TVS ki kahani Apki Zubani / TVS story written by U - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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then he will tell Sugvi story to her,how he misunderstood her, how he repenting and seeking forgiveness from her. then he will ask her now "

will Sugni forgive him' ?
then Chubuli said, 'ya Sugni should forgive him cause mafi mangnese to Sitamaiyya bhi sabko maaf kar deti hai."

TVS SHOCKED. HEARING SITAMAIYYA.

again he assured that she is Sugni only.
then suddenely heavy rain, ...😲

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Edited by Sunny1516 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chulbuli sees the rain n goes to be wet, starting to play with the water ,vikram sees her n lost in past times n again ore piya in background, vikram slowly comes near her n looking at her n amazed to see his sugni alive in chulbuli n hugs her again saying ... I knew u r my sugni n you said u will forgive me I love you ... I love you my sugni dont leave me this time
Chulbuli amazed n free her self from that hug n say...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chulbuli says,"No. Stay away from me. I don't know you. I know that there was a Sugni whom you loved very much or still you love. I understand that you miss her the most. I may look like her but I am not that girl. I am Chulbuli. I am a girl born & brought up in Kothi. I have a loving amma to take care of me. I have so many sisters there.And I have Divakar seth, my love, my owner. That's it. That's my world. and you are nowhere in that world. So please leave me & forget me."
Vikram is surprised:" I have no place in your world!" Holding Sugni he continues:"Then why did my destiny bring me here? Why you were the only one to save me when I was hurt? Why did we meet then? Why do we both get lost when we are together? Answer me Sugni..." Vikram turns opposite & then again turning back to her he continues:"Ask yourself Sugni.It is said that true love never dies. I have full faith on my love Sugni. You will get your answer." Vikram leaves towards jeep leaving Sugni shocked & thinking...
Edited by M0uNi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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... thinking about why this man is so adamant. But that annoyed feeling vanished...

She suddenly felt in a trance and waves of anxiety washed over her when she saw his back towards her and him heading towards his jeep.

What's happening to mee ?? no... her feet stayed rooted to the spot and she wanted to follow him but couldn't budge. This strange unpleasant feeling made her apprehensive, it felt like deja-vu and tears started to well up without warning as her head started to feel lighter as a feather.

Vickram stopped walking at that instant...


Yes Ronit ^-^ am loving all of you gals' parts to the story ^-^
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Posted: 12 years ago
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he couldn't see her tears in the rain so he walk to his jeep and Chulbuli confused doesn't understand what to say More... followed him to his jeep and said listen U said you will drop me home, But I Have one problem, I am totally wet. If I go like this home Amma will be worried and will think strange things about Me and you. I need to be dry and then go back you too are wet and we can't go like this in the rain ... what are you thinking ?? 😲 .. Vikram say ...
Edited by ronshaan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: octopie

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Yes Ronit ^-^ am loving all of you gals' parts to the story ^-^


yeah I love it too..
it becomes very interesting to read and to continue the last part ..
it becomes romantic I must say 😃
Edited by ronshaan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
Vickram's dancing hazel eyes watch her every reaction and he replies, "what strange things?" 😆 😳 😆

Sugni opens her mouth then closes it and starts to turn red. In a huff, she climbs the jeep in haste only for her foot to slip, and she falls back... into Vickram's arms😳.


hahahaa. 😳
Edited by octopie - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Vikram catches her and after a brief eyelock he places her on the seat of his jeep. He starts his jeep and wonders how he can get Sugni dry and decides to stop at a clothing store and purchase a similar outfit for her.

Sugni is excited to see the beautiful sarees, etc and Vikram is lost in memories of Sugni and Amrita choosing outfits to wear after her marriage.

Then Vikram chooses a saree for Sugni and she loves it instantly and in her excitement she says "Thank you Thakur malack" leaving them both shocked...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Vikram Started smiling and saying I knew it and I said it many many times you are my sugni I promise you I will remind you that you are my sugni. Chulbuli then said - I heared this name today many times thats why I said esa kuch nahi hay (its nothing like that) .. you too please select something for you because you r wet too. Vikram - No I am okay dont think about me wear the saree quick so I can drop U home.. Thakur Malak aap kyon nahi sunte ho kabhi b meri baat (why dont you listen to me every time ?) vikram amazed to hear that and say ... 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Some one please continue the story

I was the last one to write

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