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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: vita93


Tab bhuk itni bhi nahin thi...you see, you always get hungry jab when there's no food around na! To jab Phulwa chali gayi tabbhi usko khane ki value ki ehsaas huya...aur tab se ban gaya bhooka sher!🤣
Ohhh! Aaj kal mera damagh kuch kam kaam kar raha hai. 😆
Yes yes you are very right. Ab tu bhook ka ehsaas ho raha hai. LOL! Bhooke shair ko thoda aur tapadne do, phir aye ga khane ka asli maza. 🤣

Mujhe to aab hi dekhna hain!!! I want to find treasure and keep it for myself!🤣 50-50, thik hain!😆
Rofl! Ok 50/50 chale ga. Besides i dont think pura 100% bhooka shair i cant handle!! 🤣


@Tadpao- Like i said tadap ne do tabhi value aye gi and maza bhi!! 🤣
@Hindi- Arey no need. You were just spot on. It was quite funny. Had fun reading it. 😆

@Goodnight- Aww chalo sahi you enjoy your sleep. Btw i have edited my part there. Once great read. Hope to see more from you soon! :)
Goodnight and take care! 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: vita93

Waise you know I was just thinking of something...


So we're hoping that Babu should come to meet Phulwa right? And very likely she'll try to explain to him to let her stay? But what if in a twist Abhay tells her to leave instead? I could imagine first of all he probably doesn't want her to have to choose between him and her brother and secondly even he has to admit that she's just as safe, if not more, with the kabiley away from the haveli and it's dangerous people.

I think if it ever comes to that, he'd probably also know that if Phulwa truly loves him, Babu would definitely come to realise that. Like staying with them she randomly comments about Abhay, wonders whether he's eating properly and calling him up at night just to ask how he's doing.
Oooh and best of all, they're all gathered in the kabiley in a circle celebrating her return and listening to music and the RJ puts out a song dedicated by Abhay to his pyaare patni Phulwa (obviously its ORP) and she smiles along to it...?:)

Sighh I'm thinking so deep into this but what to do, there hasn't been a PhAb scene for more than a day already!!:(


I really like this idea. At least isi bahane we will get to see the old gang back and yes Phulwa worrying for him would be super sweet. And yeah, it would show the Kabila people what Abhay means to Phulwa now, also make them accept him within their family.
Best would be if Abhay comes to meet her. It would be like Shatru days again. They are in the same room, AP look at each and other and FBs come but instead of getting sad Phulwa manages to smile and looking at her Abhay also smiles. Just showing that they are moving on and the bitter past is not so bitter any more.

And ohh! Maybe we can have some romantic sweet moment. Like Abhay comes to meet Phulwa, but she doesnt know as she is inside the room. Gauri or anyone from them sends Abhay in and closes the door. Phulwa turns around and is surprised to see him. They have cute talk and all, but later discover that the door is jammed and they are lock alone in the room until they can get a key to open it. ;) And yeah RJ uncle can play 'Hum Tum Ek Kamre Mein' song. 😆

Aww i know! Same haal here. PhAblessness doesnt do me much good either. 😒
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi yeas yes Iagree Abhay never really loved arti I mean she loved hinm bt nt the other way round😊 I hope he realises that even as shatru he had fallen fr Phulwa bt was jst blind to see that or probably was too proud to accept that.
And pls dont send her back to the kabila then how do we gt our sweet moments yaar??? i mean he can visit her and all that bt he wont b spending the nite there rite??😭😭So lt phulwa stay there fr a day and come back to abhay 😉
Waiting fr tomorrow..it better b good😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
Mimi- LOL! Yeah bhi hai. Ok so kabila jane ka plan cancel. 😆

