Abhi Abhi Toh Mile Ho ~ KR OS ||KR/ArSha DancingAngels#200||

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Abhi Abhi Toh Mile Ho



It's been one week that Kriya got injured now she can walk properly without anybody's help only she cannot put more stress on her leg. And now in 3 days she has to leave India and have to go back to New York.

As Kriya was going back again so Rey arrange a small mini mella in his house only. They had lots of gol gape, soft candy and a cute fight on ice cream cone. They had lots of lots of fun. They were enjoying their day to the fullest and the with lots of LLHH 😆

At the end of the day Rey came near Kriya.

Rey: so kesa laga mera ye mini mella..??

Kriya: thank u so much Rey this was the most awesome day of my life I loved it a lot

Rey: are abhi khatam kidar hoa hai joh tum thank u boling abhi bhi ek baat baki hai...

Kriya: *confused* abhi bhi kuch baki hai..?? Kya baaki hai..??

Rey: Kriya tum ek wish bolo joh me pura karonga...

Kriya: wish..?? Rey iski kuch zarorat nhi hai this is enough I had lots of fun seriously.

Rey: Kriya mujhe pata hai tumhe bohot maza aya but ab tumhari wish ka time batao.

Kriya: but Rey...

Rey: WISH..!!

Kriya: aacha o.k... urrm meri wish hai ki urm haan mujhe chabilal chaiye.

Rey: *shocked* what..??

Kriya: *chirping like 5 year girl* haan mujhe chabilal chaiye...

Rey: NO

Saying this Rey went away. Due to Rey's denial Kriya becomes sad and quietly goes inside the house and sleeps. Rey comes in Kriya's room and see Kriya sleeping peacefully. Rey goes near her and smiles

Rey: sorry baatcutter but I told u there is a surprise.
Saying this he goes to sleeps.

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Next day Rey woke up early morning and as always he made a cup of coffee for Kriya and went to her room. Kriya was still sleeping.

Rey: abhi bhi us hi innocent's se soti hai ye.

Rey kept the coffee mug on side table and a small note too. And went away.
After sometime Kriya woke up and saw a coffee mug and a small note. She took the note and opened it and read

Heya Kriya,
Meet me at sharp 8 in college there is a surprise for u. I will send the car u just reach don't stress your leg much. I know as now m not in house u will do whatever u want so kuch chaiye hoga toh servants se kehe dena. Byes meet u soon.

Kriya looked at it with a sweet smile. And took coffee mug and started sipping it.

Kriya: *self talk* haye universe ji ek aur surprise..?? Kal toh mujhse gussa hoke chale gye and aaj wapis ek aur surprise haye ye surprise kya hoga..?? Err 8 baje tak me kese wait karongi universe jii...

Kriya was eagerly waiting for the clock to strike 8 but it looked like today it's not going to strike. Kriya read her novel, checked her e-mail, and had some girly talk with Sharon and many other things in this time period.

And finally her wait was over. A car came for her to take her to her surprise destination.
They soon reached the place. Kriya was confused as to why she is here and why Rey called her here.

Kriya: college..??

Driver: madam we have reached ye aapke liye hai.

Saying this he gave her a small note again. Kriya opened it and read it.

Heya Kriya,
So I know u are all excited for the surprise but thoda aur there. So ready for surprise miss Kriya..?? Aaram se chalke rehearsal hall me aajao. Byes meet u soon.

Kriya: rehearsal hall..??

Kriya walks to the hall. She was full totally surprise. Rehearsal hall was totally decorated with curtains and was light up by candle Kriya went inside.

Kriya: Rey..?? Aap kidar ho..??

Rey: are madam hum tuka apni peechan bataya tha na..?? Hum koi Rey vey nhi hai hum chabilal hai chabilal.

Kriya turn around and saw Rey standing there with bunches of white roses.

Kriya: *going towards Rey* Rey..??

Rey: are bolana chabilal...

Kriya: err chabilal jii ye sab kya hai aur Rey kidar hai..??

Rey: humka Rey baba ka phone aya tha. Kehe rahe the ki tura ko hum se milna tha toh socha milaao.

Kriya: Rey bus hogya na ye natak...

Rey: are humka tume kaha na hum Rey vey nhi hai...fir bhi tuka hum Rey lagging...

