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Posted: 11 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Prachijainn

It was so fab
i was about to cry for both
pls make them meet in next part
And pls pls update it sooon
And pm me 👏

thank you for such a sweet comment dear,
sorry i made u cry. i just love pain the sadist i m.
their meeting will be hatke just like our sandhir ;)
and u can send me a add req. i'll surely pm u for the nxt update :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Just read both d updates...n well, m confused...clearly they were in a relationship...then wht happened?? But i wnt b surprised if he said something in d heat of the moment n then nw is regretting that he did it...but glad dat hes goin there to undo his wrongs...n btw, SANYU AND CALL CENTRE??????? LIKE SERIOUSLY???? Something major must hav happened!! M intrigued...great start...perfectly penned down both their feelings...congo!! Plz update soon n thnx for d pm!!😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: soumeesg

Just read both d updates...n well, m confused...clearly they were in a relationship...then wht happened?? But i wnt b surprised if he said something in d heat of the moment n then nw is regretting that he did it...but glad dat hes goin there to undo his wrongs...n btw, SANYU AND CALL CENTRE??????? LIKE SERIOUSLY???? Something major must hav happened!! M intrigued...great start...perfectly penned down both their feelings...congo!! Plz update soon n thnx for d pm!!😳

Aww m glad it lived upto your expectations and you liked it. Thank you so much for the praise :) means alot :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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And i am back with another update :P Two updates in one day. Kitni achi hun na mai 😆 I hope you like this sandhir meet ... I just couldnt wait to get them to meet and posted it earlier than plan... *fingers crossed* hope this doesnt dissapoint. Waiting for your feedback :)


CHAPTER 3


Randhir. The name could still bring a smile to her face. There was a point in life when she was so focused on her passion and dreams that she didn't even know where she was going or how she would reach there. He with all his impulsiveness and know-it-all attitude was still the calm and cool headed one in their relationship. He was the composed one who calculated everything before taking any decisions and she had picked that up from him. With time they had become more like each other than possible. Sanyukta could see so much of herself in randhir just how she could recognize everything that he had changed in her.

But there was no sanyukta now. Neither was there any randhir in her. She was shefali malhotra. A girl with no aim no ambition and no family. She was just going on with her life as a routine one day after the other. All the days seemed same to her. Everything was the same dull and boring and now she gotten used to liking it this way. She was allergic to happiness. Afraid of it. Everytime she tried to be happy it was always snatched away from her. She didn't have the strength to try any longer.

As always sanyukta came out of her office at 3 in the morning. Her mind full of the thoughts about the only person that had been there for her through everything. How she wished she could go back to him fight with him for the injustice he had done to her. For how he had left her alone when she needed him the most. But everything had changed that fateful day. When he had failed to trust her. He had gone too far in misunderstanding her. If only he had given her a chance to explain herself.

By now she was in the parking lot taking her scooty out to head home. But her mind was unusually frantic today. It just wasn't giving the randhir thoughts a rest.

How could you randhir?

She shouted unable to control her feelings anymore.

Didn't you know your sanyu better?

She said heartbroken. But no tears came out of her eyes. She was past the boundary of tears and sadness.

Because I was an idiot. An idiot who didn't deserve someone like you. Who could never understand how I was ever lucky enough to get you in my life. Sanyu baby please forgive me. Dekho tumhari randhir aaj tumhare samne sar jhukaye haath jhode khada hai. Give me any punishment you want just forgive me please.

For a second she couldn't believe that he was actually before her eyes. But then her kismet couldn't leave a chance like this to torture her could it. She slowly walked upto him and gave him a tight slap. She continued hitting him with all her might. Randhir silently stood there letting her take out all her pent up anger and frustration. And when she finally became a bit calm and stopped hitting him he took the opportunity to take her into his arms.

He hugged her with all his love, passion, guilt and every other feeling that he had bottled up inside himself.

Sanyukta didn't respond back to his hug. He held her even tighter trying to get a reaction out of her.

I am sorry baby. I love you. I love you a lot. Please forgive me and come back into my life. I cant live anymore being away from you my sanyu.

She was hearing that name for the second time today. A name she held no connection to anymore. She was not sanyukta agarwal. And so she broke out of the hug.

I am sorry mr.shekhawat. I think you have got the wrong person. I am not your sanyu my name is shefali malhotra and I have absolutely nothing to do with you. You are nothing for me.