But like you said we can do one thing, she does go to kabila but at night like Vita said she is worrying too much about Abhay and calls him but he doesnt pick it up. She gets so worried that she decides to go back home. Everyone tries to stop her but she says 'nahi hum apne Abhay ke beghair yahan nahi reh sakte.' And goes back to haveli just to be close to her Abhay. 😳😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
Darn it! Not having any one of you around is making me restless and more bored. :| And as a result i wrote this one silly scene. Mimi's idea about Abhays accidental gift to Phulwa and Vita's idea about it turning out to be a nightie and Phulwa going on and wearing it, has led me to write this scene. Also the room breaking apart talks and one lil part inspired from a scene in a show. So basically all the credit goes to Vita and Mimi and the shows for corrupting my mind and making me write such stuff. Wrote avein hi so many mistakes are there, also mixed English and Urdu/Hindi dialogues kindly ignore them. Its just to read and forget. 😆
It turned out to be longer than i had anticipated, anywhos here it is. :D
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So after all the misunderstanding etc clear up Phulwa excuses and goes to do some work. Abhay is standing alone in the room near the window again smiling at the moon. Soft breeze blowing his hair, he is lost in his thoughts and doesn't notice Phulwa who had quietly walked in the room and is now standing behind him. But as always he feels her presence and turns around to see her standing there still. Its night time and all the lights are off expect for one lamp so it's almost dark and Abhay can't see her properly. But as his eyes adjust on her he sees she is standing with a big shawl wrapped around her, her hair let loose on the side, wearing no makeup or jewelry. As his mind tries to comprehend what's happening Phuwla slowly stretches her hand out revealing the nightie Abhay bought for her accidentally. It's a long maroon silk nightie with cap sleeves and lacy trimmings. Abhay eyes go wide and jaw drop as Phulwa slowly lets the shawl drop down to the floor. He continues to ogle her while walking towards her. Phulwa nervous looks down. Abhay comes and stands real close to her. He slowly caresses her cheek and lifts her face up. Her eyes closed, a tear creeps from the side. Abhay noticing it steps back thinking she is not ready and is just doing it for him. But just as he is about to turn and leave her hand holds him back. Surprised he looks at her and she smiles saying something sweet. (Can't come up with dialogue but she says about accepting him as her husband and their relation, some emotional dialogue.) Hearing it Abhay is obviously pleased, smiling he cups her face and places a kiss her forehead and goes down to her lips leaving a trail of kisses behind. But just as he is about to kiss her Phulwa shies away and runs to the corner of the room.

Abhay now in bhooka shair mode runs after her and grabbing her says: 'This is not the way to please your husband?' Phulwa smiles at him impatiently saying: 'I wore this nightie for you na? Bus aaj ke liye itna hi.'

Pushing him aside she starts to leave, Abhay losing his balance moves back. *Crash* The sound makes her stop in her tracks, she turns to see the coat hanger down on the floor because Abhay knocked it over in his failed attempt to balance himself. Phulwa glares at him saying: 'look now what you did?' Abhay: 'Me? You pushed me!'

Phulwa: 'Yeah so? Police wale hain aur ek push se hil gaye?' She starts to laugh at him. Abhay the shair in him now waking up more, grabs her hard, Phulwa tries to push away again but fails so she starts to tickle him and Abhay laughing leaves her. Phulwa taking advantage starts to run, Abhay runs after her, they both start running around the room. Phulwa takes up cushions from the bed and throws at him to slow down his pace. Abhay catches them and throws them back. In the process a cushion tears open and feathers start flying all over the room. They are still running and laughing when Abhay finally catches her.

'Ab kahan jaogi bach ke dacoit rani?' he asks her grinning. Phulwa looks at him for a few seconds thinking something than says: 'Tu aap chahte hain ke hum aap ko khush karein? Hm. Theek hai.' And with this she pushes him against the closet behind them. Abhay taken by the sudden change looks at her dumbstruck.

Phulwa looks at him with the 'jungli billi' in her making an appearance and asks 'Kya hua patimohedey? Ab pati dhram nahi nibhana.' Abhay obviously too surprised to see this side of his pyari patni doesn't know how to react and continues to look at her while she smiles at him with a mischievous twinkle in her eye. Abhay being Abhay quickly composes himself and turns her around so that now she is pushed against the closet. Phulwa: 'Abhay bus bahut hogaya. Ab chodo humein.' And struggles to free herself.