Kriya: *attitude* me bhi ramiara raichand ho ese down market people se me baat nhi Kati jao aur jaake Rey ko bolao...huh

Rey: tureko agar Rey babua se hi baat karne thi toh kal babua ko chabilal chaiye wish kyu mangi..??

Kriya: Wo ramiara ne nhi Kriya ne maangi thi...

Rey: aacha..?? Toh ab kya hua Kriya ko..??

Kriya: are chabilal tumhari Hindi kab itni aachi hogyi..??

Kriya said will giggle. Rey came near her and looked at her properly she was wearing a knee length cute baby pink dress. Kriya stop giggling and their eyes meet with each other and there started their llhh with BG ohhoo.

Rey: Kriya sorry mene kal tumhe na bolke hurt kiya na. Par mujhe tumhe ye surprise dena tha so...

Kriya: are Rey this is so wonderful gosh Rey this just awesome. I loved it thnxx a lot.

Rey put his hand in front of Kriya. In return Kriya raise her eye brow as if asking what..??

Rey: my I have a pleasure of dancing with this beautiful lady..??

Rey said like a gentle man and Kriya gladly accepted it.

Kriya and Rey were doing slow ballroom dance. Kriya was standing on Rey's toes and Rey was holding her like a feather. They were dancing deep looking in each other's eye. Their eyes were speaking volume. The song was as if Rey was indirectly telling her not to go. But alas it is not in Rey's hand right..?? They were dancing and were also remembering their few old nice moments.
After dance Rey and Kriya had their dinner which Rey had arranged earlier only. They were having a great gala time over there.

Rey: so Kriya tumhare new friends nhi bane NY me..??

Kriya: bahot bane magar aaplog jese ek bhi nhi...

Rey: btw Kriya angry maat hona wo rani lakshmi bai kesi hai..?? I mean your mom..??

As soon as Rey said that Kriya's eyes filled with water. Rey saw it and immediately asked.

Rey: Kriya kya hoa tum ro kyu rahi ho..?? Rani I mean your mom is ok na..??

Kriya: *sobbing* Rey...mo...mom...is...no...More.

She says and burst out crying aloud. Rey was shocked with this news but regain his sense and console Kriya. After sometime Kriya stopped crying. Rey feels every sad for Kriya. He hugged her tightly. After breaking the hug.

Rey: tumhari galti ki saza tumhare mom ko mili. You betrayed me so your universe jii took your mom away from you.

Though Rey was guilty and sad after learning the news but still he was accusing and taunting her only to know the real truth. Yeah the truth.
Kriya again stated to cry badly due to Rey's continues taunts. Before Rey could speak anything else Swayam came over there and slapped Rey hard.

Swayam: *angry* Rey how could u..?? Tujhe kuch nhi pata hai. Tu Kriya ka saach nhi janta hai.

Rey: toh kya hai saach..??

Swayam: tu saach jana chahata hai toh... *was cut by Kriya*

Kriya: no Swayam. U have promised me.

Swayam: Kriya m sorry but mujhe tumhara ye promise todna padega me Rey ko bata raha ho...Saach *looking at Rey* tujhe saach jana hai na...toh sun... Kriya tujhse pyaar karti hai usne kbhi bhi tujhe betray nhi kiya...

And swayam told him everything what all happened and why Kriya suddenly went away and all. Kriya was crying there badly. After hearing the truth rey just smiled. And went forward toward Kriya.
Rey: mujhe pata tha ki meri baatcutter itni selfish nhi hai. Sorry baatcutter mene tumhe bohot hurt kiya but I did this on a purpose.

Kriya: *snobbing* rey I love u really..

Swayam: purpose..??

Rey: haan purpose. Mene tumlog ki baat us din sun li thi..

FLASHBACK

Kriya, swayam & rey were in Kriya room at that time reymoblie rang he went out to pick up. After attending the call when he was coming back he over heard Kriya and swayams convo.

Swayam: ab ye tie-up toh nhi hone wala hai toh ab tum apne dream ko pura karne London jaaogi..??

Kriya: nhi swayam me abhi udhar nhi jaa sakti..

Swayam: Kriya mujhe pata hai u choose this tie-up up over your dream sirf rey ki khushi keliye.

