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Posted: 11 years ago
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pls update luv ur story very much
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Sorry might not be that long becaus I was busy n next time which will be soon I will update a long one if I don't get more course n I. Pass in the course I gave in
Part 2
door bell rings
Zoya goes n opens it n is shocked
Rashid:who is it bahu
Zoya:...
Dadi: najma go check who it is
Najma: k
Najma goes by the door and is shocked
Najma:a...ayaa..ayaan .. bhaijaan
Rashid dilshad: wat
Zoya moves n ayaan comes in n everyone is angry
Rashid: wat r u doing here now leave my house now
Dilshad:rashid calm down u will fall ill
Ayaan: ammi abbu I'm really sorry but u now I did not want to get married to zo...wait a minute wat r u doing here
Asad: wat do u mean she is...(cut of by ayaan)
Ayaan: zoya I told u I don't want to get married to u then y r u here I now u love me but that does not mean that I love u..( asad is shocked) ..(cut of by dilshad)
Dilshad: ayaan just shut up
Ayaan: dadi please tell them to forgive me I promise u will do wat u say plz
Dadi: k
Rashid: ammi... How can u...
Dadi: he is ur son give him last chance
Rashid: but..
Zoya: abbu plz let it be forgive him
Rashid: k
Rashid and dadi leaves to his room
Ayaan turns round n hugs zoya
Ayaan: thank u so much I know u would forgive me after all u lov...( cut of by dilshad
Dilshad realise wat ayaan wa going to say n stopped him by seeing asad sad
Asad goes to his room upset
Dilshad:um...ayaan u mean after all she is ur bhabhi
Ayaan: yes after all she is my fia... Wat bhabhi
Najma: yes she is married to asad bhaijaan
Ayaan: really
Zoya nodded a yes
Ayaan: really I'm really happy for bhaijaan I can't believe it he got married... Well all thanks u me or he would of never go married
Dilshad: k now calm down (turns to zoya) can u make dinner tonight I need to call someone
Zoya: k ammi ( zoya moves to the kitchen)
Dilshad also goes to her room
After dishad left ayaan looks at najma
Najma: wat
Ayaan: so
Najma: (confused ) so wast
Ayaan: did bhaijaan propose to zoya
Najma: umm... No... And yes
ayaan: (confused) wat do u mean by yes n no
Najma:( makes he sit on the sofa beside him) ummm.. Wen u left ever one was upset n zoya was broken so then bhaijaan said he will marry her so that is a yes to ur answer but
Ayaan: but wat
Najma: they did not confess yet that they love each other n u now wat they r so cute together u should see them how they act anyone can guess they love each other just one look
Ayaan: k but do they know them self that they love each other
Najma: yes zoya realised today in a party that was cause of my n family plan
Ayaan( excited) really n bhaijaan
Najma: yes he does know I think so the way he was staring at u wen u said that zoya loves... Eru.. U
Silent two minutes later
Ayaan stand up : I will go talk to bhaijaan know
Dilshad walks towards them: no not now u talk to him tomorrow in office
Ayaan sits down: k
Zoya: najma dinner is read to call everyone( shouts from the kitchen
Najma: k

Dinner table everyone sit except asad
Rashid: were is asad

Precap: asad phone rings
Asad: k I'm coming
Dilshad: we r u going
Asad: ammi there is a problem in office
Dadi: wen will u be back by
Asad: don't now maybe in the morning or late night today
Zoya n dadi : but
Asad: dadi n zoya dont worry i will be back soon


Will update soon PLZ comment n pm for updates
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ress
unres

Yipeee yaya i am first for first time...
nia it was a good chappy
i loved how ayaancame back n said sorry
ayaan asks abt asya n their love...
Najma ayaan part was good n sober
whooaa whats that with precap...
What happenend at pffice...
Update soon...
Thanks for the pm
Edited by --SH7_Sunny-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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aw.
loved it.
asad is upset.poor asad.
but zoya should have corrected naaa.
hope everything will be fine soon
plz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice update
Zoya realised her feeling towards asad.
Asad felt jealous watching Ayaan near zoya.
Thanks for pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome loved it
plz pm me for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 3 A