Abhay: 'Kyun? Dar gayi meri dacoit?' he asks laughing. Phulwa with a straight face: 'Humein dar nahi lagta. Arey Thakurian aap?' Abhay quickly leaves her and turns around.

Phulwa starts laughing saying: 'Ab kuan darta hai?' Abhay: 'oh you are so gonna get it!' and stretches out to grab her but misses, instead lands on the dresser. *crash* Phulwa turns to find half of the dresser items on the floor along with Abhay. She starts to laugh more saying: 'Joint Commissioner ban gaye par kuch nahi seekha.'

Abhay getting up tries to grab her again but again fail miserably and as a result they both fall down back on the bed, short of breath due to all the running. Both lying on bed next to each other again burst out laughing. They continue to laugh when Abhay notices a stray hair has landed on Phulwas face, it bothers him more than her. Like a reflex he leans over to tuck it back in place. Just as he is doing it he notices the odd position they are in and Phulwa staring up at him with moist eyes he looks away ready to move back but Phulwa holds his hand pulling him closer. They share a passionate eye-lock, the longing and desires finally paving there way through...

Aaand i will leave the rest to your imagination. Haha. ;)

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Posted: 13 years ago

Heyy Ameres first of all I would like to thank you for accepting me and adding me in the members' list thanks😊

ok soo I totally agree with all of you I really do wish phulwas brother finds everything out and comes to take her away.. only for a little while.. I think this little separation will make them realize more about each others feelings what do u guys think??

And yes I would love to see the whole kabiley family I miss them a lot and it would be nice to see them understanding both abhays and phulwas feeling for each other and accepting abhay.. haiii now I am just waiting for Mondays episode.. Monday kab aygayy… hehehhehe 😆and omg the whole being locked in the same room would be an amazing scene.. ok now I soo hope the cvs do something like this.. abhay sending phulwa away for a little while for her safety awwwnn …😍 and wow Ameres you have a gift for writing… you wrote a wonderful piece wow.. I had to read it over and over again.. you did an amazing job.. keep up the good work 👏and please do continue I am waiting eagerly… and yes you will be hearing a lot from me now 😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
Aroojm- Hello! Welcome aboard! Arey no need of thanks. This AT is open to all PhAb fans, this place is for all us. So no need to say thanks. :D

@Separation- True. As they distance makes the heart grow fonder, so surely in their case too we can expect to see that happening. ;)

@Post- Aww! Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it. 😳
If you like reading please check the first page there i have posted the links to posts on PhAb by members. :)

Oh yes! Please continue to come here more often. I would love to see this forum & AT more active. 😃
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@All- I had been thinking about that and my guess was right!! The room we had been happily calling Abhay's room and dreaming on non-stop scenes about is not Abhays room. Yes, you heard me right. That is actually Phulwas room. CV's conveniently placed the coat hanger there thinking that they can fool masoom viewers like us. But yo CVs you cant fool dedicated viewers like us, who have a habit of scrutinizing each and every detail.
We got the blooper. Boo! *shows tongue*

Lol, jokes apart I guess and hope that they were trying to fool us and show that its Abhays room. Because i would be highly disappointed if its not. OR in my over excitement i thought that it was Abhays room and led everyone to think it was, while they had no intention of doing so.

For more details and proof of how i found out. Keep watching this space. Cause i'm going to sleep now so later! 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Ameres

@All- I had been thinking about that and my guess was right!! The room we had been happily calling Abhay's room and dreaming on non-stop scenes about is not Abhays room. Yes, you heard me right. That is actually Phulwas room. CV's conveniently placed the coat hanger there thinking that they can fool masoom viewers like us. But yo CVs you cant fool dedicated viewers like us, who have a habit of scrutinizing each and every detail.
We got the blooper. Boo! *shows tongue*

Lol, jokes apart I guess and hope that they were trying to fool us and show that its Abhays room. Because i would be highly disappointed if its not. OR in my over excitement i thought that it was Abhays room and led everyone to think it was, while they had no intention of doing so.

