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Posted: 13 years ago
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Dear Creative heads,

So far you have been doing an amazing job with the story line and keeping us entertained but lately the rush in the story and sudden shift of focus from Phulwa to Abhay has left many viewers confused and worrying about the current track. We understand that twists are brought in to keep the viewers attached to the show and TRPs play a role in this but in the midst of all this please don't sacrifice on the quality of the show.

You are the creative heads and know better than any of us, but it's our humble request that you may consider the following:

  • 1. Please make Abhay better soon. Bedridden hero is the last thing audience wishes to see. Such a sad track doesn't keep audience engaged for long time. Please focus on more Abhay-Phulwa scenes which the viewers love.
  • 2. We would be glad if you pertained a little more closely to the actual framework of the whole show. It began with Phulwa as a young girl being tortured by the Thakur and we would like to see her engaging with him more. While we understand that Abhay's sequence is a significant turning point, we would appreciate it if it added to the core element of the show in helping Phulwa take down the Thakur.
  • 3. Please develop Abhay-Phulwa relationship track further but at the right pace. They have just started to become a couple please show us more scenes to develop their slowly and not rush them.
  • 4. Abhay-Phulwa is the main USP of the show right now so please make best use of them please show us more subtle romance between them.
  • 5. Please retain the true essence of Phulwa's character. She is a dacoit so please don't turn her into a crying bahu.
  • 6. Abhays past story seems to be highly inconsistent. Too many loopholes between what was shown earlier and what is being shown now. His description of his life with his mother and grandmother are very different from the Thakur's account of the whole deal.
  • 7. While we understand that non-lead characters are not always available, Babu plays an important role in Phulwa's life and her story and it is our humble request to perhaps have him make an entry in some way or another.
  • 8. Kindly give us more promos so that the audience may know what to expect in near future.
  • 9. Abhay-Phulwa both are strong independent characters, please dont reduce them to a misery stricken couple.

We hope that you will consider the above points, it's your show and you will do as you please but the viewers do have the above qualms regarding it. And our only concern is that the show that we have been so loyally watching for the past one year remains in the top quality show.

Here hoping that you will take into consideration the above points and viewers will enjoy the show with the same great quality and content as before.

Sincerely,

Phulwa Viewers.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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I would really like to make a point on the characterisation of Phulwa herself.

On of the greatest appeals of this show I believe was how Phulwa took the murder of her family in her stride and instead of falling back on others for help, took the unusual stance of become a dacoit instead. Her character was portrayed beautiful, strong, no-nonsense, emotionally vapid and yet at the same time, an unbending sense of justice that made her stand up for the weak and exploited.

It is understandable that after falling in love, she softened a great deal and finally cried after possibly many years of not shedding a single tear. And it was heartening to see that after getting over her initial shock over her betrayal, she still portrayed the similar strength in getting revenge for her state. In between we also got to see the side of her as a caring and loving sister, and it was also very nicely portrayed.

Personally I feel that we've lost a lot of the edge she had as a dacoit after having entered the haveli. In a night she changed her personality to fit that of a proper Thakurayn, but still retained her unique individuality shown most convincingly by her refusal to bow down to Abhay's repeated attempts to scare her and her attempt to help the old lady.

Yet as of recent, how she reacted to her circumstances looks very different from her portrayal of a dacoit. She spends half an episode just crying and the other half talking to herself/others.

Simply, my question is just why has she changed so drastically? From being a person who was quick to act she's been doing more of a usual bahu planning and talking only. Her characteristic strength as a woman who refuses to back down has virtually disappeared.
I would've personally thought that having Abhay now on her side would give her more strength and courage, yet she's only been crying away.

I would simply request to have some semblance of the old Phulwa back, the fiery girl who would not hesitate to pick up a gun if necessary and the one who would rather do something than sit back and cry. I personally believe that the two lead actors have a lot of potential in showing their aggressive side and hopefully in the future we can see them in such avatars again.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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LOOKING FOR SOME CREATIVE PEOPLE TO TELL US WHAT THEY THINK THE CVS CAN DO IN THE COMING TRACK ON PHULWA
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Dear Creatiive Heads, The most remarkable quality of this serial has been the strong character of the protagonist. She is emotional and loves her family has already been proved during the court trials when she decides to bow when abhay threatens her with babu's death. Why have you now reduced her to a bahurani in any other serial who cries at the smallest incident.After entering the haveli her character has changed a lot from a fighter to a subdued emotional bahurani. Plz we want our strong phulwa back.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i agree with the above post we want phulwa daccoit back even though i love her in this new character aswell
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Posted: 13 years ago
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please focus on Abhay Phulea.We love them and want more scenes on them with an impressive storyline.Dont rush please.Let them fall in love slowly or show the scenes in a subtle manner rather than rushing.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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No Arjun between abhay Phulwa please.We will hate that.let Arjun have his own girl.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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On yesterday's episode, I must say hats off for bringing back our dacoit girl. There's been a lot of rona-dhona lately, and nothing much being done. The way she took off with the chaku in her hand in that sari - that was truly damdaar!👏👏
The scene with Abhay laughing was pure genius, his amusement over all other feelings completely shows that he has accepted her as she is and I'm sure much will come off it in the future.

Please keep on showing us more of her rocking dacoit avatar, and absolutely looking forward to see our doctorjee in a burkha next week😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Would really like to more frequent spats between her and Thakur. it was really enjoyable to c them try to outdo each other when Phulwa just got married so wud love to have Phulwa on the same level as thakur and not falling to his feet.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Dear Creative Head, Pls give us more Abhay n Phulwa scenes n pls make Abhay alright. Ohh, haa, I 4got wen the luv triangle gets over, pls give one intimacy scene(sooo sorry, par majburi hai) n 4 gudness sake pls punish Thakur, it wud b nyc of u.

Edited by neilbhatthot - 13 years ago

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