Tears started flowing out of her eyes.She was crying after a very very long time. Finally leting her feelings get the better of her. The pain of seeing him was something that she didn't have the strength to bear. She was not at all in the right frame of mind. She just walked away from him getting on to her scooty and started it to drive away to her house.

Sanyu please aisa mat kaho. Don't walk away from me. Punish me but please give me one last chance. Atleast let me apologize and explain myself?

Tumne diya tha mujhe explain karne ka mauka

she asked with all the anger that was in her.

Before he could reply she started the scooty and drove away from him.

Randhir knew when he had come to meet her that it wouldn't be easy to convince her. He knew she wouldn't forgive him in the first go. But he hadn't realized there would be so many bottled up emotions inside her. He hadn't contemplated she would be so broken to see him. The person he saw before him was a completely different person this wasnt his vibrant sanyu. He was worried for her. Worried that she might harm herself in some way in her emotional state he finally decided to go after her. Randhir immediately got into his car and followed her to make sure she was safe.

He hadn't even gone half way when he saw a crowd blocking the way. He got down to clear the way to get to his sanyu faster. But what he saw in the middle of the crowd stopped his already sinking heart altogether.

Sanyukta his sanyu lay in the middle of the road unconscious.bleeding from her head as well as her hands. The sight before him had made him incoherent for a while. But he immediately recovered and reached near his sanyu.

His heart somewhat cooled down to know that she had only minor injuries. He quickly bent down scooping her into his arms and took her to his car. He then laid her in the back seat of the car and started towards her house.

Randhir was never a speed maniac. But today he reached sanyu's home at lighting fast speed. On the way he even took her doctors number from her cell phone and called him asking him to immediately come to sanyuktas house.

He carried her till her apartment door with the keys to her apartment in one hand he opened it with great difficulty while holding his sanyu close to his heart. The doctor was there by the time randhir laid her to rest on her bed and finished doing her first aid.

Kya hua hai doctor ise? Behosh kyun hai abhi tak? Chot zyada toh nahi lagi hai.. Is my sanyu ok? Do we need to get any meds ya phi rise hospital mei admit karde to be on the safe side?

Mr.shekhawat shefali beta is fine. I am her regular doctor. Yeh sab bas anxiety ki wajah se hua hai. Na thik se khati hai na soti hai. Shes so careless about herself. Behosh nahi hogi toh kya hoga? Mene kitni baar bola hai use ki apna thoda khayal rakhle. Par wo meri sunti hi nahi.

Randhir heart was breaking listening to the condition of his sanyu and that too all because of him.

You just make sure she eats on time and rests well. She will be normal by tomorrow.

Waise aap iske kya lagte ho ? Aaj tak meine kisiko shefali ke saath nahi dekha.

Mai uska kuch nahi lagta doctor. But yeh meri sabkuch hai.

Randhir was looking at sanyukta with so much love that the doctor felt they needed some privacy and he silently left from there.

Randhir went and sat by sanyukta's side on the bed. Holding her hand tears were continuously flowing through his eyes.

He kissed her forehead. Then her cheeks. A drop of tear fell on her cheek which he wiped away with his hand.

I am sorry baby. He said with all the regret he was feeling. Hum dono ki is halat ka zimmedar sirf mai hun. But ab mai aa gaya hun na sanyu. Mai sab thik kardunga. Mai tumhe wapis le aunga sanyu. I love you like hell my jaan.

He slowly slid his hand below her head and slightly shifted her so that her head was resting on his shoulder near his heart.

You are again back where you belong baby. Near my heart. Aura b mai tumhe mujhse door nahi jane dunga. I love you and I am sorry. I am ready to say this for the rest of our lives to make it upto you. But ab no more tears he said to himself wiping away the tears from his eyes. Its my promise sanyu ab humari life mein sirf khushi hogi. I'll give you all the happiness you deserve

