Simply Different- A Naren Poem

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Posted: 8 years ago
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So just tried writing a poem. Share views.

Simply Different

He walks his walk,

and rules his own space.

Having the depth of an ocean,

though people feel he is just not open.

Detached from the material world,

cos deeper things inspire him

Meditation is his passion

laced with compassion

His philosophies of life

are indeed a treasure

cos you see varied angles

World is not simple as it looks

though each one wants to write their books

He will never regret his actions

as they are his definitions

Listening to others, he gels

But invade his space

And he will blaze

Cos his mind is a complex blend

which people only have judged

But what goes within is wisdom

which is rare and found seldom


-Madhura

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Madhu!! A big hug for u ,since u decided to write it!!
It was bliss ❤️,I wouldn't be able to do this
You connect with him on a different level..He is so deep and complex ,Man.
I loved how you described him,simple yet regal
It reminded me a bit of Omkara,you know SculptureKara😆
Mind-blowing read..
Keep writing
Edited by Animagus_Sirius - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Animagus_Sirius

Res
Unress

Madhu!! A big hug for u ,since u decided to write it!!
It was bliss ❤️,I wouldn't be able to do this
You connect with him on a different level..He is so deep and complex ,Man.
I loved how you described him,simple yet regal
It reminded me a bit of Omkara,you know SculptureKara😆
Mind-blowing read..
Keep writing



Hugs back! Thank you so much Anshi!
Yes, Connection is needed as you say.
Yes, he is that way.
Yes do not remind me of our Sculpturekara, he just died!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aarti_16

Awesome poem ! 👏



Thank you Aarti
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It's beautiful Madhura
Perfectly describes Naren with all his innocence
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Originally posted by: Vanellope

It's beautiful Madhura

Perfectly describes Naren with all his innocence



Thank you Gopa, glad you like.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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finally found time to read your poem, very well defined about naren 👏 enjoyed reading it😛

for your poem⭐️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: shumi.

finally found time to read your poem, very well defined about naren 👏 enjoyed reading it😛


for your poem⭐️



So happy to know Shumi, glad you enjoyed the poem and felt it defines Naren.

😃😃


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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesommme⭐️...keep up with your good work😃😃😃...totally defines naren.😊😊
love it
Edited by grownup - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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How did I miss this it is really an ode to our amazing personality 👏👏
Briefly explained with amazing imagery and juxtapositions are well placed⭐️⭐️

Naren is placed in a scenario he is opt for awesome work madhu👏👏👏

loved it 😳

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