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This is a random OS which I wrote in the metro. Nowadays this place inspires me to write alot 😆

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"What the hell is your problem!", she screamed for the umpteenth time, pushing him with all her might.

She was feeling more tenuous with every passing second. She felt as if an enormous rock was placed on her chest. It felt that heavy. Her father's words hovered around her. She was slipping into the abyss of depression and despair. Her life in this college was turning from bad to worse with everyone planting problems for her and the one person who was most responsible for this state was standing in front of her, smirking at her, an evil complacent smile playing on his lips.

"YOU are my problem", he growled, quickly closing the distance between them.

"Look. I already have many problems of my own. You don't need to create more. Got it!", she said, warning him for the final time.

He gave out an evil laugh.

"Problems of your own? Oh right! Your beloved father doesn't even acknowledge you right? He knows that you are worth nothing", he said, his voice turning evil as he uttered the final few words.

That was enough.

That was one chord of her life he shouldn't have touched.

Her body heated up in rage as she pulled him by his T-shirt in a fit of hanger, making him bang at her. She glared at him, her look piercing through his soul.

"Bhaut pareshaan kar liya tumne mujhe. Not anymore!", she growled, pushing him away mercilessly. He moved backwards with a jerk, his hand banging with the table behind as he winced in pain. The pain instantly turned to rage as he looked at her, his eyes seething with abomination.

"Abhi to maine kuch kiya hi nahi", he said, smirking as he took her application form from the table and set it on fire. Her eyes widened with shock as he saw the paper blazing in flames right in front of her.

"Bhaut shauk hain na topper banne ka!", he said, enough to enrage her beyond limit.

"How dare you!", she screamed, snatching her form from his hands and throwing it down. But half of it had already turned to ash. She nearly broke down but her anger overpowered any other emotion emerging out of her, as she started pushing Randhir again. Before he could register the blow she slapped him hard on his cheek. It took a few seconds for both of them to come back to their senses as they glared at each other, hatred boiling in their eyes.

She hadn't planned to do it. Nor did she want to do it. But she didn't regret it. This monster deserved it.

How dare she slap him! How dare any girl slap him!

His body burnt with fury as he grabbed her shoulders, pulling her towards him. She winced in pain but his eyes had turned dark to even notice it. She struggled, trying her best to free herself, but his grip was too powerful to escape as he locked her hands behind her and pinned her to the wall.

"Leave me you bloody pig! What the hell do you think of yourself! Just leave me ! I said LEAVE ME", she screamed out aloud. She was alarmed as she saw the dark intoxicated hue in his eyes, struggling even more. She felt his intense gaze burning her from inside. The fire around them mirrored their emotions as he pulled her neck and smacked his lips on hers, his mouth sucking her lips with aggression, determined to show him who was the boss. Her eyes widened with shock as he tamed her. She couldn't even register what was happening as she struggled to pull her face away but his hands were quick enough to pull her face back towards his ,his mouth grinding hers. She struggled to free her hands which were locked behind her. But he set them free as his hand grabbed her tiny waist pulling her closer to him, his aggression turning to need, his other hand still grabbing her mane. She reached a level of exhaustion as she ceased struggling, tired. She was surprised to realize that she liked the attack on her lips, as her hands ruffled through his hair, her lips responding with equal fervour. But in a split second she realized what she was doing and broke apart from the kiss, pushing him away.

They both stood in front of each other, trying to catch their breath, their eyes blazing with desire.

Randhir slapped himself mentally. What had he done! This was not the way to teach her a lesson! This was not the way to teach any girl a lesson. How could he hurt her dignity? He expected her to slap him or an even worse reaction but was left shocked with what she did.

