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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey guys i m a recent if joiner but i used 2 read works on kriyaansh by mAny writers n hats off to all u all r jus amazing
Well cumin to this post
I tried writing sumthing for 1st time i dnt know how it is but hope u all do comment on it and all sarcasm or good things r welcum :)

Jus a random thot u can place it ur characters its kind of poem
Hope u like:)


Koi to ehsaas h jo lata hume paas h
Inkaar nahi kar sakte qki tumhari aankhein sachai bayan karti h
Ikraar nahi kar sakte qki koi majboori jaise tumhare dil ko patthar karti h
Magar kuch baatein jo ankahi hi humesha ansuni nahin rehti
Qki un baaton ko zubaan nahi aankhon ke jazbaat bayan karte h
Tumhari aankhein jazbaaton mein apni daastan bunti h
Karodo ki bheed me se sirf muje chunti h
Phir kyu dil ki khwahishein ruki rahein ?
Q nazrein na mile palkein juki rahe?
Q door hote hue bhi tum paas ho..
Shayad haqekat nahi bas ek ehsaas ho..
Magar ek din zaroor iss daastan ko anjaam milega..
Humare beech ke ankahe rishte ko naam milega..
Koi bandhan nahi rok tok nahi dayre nahi rukawat nahi majboori nahi farz bhi nahi..
Agar kuch hoga to vo hoga tum aur main.. Honge hum aur humara rishta..
Saare khwaab haqeqat banenge.. Saare khayal apna vastavik roop lenge.. Sab kuch jaise ek pal mein haasil hojayega..
Ab bas inteZaar h to uss pal uss ghadi uss lamhe ka..
Uss ek din ka jo hume humari duniya degi khushi degi aur ek doosre ka saath degi..
Bas.. Uss ek din ke intezaar mein..
aaj ek din aur beet gaya tumse ikraar mein..


Do comment
Howz it??

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Lovelylavender thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thnxxx so much i know its not tht nice but u still read n commented tht means a lot :) :)
Thanks :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its a lovely poem, Shanaya.

depicts so much of emotional content with such a simplicity.

nice job.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -shenz-

Its a lovely poem, Shanaya.




depicts so much of emotional content with such a simplicity.




nice job.



Thanku sooo much
It really means a lot wen sum1 appreciates ur 1st work...
Thnx 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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omg shan baby u write poems tooo...
kya mast likha tunee...
dammm amazing yaar...
loved it ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing poem!!
i hv jst 1 word WOW!!
that waz so good...

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