Rashid: where is asad
Dilshad: zoya go call him( dilshad said this because she know that asad is upset n they need to talk)
Zoya get up the chair n walk to their room
Zoya thoughts:( I hope asad did not misunderstand me know that I said I love aya..an but that is not true... I .. I just thought him as my future husband n I was use to it so it was hard accepting asad ...I never love ayaan because ... My heart beats only beat for asad I love him .. N I need to tell him before... It is to .. Late n I can't let that happen because I'm madly in love with asad n can not lose him on any cost
Zoya walks in n asad was standing by the window facing his back to her
Zoya: asad dinner is ready ammi abbu r calling u to eat
Asad: k( still not facing her) u go I'm coming
Zoya: ...urm...asad.. I want to talk to u about ayaan n me .. I..(cut of by asad)
Asad: (still not facing her) i know...u still have not accepted me as ur husband n I did not expect u to as well.. I...I will end this relationship if u want .. N .. U can go to ayaan if u want... I will get the divorce..papers today evening n then ur free tomorrow morning
Zoya thought :(shocked)wat asad think I want to go by ayaan I need to clear his misunderstanding before it to late I don't want to divorce him
Same time asad thoughts: why is she not saying anything... I was right she does not want to continue this relationship. ... Zoya I just wish I could atleast say that I love from the day I accept our marriage I did not realise wen I feel in love with u ... But... For ur ... Happiness I will leave u

Mean while dinner table
DAdi: dilshad can u go see wat is taking them so long
Dilshad : k (she walked to the room wen she heard asad talk to zoya)
Dilshad thought: wat asad wat is he saying I thought he love zoya ... I need to talk to him before ... It is to late

Asya room
Asad:...urm...zoya...I (cut of by dilshad she knocked the door ) yes who is it
Dilshad: it me... Dadi is calling h come eat...
Asya: k (think about the talk and walking)
Dilshad thought: I should talk to him now
Dilshad:...asad...
Asya stop
Asad:yes
Dilshad: I .. Urm... Need to talk to u it is important ... Zoya u go n tell the rest to start we r coming
Zoya: k
Zoya left dilshad hold asad hand n walks to the bed n make him sit facing him
Asad: ammi wat is it is something wrong
Dilshad: yes
Asad: wat is it
Dilshad: u r the problem
Asad:(confused) me how wat did I do
Dilshad: wat u did ur asking me ask that to ur self
Asad( more confused) ammi I seriously don't know wat ur talking about
Dilshad : I will tell u first promise that u will tell the truth swear on my life n say u will stay the truth
Asad: but...(cut of)
Dilshad: no buts ifs just do wat told u to do
Asad: k k I swear on ur life I will tell the truth n will u tell me wat this all is about
Dilshad: do u love zoya...
Asad:...(silent)...
Dilshad: asad I'm asking u something
Asad:... Ammi... Wo ..actually
Dilshad: asad just answer in yes or no u sweared now don't lie
Asad: (looks down disappointed) yes
Dilshad: that a good thing...k then why did u not tell zoya
Asad...
Dilshad: asad I'm talking to u answer me
Asad: ...ammi...wo zoya. ...n ayaa...(cut of)
Dilshad: asad ayaan was zoya past now u r her present n future so stop think that zoya love ayaan..
Asad: but how can u say she does not love maybe...
Dilshad: because my buddu Ahmed khan she loves u
Asad: I know...WAT...( shocked dilshad smiles)
Dilshad: yes she love u so will u PLZ confess now n I know because I asked her now it is ur job to tell her n PLZ don't go on the wrong track that she doesn't love u
Asad:k
Dilshad: let's go everyone is waiting for us maybe n make sure u tell zoya today
Asad: ammi...(cut of by asad phone)
Dilshad goes out of the room and Asad answer his phone
Asad: k I'm coming

Dinner area
Dilshad comes n sits in her place
Dilshad: asad coming carry on
Zoya thought: today I have to tell asad I love him before I lose him
Asad walk to the door
Dilshad: we r u going
Asad: ammi there is a problem in office
Dadi: wen will u be back by
Asad: don't now maybe in the morning or late night today
Zoya n dadi : but
Asad: dadi n zoya dont worry i will be back soon
Zoya thought : I hope he is not going to get the divorce paper I don't want to lose him after losing my parent I don't want to lose him I need to tell him
Zoya looked round but asad was gone

Will update part B today or tomorrow need to write it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it means reserved place
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey nia😊
nice concept...both of them have fallen in luv with eachorther..so cute
But both have not confessed their feelings..
What was the reason for ayaan not marrying Zoe...
Lets c what happens next...continue soon
Thanks for the pm😊

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