Kriya: *smiles a little* swayam haan mene ye sab rey ka dream pura karne keliye kiya tha. Magar tujhe toh pata hai na ki rey ki khushi keliye mene ye sab kiya. Ab jab rey ka dream pura nhi horaha hai toh Kriya ka kese hoga..

Swayam just smiled at his best friend. Rey heard it and was shock to know it.

FLASHBACK OVER.

Rey: aur tab hi mene socha ki me kuch bhi karke Kriya se pura saach jaaonga. Kriya I love u too.
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Kriya: *looking at rey* rey m ot gonna talk with u.

Swayam went away from there giving both of them their private time. Kriya was also going to go but rey pinned her to the wall.

Rey: miss baatcutter kaha ja rahi ho mera dil churake..

Kriya: mujhe jane do i'm serious

Rey: meri baatcutter serious bhi hoti hai mujhe pata hi nhi tha toh chalo serious baate karte h i want my kiss..

Rey said naughtily and Kriya looked at rey in shock.
Kriya: rey chodiye mujhe aur konsa kiss? Me aapko kiss nhi karungi..
Rey: but Kriya u had promised me u will kiss me on Valentine's Day in shivam's party..
Kriya: ab me aur aap girlfriend and boyfriend nhi hai aur aap mujhe apna dost bhi nhi mante
Saying this Kriya pout cutely rey pulled her checks
Kriya: ahhh... ye kya kar rahe ho aap?
Rey: when you pout, you look super cute... abhi tumhe meri wish puri karni padegi
Kriya: nhi
Rey: haan
Kriya: nhi
Rey: nhi
Kriya: haan
Rey: yayyy..!!
As soon as Kriya said yes rey jumped like a small child and Kriya got a chance to escape from there. Kriya ran way showing her tongue and rey smile at this and ran behind her. Kriya saw swayam's cycle and took it. Rey came and saw her going through swayam's cycle. He saw a boy standing there with his cycle he convinced the boy and took his cycle and went behind Kriya.
Kriya was showing her tongue to rey again and again. They were like as if there is any cycle race going on between them. As soon as they came near rey's house Kriya quickly got sown from the cycle and ran inside her room and looked it. Rey too came over there.
Kriya was laughing hard. And rey was banging the door and saying "Kriya open the door" and Kriya was plainly saying NO.
Rey: *self talk*linecutter ab apne style me baatcutter ke pas jana hoga..
And he climbed the pipe of his own house 🤣 Kriya was shocked to see him in her room. And she started running here and there. Rey was about to catch her but she ran towards washroom and tried lock the door but this time she couldn't do it. Rey was taking one step ahead and Kriya was going backward. By mistake Kriya broke the tap of shower and they were all drenched.
Both were lost in each other's eyes and rey leaned in to kiss her. But Kriya placed her palm on his mouth and he kisses her palm. Kriya removes her hand.
Kriya: arrghh kya kar rahe hai aap mein aapko kiss nhi karne dungi ye future Kriya reyaansh sighaniya ka vada hai...
Rey smiled at this and kria was confused why she said that.
Rey: so future Kriya reyaansh sighaniya tum mujhe rok sakti ho to rok lo
Kriya: rok sakti hu na
And she started tickling him and she came out of washroom and rey was near her. Her leg got twisted and she held rey's collar and both fell on bed in this process their lips met with each other
Rey: dekha mrs future reyaansh sighaniya aapke universe ji bhi mere sath hai..
And he kissed her like there was no tomorrow. He broke the kiss and hugged her tightly.
Rey: baatcutter please don't go back. I can't live without you. Har din tumhari care karna and tumhare sath time spend karne ki aadat ho gayi. Please don't go back.
And he hugged her with all his might. Suddenly kriya's mobile rang and the caller ID flashed dean sirs number. She picks up the call and dean sir informed her that she has to stay in India as she will be the part of dance academy so she will never leave. Kriya was very happy.
Rey: kya hua Kriya..??
Kriya: universe ji ne aapki wish puri kardi rey
Rey: what? It means u r not leaving?
Kriya just nod her head indicating yes. Rey hugged her tightly and kissed her on cheeks.
Rey: Kriya m so happy that i can't tell you.
Kriya: agar aap kuch aur bhi mang lete to vo bhi aapko mil jata aapko
Rey: ek aur wish hai meri ek pyari si wife jo gande jokes marti ho, jo bilkul pagal ho, jise chinese log psand na ho, aur...
Kriya: aur..??
Rey: tum itna excited kyun ho rahi ho..??
Kriya: aap meri baat...
Rey: me aur tumse shaadi no way...
Rey: me toh apni baatcutter se shaadi karunga btw tumhare sath affair ho sakta hai... kya bolti ho..??
Kriya hit him on chest.
Rey: ouch dil bahar nikal dogi kya..?? meri baatcutter ka hai
Kriya: rey aap na kabhi nahi sudhroge
Rey: *pulled her closer* aur sudhrna bhi nhi chahta
And started kissing her and on face and neck also.
Rey: btw ek wish toh reh gayi mujhe 2 bache bhi chahiye ek tumse aur ek baatcutter se..
Kriya: sure baby bohot hot honge humare bache
Rey: abhi banane h kya..??
Kriya: shaadi tak wait karo mister kyunki intezaar ka phal mitha hota hai
Rey: aur hot bhi hota hai
Saying this Kriya and rey laughed and hugged each other saying "I LOVE U"

