Mehbeer Fan Fiction&to lighten the mood of Mehberians

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Well I have started writing a Fanfiction.Guys if you like it I will definitely continue...it has basically comic elements to make you laugh as well as in the present story Mehbeer are in emotional turmoil.These are basically some moments in Mehbeer life. So guys...Plz comment and let me know how you like it

"HUMARI NISHAAN"

Episode :01

It starts with Mehbeer reuniting and they marry.Akshat sacrifices his love and advises Ishaan to go with Meher and call Abeer his Dad. Ishaan though first strongly refuses to let go Akshat but seeing Meher getting unhappy(like father like son:Mama's boy)he gives up. Now,Ishaan is with his parents but he is having a distance with Abeer.

Abeer on their suhaag raat(this time grand wedding with everything in tow) promises Meher that he will always keep her happy in life and he also requests Meher that they will have another baby.

Abeer promises to Meher she will onlyhave to bear the 9 months pregnancy pain and the feeding for some months and the babies will be under his care and attention.He promises Meher that she has bore all the pain with Ishaan and now it is the turn of Abeer to pay attention to the kids.

One day Meher is pregnant for the 2nd time and all are so happy.Bua is worried though.However,Abeer takes care of Meher and even sacrifices his singing career to an extent to spend time with Meher. Finally the day arrives the Meher gives birth.This time to twins.One son and one daughter.Meher is very worried how to manage two kids with her office etc.

Abeer:Koyi baat nehi baby,tum to fikar maat karo,mein saab kuch samhal lunga

Meher:Really sweetheart

Abeer:Paaki baat,main aur Mom kaar lunga.Tumko koyi parishaani uthana nehi padega.

(Meher sigh and they hug)

They name their son and daughter as Manav and Arushi.Ishaan is very happy to be the big brother. Soon,Meher returns home and Abeer starts to take care of the babies.Ishaan also takes care of them too. Abeer spends a lot of time with the twins (in order to show that he is a doting father)and Meher realizes that how wrong he was regarding Abeer. He is over possessive over son and daughter.Ishaan had already a distance with Abeer and the twins distances Abeer from Ishaan more.Only Ishaan tolerates Abeer for her mother and even does not call Abeer "Papa"but AM whereas Abeer call him "Champ"

Now, after another 8 years:

Abeer:Good morning Baby.Idahar udhar kya dekh rahi ho...mein a gaya ho...ab sirf meri taraf dekho...(winks)

Meher:Abeer u will never change na(blushing)!Shamne Ishaan baita hain&by the way where are your darlings?

Ishaan: Sayad so raha hoga coz, AM to ajkal jaldi uthte hain, uska place un dono ne li rakhi haain...

Meher:Ishaaan!Aisa koyi baat karta hai apni Papa se.

Ishaan:Ha mein to aisa hi karta hu!

Abeer:Are thik hi to hai Meher!Mera beta hai badtameezi to mere genes me hain(Since Ishaan does not respond to Abeer so Abeer has started using this tactics with Ishaan and he is successful in this)

This irritates Ishaan more and he become silent.

Abeer:Jaake dekh leta hu what they are doing!

Arushi:Good morning my handsome Rockstar Dada.(They call Abeer Dada)

Abeer: Good morning my beautiful princess.Where is bhai?

Arushi:Oh style bhai?He is busy doing something.School ka programme hain kaal.So jaldi uth gaaye te.Tomorrow aap ka din I mean "Father's Day"celebration hain na school mein.Woh kuch perform karega.Uska rehearsal kaar raha hain. Come let's watch.

Now,they go upstairs and Manav's entry:(Manav is like Abeer a music prodigee and quite matured of his age)

Singing with a small guitar and headhand :

"Ek baat batayu aap se

Main bohut pyar karta hu mere Dada se

Mein to Superstar

Rockstar Abeer Ka Fan

Koyi Le na mujhse Paanga

Mein sirf Rockstar Abeer ka Fan"

Abeer:Muaah muaah mera beta.Kya gaana banaya hain

He has overlooked Meher&Ishaan is also behind her...

Meher:OMG!Yeh kya ho raha hai.

Ishaan:Apka Superstar I mean Rockstar ka influence hain.Dekh lijiye

(Meher frustrated)

Meher:Abeer dekho,tum acchi tarah se dekho...tumhare beta ka tarike...Iska mein kya karu!

Abeer:Kuch nehi karna Baby,dekh nehi rahi ho,he is a Born Superstar.Just like me...(winks)

Meher:Yeh jo tum us ko sir pe charake rakha hain,ekdin humlog bahut mushkil mein paroge...dekh lena

Arushi: Haar mushkil to ashaan banana ke tarike mere Rockstar Dada mein hain Mama

Meher:Tui chup kar,chamchi kahi ka

Abeer:Dekho Meher meri beti se uchi awaz mein koyi baat kare mujhe bilkul bhi pasand nehi

Ishaan:Dekhiya AH, mujhe bhi bilkul accha nehi lagta mere Mom ke saath koyi uchi awaz mein baat kare thik hain.

Meher: Ishaan!

Ishaan:Kya Mom.Mein thik hi kahe raha hu...Aap dekh nehi rahi hain,AH kaise in dono ko bigaad ke rakhe hain.Kaal apne un dono ke Homework karane ke liye kaha tha...to un dono ne cartoons draw karna shuru kar diya (Arushi making a face to Ishaan) and phir jab maine unko daatan to un dono ne mujhe threat diya ke agar zyaada baat karunga to swimming pool mein dakel dega.Aur Manu to yeh hi gaana gaane laaga:

"Chotto baacha samaj ke mujhko na takrana re.."