She did her best to fight the inner dark demons inside her, to try and bring out the anger inside her but finally giving up she pulled his collar towards her as she slammed her lips on his, claiming him. His hands slid across her back, feeling every part of her body. Her lips parted for his tongue to enter as pure hot desire took over both of them. Their tongues fought for dominance inside their mouths as her hands pulled his neck towards her, to get a deeper insight into his mouth. He kissed her with such passion, making her moan with need, all the blazing anger inside them draining out of their bodies. The inner turmoil they were going through all these weeks, the weird attraction they had for each other, the need for each other was all getting satisfied. They dug deeper into the kiss as his hands slid inside her kurti feeling her bare waist, playing havoc with her senses. His lips slowly traced a path of hot kisses down towards her neck to her collar bone making her moan his name. Neither of them cared that the place was going up in flames or even noticed it but the fire alarm brought them back to their senses as both of them instantly opened their eyes in shock, realizing the state they were in. Randhir moved back a couple of steps back, breathing heavily, her face had a dark shade of red as realization dawned upon them. They looked everywhere but at each other. That's when they saw.

"Fire!", they screamed together, as he frantically pulled her hand and ran towards the emergency exit.

The flames around them were nothing compared to the ones burning them from inside...


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I wish I could have ended it in a more appropriate way but well.. Let it be. Hope you liked it. :)

Looking forward to your comments.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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res
*unres*
yippeee...me first to comment... 😎
waaahhh...waahhh..wahhh..wahhh..👏 .superbbb.....fantabulouss...😃 ...mazzaaa a gya yaar supu...😃...kamaal ka h yaar...👍🏼...
loved the last part......it was a hot one...☺️.thoda saa ur hot kr deti to kya bigad jaata tera...😡 😛...
bt chalo..koi gal ni...😉...isme nhi kiya to kisi aur me hott update likhwa lenge tujhse...😉 😈...
hope...we get same thing in show......

btw..teeko metro me aise aise khayal kab se aane lage...🤣...yeh bhi koi jagah h hot update likhne ki...😉 🤣 🤣
i mean..koi aur jagah nhi mili thi tujhe...🤣...
Edited by rkbala - 11 years ago
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That was amazingly hot and sensuous!
Absolutely loved it!

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Ws d promo nt enough to give me sleepless nights dat u wrote such a passionate nd fantastic OS!! Whtevr be d case, u nailed it!
Ur interpretition rather ur version of d promo is amazing. Hw much I wish sumthin' lyk dis to happen...

I luved hw d story strtd wid d verbal clash of d 2 mortal enemies. The dialogues wr mindblowing.
Every viceral sentiment of Sanyukta is brilliantly written. I luved d way u showcased hr to be vulnerable yet courageous at d same tym.
Randhir shuldn't hv ignited Sanyukta's rage to such a level...

OMG!!!! I wanna hug u fr such beautiful writeup of d kiss.
I'm speechless. It ws superb.
Every word ws in perfect sync wid d situation. It felt as if I ws riding a rollercoaster of emotions which strted frm intense hatred nd loathing to passion nd zeal.

D flow of d story ws flawless. Bt why did u stop there only????
Yaar thoda aur extend kyun nhi kia???

Do write more on SanDhir...
Edited by KAJU10 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I like the way you wrote this!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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*Dead* ... I'm tired of Dying Now... :-P ;-)
Hot and Passionate one.. Liked ur Take on Precap :-D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG!!! I dn't hv any words...dis is sooo good!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Reswa
~Edited~
Was the precap not enough for the havoc created inside my mind that you wrote this?
I doubt I would stay sane and for that matter even alive till the precap actually turns into an epi., only Gods knows when? :/
Coming back to the update *i get sidetracked very soon :/* *Sandhir has got over my mind and soul*
Suppy, this was so amazing
Haay! I wish I could go into my phone's screen and kissed your cheeks red.
You don't cease to amaze me with ur writing, do you?
Thanks a ton for such a lovely OS!
Had been dying to read from you and you updated :D *beaming with joy*
Muaahhh :*
Ab jaldi dusra wala bhi update karo na! Please!!!!
Bohot greedy ho gayi hoon main but kya kare, your work is intoxicating :p
Edited by asyaforlife - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I loved it totally. Uff how I wish it could happen like this but I know the kiss(if any) would increase their hatred and not their attraction. But coming back to this story, it was very very good. U write so beautifully.

P.S: u mentioned metro so by any chance are u from delhi? I'm a delhite too
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Read your PM after reading this and saw you already updated your work.
Sorry for the miss
*rushing to read it*

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