ArYa SS: Second Chances - Author's note on Pg 56 - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
This update is dedicated to two very special people:

1. A very dear friend, whose 2nd bundle of joy turns 6-weeks old today. YAY!!!
2. Another dear friend, who is years younger than me but has been very encouraging since the time she stumbled across my first story. Get well soon!

So, here's to D and D - you both are very special and i am blessed to have friends like you. Though miles away and unable to physically be of any assistance, i hope at least virtually i am able to provide you with a few moments of carefree relaxation. Here's to your smiles - and if the update leaves you with a feeling of even mild pleasure, i will consider myself successful.




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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
There's-there's something suspicious. Idk.. In just the way she holds herself. The fact that her leg keeps coming up makes me think there's much more to the picture. Very well done! She knew exactly what she was talking about and she is very, very intelligent. 'A house meant roots.' That is so deep. She does have something going on. And Yash seems simpler to me than I initially thought. Lovely job! Keep it up!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
Kat di 🤗
really love it !❤️
Only you can write up in this way ⭐️⭐️⭐️
such a wonderful update di and the note😉
Love you a lots di !!!🤗❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
Interesting update... a trauma communications expert...wow!! This is very enlightening to read, n a Cacncer specialist...add to this enchanting mix.😃
Arti's leg is mentioned again...wondered what trauma did she undergo?? Yash seems to have his own set of traumtic past involved... the character build up is awesome👏


Looking fwd...hope u update pretty soon!





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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
Oh my God Kat

well i guess yash did not turn out to be stalker but you made me to your work darling

hmm yash is all mesmerizing with aarti i mean not with the beauty on face which as observer he may taken a note of it n later her name and now offcourse her mind her words or more effective the way she captivate all

well coming to intellect conversation make a great beginning to another chapter i see lot of shadows roaming in aarti when she took break as it has do a lot .. seems she is running away from something n literally cant run much 😛

hmm yash being a thorough gentleman all i can say and well great listener
yes indeed great minds speak alike is seems to be appearing in line of coincidence ( both side yash was the first one to approach her but still😉 iteffaq toh hai yaaa hmmm KAT🤔

i like to read your stuff kat as i can relate much being communication my favorite subject and sailing in corporate world too so its more addition to enjoyment

hmm bahut ho gayi philosophy let me try some poetic mode just giving a shot i dont know may be your creative bug is after me haan n now i feel like to be more private as you spoke earlier😉

jaani bhali rahon pe ek anjaana mil gaya phir na jaane kab wo anjaana jaana bhala lagne laga in anjannein cheron /khalaylon mein 😳
how about it .. will wait for your reply😃

PS Kat's D and D take care ⭐️
Edited by RA17 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: --Iqra--

There's-there's something suspicious. Idk.. In just the way she holds herself. The fact that her leg keeps coming up makes me think there's much more to the picture. Very well done! She knew exactly what she was talking about and she is very, very intelligent. 'A house meant roots.' That is so deep. She does have something going on. And Yash seems simpler to me than I initially thought. Lovely job! Keep it up!



You make it sound so much like a mystery Iqra 😊. I am not intentionally "hiding" it - i just want it to come out naturally - readers find out when Yash does. I expected it to happen with chapter 3, but looks like chapter 3 focuses more on Yash's life. So it will likely be 4 before we find out what happened to Arti.

Thank you - glad you liked it. I was a bit nervous about putting in so much detail about Arti's career - wasn't sure if it was unnecessary or overwhelming. Glad you liked it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: disha_rajdev

Kat di 🤗

really love it !❤️
Only you can write up in this way ⭐️⭐️⭐️
such a wonderful update di and the note😉
Love you a lots di !!!🤗❤️



Hai. I don't know about me being the only one able to write this way - there are many writers on the forum who are better than me. But thank you 🤗. See? Its this kind of love and encouragement that makes writing so special - and you have always heaped it on me Disha.

Take care - love you right back.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: RA17

Oh my God Kat


well i guess yash did not turn out to be stalker but you made me to your work darling
Good good. Acha hai - stalk karo. mere sehat ke liye acha hai 😉

hmm yash is all mesmerizing with aarti i mean not with the beauty on face which as observer he may taken a note of it n later her name and now offcourse her mind her words or more effective the way she captivate all
Physical attraction lasts only so long, na. He finds her attractive - but he had to sense the depth of her, her intelligence and achievements. His career choice by default proclaims his intelligence and depth - she is that, if not more. (I say more, but then, i am biased 😆).

well coming to intellect conversation make a great beginning to another chapter i see lot of shadows roaming in aarti when she took break as it has do a lot .. seems she is running away from something n literally cant run much 😛
She has done her share of running - and is as far away as she can get. Problem is - she has been running away from herself too...

hmm yash being a thorough gentleman all i can say and well great listener
yes indeed great minds speak alike is seems to be appearing in line of coincidence ( both side yash was the first one to approach her but still😉 iteffaq toh hai yaaa hmmm KAT🤔
Hmm - good point. I hadn't thought of that. But not to worry. Kudi kithe jayegi? Woh bhi aage hi ayegi 😉.

i like to read your stuff kat as i can relate much being communication my favorite subject and sailing in corporate world too so its more addition to enjoyment
Lo, karlo baat. No wonder hum dono ka itna banta hai 😆. And waise i love reading your comments.

hmm bahut ho gayi philosophy let me try some poetic mode just giving a shot i dont know may be your creative bug is after me haan n now i feel like to be more private as you spoke earlier😉
Neki aur pooch pooch!

jaani bhali rahon pe ek anjaana mil gaya phir na jaane kab wo anjaana jaana bhala lagne laga in anjannein cheron /khalaylon mein 😳

Hai! main mar jawan! That was really good Ria.


how about it .. will wait for your reply😃

PS Kat's D and D take care ⭐️



My responses in-line in blue. Old habits yaar.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
awesome update...cant believe u re updated chap 2 so fast...
now i will check everyday lol
waiting for chap 3
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
Great to see you again on IF.
I read PV-DJB and I loved it so much that I recommended to one of my friends.
Coming to the SS, I liked both the chapters especially the interaction of 2 intellectuals.

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