New Virika FF ~A Perfect Marriage~Discontinued:Pg-31

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Posted: 11 years ago

#141

awesome update
superb
fantastic
loved it
continue soon

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Enigmatic_Charm

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Posted: 11 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: arshiasushma
sorry for late reading
awesome update
mind blowing ya
liked viren naughtiness
and trying to jeevika in fall in love
and the top viren told she is a 3 week pregnant
liked virika convo
totally
superb
i want to give one suggestion i dont want jeevika fall in love now
after marriage she have to fall in love with viren
thanks for the pm
continue soon

Thanks sushma!!!!!

Ya i'll consider ur suggestion

thanks again😃

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Enigmatic_Charm

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Posted: 11 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: sushmavirika
awesome update
superb
fantastic
loved it
continue soon

thanks!😊

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aayushi

@sweet_aayushi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#144

wohooo u updated ammu love u😊😊😊😊😳❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏SUPER DUPER UPDATE👏👏👏👏👏
loved it bits❤️❤️❤️
aww❤️😳 viren😊 loves her so much❤️
hope jeevka agree with him😊😊😊😊
and the last parts were awesome😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
i was laughing like hell🤣🤣🤣
totally hilarious🤣🤣😆
jeevika his wife...lol🤣😆😉
🤣and then 3 weeks pregnant...lol🤣
this was so good 😆😆😆😆
very very very nice😊😃😃😃😃
totally loved it❤️
perfect update😊😊😊
continue soon 😊
very soon 😊😊😉😉😉
loved jeevika's reactions😆😆😆
and viren is being very naughty❤️
❤️perfect❤️
sorry for commenting late i was inactive for some days
plz continue i want an update like RIGHT NOWWW!!!!😊😊😊😊
plzzz ammmuuu plz update soonnn sooonn 😊😊😊😊😳😳😳😳😳
i m waiting!!!!😉😉

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Enigmatic_Charm

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Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: sweet_aayushi
wohooo u updated ammu love u❤️
👏SUPER DUPER UPDATE👏
loved it bits❤️❤️❤️
aww❤️😳 viren😊 loves her so much❤️
hope jeevka agree with him😊
and the last parts were awesome😆
i was laughing like hell🤣🤣🤣
totally hilarious🤣🤣😆
jeevika his wife...lol🤣😆😉
🤣and then 3 weeks pregnant...lol🤣
this was so good 😆
very very very nice😃
totally loved it❤️
perfect update😊😊😊
continue soon 😊
very soon 😉
loved jeevika's reactions😆😆😆
and viren is being very naughty❤️
❤️perfect❤️
sorry for commenting late i was inactive for some days
plz continue i want an update like RIGHT NOWWW!!!!😊
plzzz ammmuuu plz update soonnn sooonn 😳
i m waiting!!!!😉😉

Thanks so much di

Yup I'll update tomorrow 😊

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sumayyah

@sumayyah1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#146

AMMU I WANT AN UPDATE NOWWW
PLEASE UPDATE
IM WAITING
CANT WAIT NOW
SOOO BE QUICK

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Enigmatic_Charm

@Enigmatic_Charm

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: sumayyah1
AMMU I WANT AN UPDATE NOWWW
PLEASE UPDATE
IM WAITING
CANT WAIT NOW
SOOO BE QUICK

Update on the way sumi!!!!!😊

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aayushi

@sweet_aayushi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#148

where's the update????
me waiting!!!!

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sumayyah

@sumayyah1

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: AmmuKryan

Update on the way sumi!!!!!😊

OKKK
but soon haaa
im waiting
😭

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Enigmatic_Charm

@Enigmatic_Charm

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#150

Hey friends I'm back with an update.I know I'm damn late,but I was super busy with my college.So I'm really sry for making U all wait.Thanks for the likes n comments in the previous part.

CHAPTER 4:

Beeji (in phone): Haan ji...Ya that's gud!!! Okay.Thank u...

Jeevika: Beeji...to whom are u talking with so much of smile in your face?

Beeji: It's Vanshikaji!

Jeevika: Oh...

Beeji: Guess wat? We've planned your engagement!!!! And it's tomorrow evening!!!