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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
read all 3 chapters in a go
awesome updates
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Please update it soon and i like it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
Ohmyeffinggod!!!!
Chapter 2 and 3 iis jzz a day..!
and congratulations u made me cry on ur 3rd chapter..!!
i dono when or who... but the sense actually got into my head i was seeing it...!!
Crazy chica am i not 🤣
but gosh girl just when i think okay u would get better than u already r..u go ahead take another step and prove me rong..!! u got my lazy ass to comment yet agen!!!
i simply loved both the chapters but the 3rd for me was the best..it had a lil of everything!!
the past was slowly revealing..
there was Emotionless Shefali a gal who shut down her emotions just so she wont be hurt agen nor does she want happiness as she thinks it wil be gone in a blink of her eyes!!!
there was GUILT in Randhir for turning his sanyu into this emotionless...careless non-vibrant girl!
Trust Issues...i guess..!! both had it at one point of time.. it was Randhir before its Sanyu now!!
and finally the part i loved and absolutely made me weep was were the confrontation happened..!!
the pain in sanyu was so evident when she tells him she is no longer the girl he is looking for...and the anger she has... in a moody state... seeing her randhir has gotten her all the years of hidden emotion back up her sleeves...!!
on the otherside we have Randhir (in chap 2 he was elastic..filled with happiness he has found her and will be seeing her...!!) and now looking at her all he feels is regert...guilt...remorse of not trusting or listenting to her..!!
jzz when i tot he will leave the saga will continue...!! der was the new emotion i felt DETERMINATION!!! he is determined to get his Sanyu back..give her all the love and happiness she deserves!!
and this is the highlight and turning point for me..!! i had a blissful time...!! although i was tired the whole day...!! i couldnt help but come up and read ur updates and when i read chapter 3 i just couldnt help but write wad every bullshit comes into my head!!
Ohmygod i out did my previous comment and looks like i jzz gave an character analysis 🤣 🤣
UPDATEE SOON
regards
safrena
*runs off before Ari comes searchin for the girl who is tryin to out do her update length to kill her 🤣 *
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
awesome yaar
u portrayed sandhir' s condition very very nicely mainly sanyukta
I felt very bad for her but what happened in the past.
omg I'm so impatient to read next part
plz update next part soon and yaa thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: forevermine

Ohmyeffinggod!!!!

Chapter 2 and 3 iis jzz a day..!
and congratulations u made me cry on ur 3rd chapter..!!
i dono when or who... but the sense actually got into my head i was seeing it...!!
Crazy chica am i not 🤣
but gosh girl just when i think okay u would get better than u already r..u go ahead take another step and prove me rong..!! u got my lazy ass to comment yet agen!!!
i simply loved both the chapters but the 3rd for me was the best..it had a lil of everything!!
the past was slowly revealing..
there was Emotionless Shefali a gal who shut down her emotions just so she wont be hurt agen nor does she want happiness as she thinks it wil be gone in a blink of her eyes!!!
there was GUILT in Randhir for turning his sanyu into this emotionless...careless non-vibrant girl!
Trust Issues...i guess..!! both had it at one point of time.. it was Randhir before its Sanyu now!!
and finally the part i loved and absolutely made me weep was were the confrontation happened..!!
the pain in sanyu was so evident when she tells him she is no longer the girl he is looking for...and the anger she has... in a moody state... seeing her randhir has gotten her all the years of hidden emotion back up her sleeves...!!
on the otherside we have Randhir (in chap 2 he was elastic..filled with happiness he has found her and will be seeing her...!!) and now looking at her all he feels is regert...guilt...remorse of not trusting or listenting to her..!!
jzz when i tot he will leave the saga will continue...!! der was the new emotion i felt DETERMINATION!!! he is determined to get his Sanyu back..give her all the love and happiness she deserves!!
and this is the highlight and turning point for me..!! i had a blissful time...!! although i was tired the whole day...!! i couldnt help but come up and read ur updates and when i read chapter 3 i just couldnt help but write wad every bullshit comes into my head!!
Ohmygod i out did my previous comment and looks like i jzz gave an character analysis 🤣 🤣
UPDATEE SOON
regards
safrena
*runs off before Ari comes searchin for the girl who is tryin to out do her update length to kill her 🤣 *

I would have killed you if you hadnt commented :P I was missing your everest length comments since morning 😆 And girl you more than made up for it with your comment 😃 I am a happy happy writer after this. U made my day 🤗🤗Only one word. Thank you 😳 And i like how you got exactly what i wanted to portray :P Mujhe wapis samjha bhi diya what i wrote and why i wrote it 🤣
P.s your long comments inspire me to write longer and better. just so you wont outdo me 🤣 keep them coming 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: georgia

awesome yaar
u portrayed sandhir' s condition very very nicely mainly sanyukta
I felt very bad for her but what happened in the past.
omg I'm so impatient to read next part
plz update next part soon and yaa thanks for the pm

Thank you so much :) i am glad you liked sandhirs meet :) Their past will slowly unfold in the coming chapter. 😉

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