For more details and proof of how i found out. Keep watching this space. Cause i'm going to sleep now so later! 😆



What, what what? How can you say something like that and disappear without giving us more details?! You're such a tease Anu, I am so anxious now!
I really did think it was Abhay's room, because other than the coat hanger, his mom's picture was also mounted on the wall in there! So even if it was supposed to be Phulwa's room, I think Abhay planned on moving in there as well. I mean he didn't want to leave her by herself in case she needed anything when she was coming back from the hospital, and now after everything that has happened, I seriously doubt he would leave her alone in that room! Especially after the little conversation they had on Friday, in which he told her that if she needed anything...and she completed his sentence both time by saying that he was the only one she's going to call on. He is the only one she wants to rely on, and he wants to be her shoulder and strength during the whole process, so I really don't think the whole sleeping in two rooms should happen now, it would make no sense. On top of it all, they've accepted their relationship, she obviously wants him with her, and he wants to be there for her, so this is the natural next step!
The only thing I can see happening, is that he might offer to sleep on the sofa till things are more comfortable between them, but a whole room separation...I would hate it if that were to happen! And I really hope that if the whole sleeping on the sofa thing does happen, Phulwa quickly puts an end to it! Night is the only time we'll be able to get super cute scenes from them if they're in the same room, because he'll be at the station all day, and she'd either be recovering, or after that doing her own things!

So, yeah I obviously have many thoughts on this topic, but I can't wait to see the explanation you have, maybe I'll be forced to reconsider my points after that, even though I really, really hope it's not true...please CVs don't take this from us!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Ameres

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@Tadpao- Like i said tadap ne do tabhi value aye gi and maza bhi!! 🤣
Oooh just imagine Abhay going around the whole day just saying "Phulwa...Phulwa...Phulwa!!"
@Hindi- Arey no need. You were just spot on. It was quite funny. Had fun reading it. 😆

@Goodnight- Aww chalo sahi you enjoy your sleep. Btw i have edited my part there. Once great read. Hope to see more from you soon! :)
Goodnight and take care! 🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Ameres


I really like this idea. At least isi bahane we will get to see the old gang back and yes Phulwa worrying for him would be super sweet. And yeah, it would show the Kabila people what Abhay means to Phulwa now, also make them accept him within their family.
Best would be if Abhay comes to meet her. It would be like Shatru days again. They are in the same room, AP look at each and other and FBs come but instead of getting sad Phulwa manages to smile and looking at her Abhay also smiles. Just showing that they are moving on and the bitter past is not so bitter any more.

And ohh! Maybe we can have some romantic sweet moment. Like Abhay comes to meet Phulwa, but she doesnt know as she is inside the room. Gauri or anyone from them sends Abhay in and closes the door. Phulwa turns around and is surprised to see him. They have cute talk and all, but later discover that the door is jammed and they are lock alone in the room until they can get a key to open it. ;) And yeah RJ uncle can play 'Hum Tum Ek Kamre Mein' song. 😆

Aww i know! Same haal here. PhAblessness doesnt do me much good either. 😒


@Abhay returning: Awww that'd just be the icing on the cake!!! If Phulwa can't stay without Abhay, Abhay ka haal would be even worse na! How's about when Abhay comes everybody picks up their rifles and threaten to shoot him and Phulwa comes running down to meet him and hugs him in front of everyone!😍

@Kamra: LOVED it!! And waise bhi, it resembles more of their shelter than any room in the haveli...woww RJ getting very into the mood setting business, playing the right songs at the right times...😆 I'd love to the look on her face, especially if he's dressed up as Shatru - it'll truly be the man she fell in love with and there's no telling the amount of happiness she'll feel:))

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