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Congratulations on Thread 23 Blasters! A fantastic first page from our very talented team of Durgey, In di, Faiqu, Kate and Supriya who can take some ott and even work that to their favour!
@ 225I hated how Arnav was tying himself up in knots in his attempt to hate Khushi. He insisted that much to his distaste she had taken possession of his room and made his life a hell, there was just no getting away from her! And he abhorred that!But did he? He was distraught not to see her in his room day after day and concerned too. All he wanted was to reach out for her. Touch her like her dangling star, caress the elusive star in the palm of his hand. And love her.
lovely one on the man with a blank space in him minus her, wiwy. that is what i really felt in this one too. two lovers, in that funny place only lovers can slip into.
on her side a little sadness for herself, what a relief to see she can want something for just herself too... and he was being a perfect horror after heer ranjha. and a streak of abhiman. "so he doesn't want to see my face", "i don't need to tell you anything". maza aa gaya.
and in him as you so wonderfully say, tying himself up in knots over his feelings. trying to stay in perfect control of his life.
both just being in love and refusing to understand what it does to you. makes mincemeat of you really as they will find out soon enough. 😆
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