Jeevika: What??? 😲

Beeji: Kya hua? Are u not happy?

Jeevika: No beeji...I'm happy!!! Very happy😡

Beeji: Okay so pack up soon coz we r leaving afternoon.

Maanvi came running.

Maanvi: Afternoon??? Beeji we'll start now,this moment!!!😆

Jeevika frowned 😡

Beeji: Arrey it's ur di's engagement,not urs! Go n pack soon.

~JeeMan's Room~

Maanvi: Di!!! Y are u like this? C'mon it's ur engagement! U are the princess and jiju is the prince! A PERFECT COMBO!!!

Jeevika: Pls pack quietly or else get out of here! Got it?

Maanvi: Di pls control ur anger.It's not gud for a girl whose gonna get married.

Jeevika: Maanvi pls...Why the hell don't u people understand me? I'm not ready for a marriage!

Maanvi: Di,you are wrong.You are ready for this but the reason for ur refusal is 'Family'.We can't be with our loved ones the entire lifetime and it's a fact.You have to accepet it.When you lose someone,you get someone who shows u more luv than others in the whole world.And that u are getting married now,jiju is the only person who can love you more and the most in this world.Mark my words,you are gonna see the bright side of ur life after ur marriage!

Jeevika just hugged Maanvi,with tears flowing down her eyes.

Maanvi: Everything is gonna be fine di!

She said hugging Jeevika tightly.

~Evening~

The Choudhary's reached the Vadhera Mansion.They were greeted with utmost care.

Dadaji: Namaste! We are so happy to see u everyone.

Beeji: Namaste ji! We too are pleased.

The elders were busy discussing about the preparations,while the foursome had their own chit chats in the lawn.

Virat: So bhabhi,how is our place?

Maanvi: It stinks!😆

Virat: Is it? Oh i see!! I think it's better u change ur perfume Ms.Maanvi!😆

Maanvi: Wat the heck??? You say that I stink?

Virat: Do u have any doubt in that?😉

Maanvi: I'm not gonna spare ur head Virat!

She said running at the back of him.

Viren: Hmm Jeevika...

Jeevika: I'm very tired,can I take a leave pls?

Viren: Err,Ya sure!

Jeevika left and Viren was a bit disappointed.

~Midnight~

JeeMan were sleeping in one room.Jeevika had a sleepless night though.She tossed around the bed to find some sleep,but all in vain.Suddenly her phone beeped,it was a message.But who's sending those at this time? It's none other than Viren.

"I know it's hard for u to sleep in here with all the fear of marriage in ur mind.But i just wanted to say that,pls don't stress urself,just close ur eyes and sleep coz everything will be alright! Believe me! Good night!"

Jeevika was dumbstruck.

Jeevika (in her mind):How did he know I'm awake? Is this wat they call "luv"?

She slowly drifted to sleep thinking about these unanswered questions.

~Morning~

Jeevika was in her room,brushing her hair.Just then she heard a knock.She opened the door and found Viren standing with a cup of hot coffee and of course with a cute smile on his face.

Viren: Good Morning!

Jeevika: Gud morning.

Viren: Hope u had a gud sleep last nite?

Jeevika: Ya! Thanks!

Viren: No need for that.Anyways I'll take it for this coffee.

He handed the coffee to her.

Jeevika: Hmmm,how did u find that i was awake last nite?

Viren: Hmmm,it's simple.That's called luv😉

Jeevika: Oh! pls be serious.

Viren: I am!

Jeevika: So ur luv told u that i'm awake?

Viren: Ya! and it also told me that i'm the reason for that n i'm the only person who can solve that.

Jeevika: Humph!!!

Viren: Okay! I'm running late for office.Meet u in the eve as my beautiful fiancee.Bye!

And he rushed before Jeevika could say anything.

Jeevika just sipped her coffee and was about to close the door when Viren flashed again and said, "I LUV U! BYE!"

Jeevika couldn't react.He was so crazy...crazy in love with her!But will she feel this craziness too?

I know it's small,but a big one nxt time,sure!Okay as I'm not cuming here often,i'll be able to update only on sundays.So pls do bear with me.PM's are sent to only those who liked or commeneted in the previous parts! So like n comment! THANK U!

😃

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