CANT SEE ME HAPPY THEY CANT...I AM ALIVE TO WORLD BUT FOR ME AM DEAD ...
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I KNW ITS TOO MUCH BAD :P..AND U GUYZZ ARE DEAD AFTER READING THIS BAD STRY🤢

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Nishaya

@Nash..

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

Nice prologue! Found it emotional and Yes! It wasn't bad at all (proof- i Am Alive ..lolz)

Do continue it. Would love to read.

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Radhika

@perfection

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Nash..
Nice prologue! Found it emotional and Yes! It wasn't bad at all (proof- i Am Alive ..lolz)

Do continue it. Would love to read.

thnk u so much.. i was losing my hope😭u encouraged me...i think others are died after the prolouge...😆

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

Hmm..Proologue is nice but You can add a Uday's part as well or his point of view to make the prologue interesting...😊

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angleroops

@angleroops

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

nice prologue
but wht happened with manyata
also show abt uday
plzzz update
continue soon
also pm me

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azwa

@fireroad99

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

i love it

so finally u got the courage to write a story i love it

can wait for ur next chapter just tip

add pictures to ur chapters of manveer

it will make it more intersting

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Radhika

@perfection

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: fireroad99
i love it thnx
so finally u got the courage to write a story i love it u can see no one is liking it...😭
can wait for ur next chapter just tip
add pictures to ur chapters of manveer i dont knw how to put a picture
it will make it more intersting ..

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Radhika

@perfection

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: angleroops
nice prologue ...thnx for ur precious cmnt
but wht happened with manyata ...thts the main stry of this stry 😆
also show abt uday ...ya obviously he is hero+villain of the stry..
plzzz update..if i get more appreciation
continue soon
also pm me ok i will😃

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nimra malik

@mimi.maik

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Posted: 11 years ago

awww i liked it...it was very emotional...i am curious to know what happened to manyata, that her life changes 😭 do continue it, i wanna read. 😃 and thanks 4 the p.m...good luck

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Radhika

@perfection

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: mimi.maik
awww i liked it...it was very emotional...i am curious to know what happened to manyata, that her life changes 😭 do continue it, i wanna read. 😃 and thanks 4 the p.m...good luck

u made me emotional😭😭😭😭😭😭😭thnx for appreciating my work...

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