~*~*~

congrates to all for ArSha / KR 200th AT



Edited by Abhilashaarsha - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wowww !!!!!! 👏
Its really amazing !!!
Totally my dream scenario !!!! So wish dat something like that would have happened !!! 😊
U are a superb writer...loved how you described the scene,depicted Kria and Rey's emotions so delicately but effectively and took care of all the nuances(stressed on little details which was so endearing to read) !! 😳
Kudos to you !!!! 👏
Btw my favouite part was Rey 's reaction to the revelation by Swayam...he smiled !!! 😳
And instantly switched from Rey-on-a-mission-to-reveal-Kriya's-truth to our loveboy !!!!
Supercool job on that !!!
Edited by So_Naley - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Uber cute and hawwwt
So sweet
Aww kriyaansh are the best
How can they be so cute megical and sizzling at a time it is possible only to them
Great work[thumbs up;)]
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww... Dis was realy cute OS..
KR ki understanding.. Den rey ka suprise.. Sach ka bahar aana.. Den confession.. N den Naughty rey n uska kiss den all dat cute cute moments..
N den rey k endless wish.. Kiss.. Kriya kaa naa jana.. Bachhe... Uff..
Haiyyee.. Too good.. Loved it ^_^
keep writting yaar.. Ek dum jhakaas h yeh wala OS :D
PS... Shocked? Same here.. I mean.. Maine itni jaldi coment ker diya.. Hehehe.. Bt i genuinly loved d os..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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that was cute and superb os... loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazinggg!!!
oh gawd yeh OS padhke mera din bann gaya! its totally awesome...i luvd each nd every part of it...pehle that mysterious style mein present kia hua surprise...awww...that was damn sweet! chabilal nd ramaira..❤️ and the way the truth was revealed was very nice:) aur woh cycle race 😆hahaha...chooo sweet...i can just imagine the situation!!! aur kriyaansh drenched
yippie! kria's not going back! aur the last rey-kria i mean KRIYAANSH😉 ke convo...hayeee maar daala!🤢☺️
"mein toh apni baatcutter se shaadi karunga btw tumhare sath affair ho sakta hai... kya bolti ho..??" i loved that line... 😆kria reyaansh singhania😳
it was all perfect...i srsly luvd that last convo yaar..just cant get over it! fantastic OS! 👍🏼
superb...!!!!
-Reshma😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww supar dupar cute
love it
rey n kria as chabilal n ramirar was super sweet
n then their nok jok
hayy mar java god khake
supab os
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This was super awesome...congo evry1...
Abhi well done...its amazing...surpise nd all...
Kria wanted chabilal nd ramaira wanted rey...great...
That confession part was unique bt beautifully penned down...
Nd the romance afterwards...naughty rey...
Brilliant work
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Posted: 11 years ago
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superb os
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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this was super cute

the confession part ... n all the cute moments

hayee maar dala

aur uske baad their nok jhok

our cute chabilal n ramaira

n their last convo was so sweet

i loved that line... kria reyaansh singhania

loved it

thanx for d pm

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