Just imagaine Mom.

Abeer started laughing loudly

Meher:Abeeer. Just see the difference between Ishaan and them.Except common point Ziddi other than that,Ishaan is so good and well mannered .Aur mujhe to tumko parwarish ka responsibility nehi dena chahiye tha...main kyu itna emotional ho gayi tumhare baton mein aakar...

Abeer:Tum to mujhe dekhte hi emotional ho jati ho,mere biwi,I mean my baby.Is baat pe ho jaaye!(winks)and tries to embrace her...

Arushi giggles and Ishaan looks embarrassed.

Meher:Abeer plz stop it ...kaab tum serious hoge...tum na baccho ke samne...

Now Manav comes and was already hearing from a distance:

Manav: Mere Papa to hero hai...Rockstar bhi...woh to kuch bhi bol sakta hain...aur jaha meri Mom kitni Hot laagti hai,hain na Papa(winks like Abeer and they both give Hi5)

Meher: Manav ...Abeer tum sirf dekho kaisa baat kaar raha hain apni Ma ke saath... haar nature tum par gaya hain.

Manav:Ha ha Mama,yeh wink dekhke hi to aap Papa pe itna fida huye the,to itni irriate kya ho rahe ho

Ishaan:It is their personal matter. Tum niche Breakfast mein cholo.Tumhe tameez nehi Mom aur Dad se kaise baat karte hain!

Manav:Aree chillax Big Bro...tum kya jaano...mere Dada mera role model hain aur unho ne kitna pyar kiya Mom se...Haar raat soone se pehle main to wahi kahani baar bar sunta hu. Kyu Aru,osko puch lo...

Arushi: Bilkul thik mere StyleBhai . Big B aapko to kuch nehi pata.

Ishaan(sarcastically):Ha,pyar bohut kiya aur bahot dard bhi diya hain.Woh mujhse bahtar kaun jaan sakta hain...

Manav and Arushi:Big B phir se Dada ka class le rahe hain kya?Dada ka bare mein kuch nehi bolenge.Mama plz ab kuch to boliye...hamare itna class lete hain...uska bhi thoda sa lijiye na plz...

Abeer looks at him teary eyed and Meher:Ishaan,tumhe promise kiya tha mujhse...tum tumhare Dad ke bare mein aise baat nehi karoge

Abeer:Nehi nehi bol na,jitna zeher hain andar nikaal de...

Now Meher thinks it is better to divert the attention to Manav

Meher:Excuse me Abeer and Ishaan,are you trying to protect Manav from scolding?

Abeer and Ishaan:Like what?

Meher : Kya Abeer tum itna chota baccha ko ...humare love story kaisa bata sakte ho?

Abeer:Jaise tum Aru ko kabhi kabhi Rakumar aur Rajkumari ki kahani batate ho waise hi...main to real wala sunata hu...aur fhikar not Baby...Adult scenes minus kaar ke bola tha...(again winks)

Arushi&Manav:18 yrs. hone ke baad woh bolenge kya Dada?

Abeer:No Rockstar aur princess kuch baat to batate nehi hain...personal rakhna chahiya na...ok

Manav and Arushi nods."Ok,Samajh giya"

Meher:Thank God...Kuch to akal hain...

Ishaan:Now it is too much...I have to go and study

Manav:Kya Big B,haar waqt kitaabe padte ho...ekdin mere upar kitaab likhi jaayegi tab woh bhi padna...

Meher:I can well understand Abeer tum kya kahani un dono ko sunate ho...dekho pura woh tumhare dialogues copy and paste kaar raha hain...Aur bechare Ishaan ki upar apply kaar raha hain...

Manav:Uffo Big B ki upar kitna sympathy .Hum dono kya apke bacche nehi haain. Upar se humlog kitne cute,sweet aur innocent bhi hain! Aur kya kahe rahe hain...Dada aagar kahani nehi bhi sunate toh bhi mere Rockstar aur Hottie Dad ka Shows ka Videos dekh leta aur jaan leta woh saab baat...actually Dad ne bola tha Adult dialogues hain kuch is liye un hune promise liya tha humlog watch na kare aur kahani woh sunayenge night ko , nahi to...

Meher:Abeer tumne dekha hamari kahani ko tumne air kaarke hamare life ko reality show bana diya...kitna tum immatured the aur abhi bhi ho...Kaam karne se aur kuch bolte se pehle soch liya karo...par nehi...Kaun kahega ke tum teen baachon ke baap ho...

Abeer scratching his head:Sorry baby

Manav: Listen Mom, mera Dad ,hottie hottie hain aur Superyoung bhi,baar baar teen bacche ke baap bolke kya samjhana chahate ho? Big B ke jaisa Buddha nehi hai ...aur kya Dad,aap hameshe Mom ke baton mein aa jaate ho...Sorry to Mama se aap itne baar bolte ho... mera jab se sense hua hain tabse sun raha hu...First word mera mu se shayad "Ma"nehi "Sorry"nikla tha...

Meher:Aaj to mein tujhe kya karti hu tui thahar ja...Badtameez kahin ka...

Manav running and shouting:Dad, Aap kuch karo,roz subhe subhe Mom aur Big B ake hum dono ka class leta hain specially MERA...Badi Mama ke paas jaata hu...

To be continued...


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww that was so cute...!!!
Yes at first a bit too much to digest.
I thought you have wrapped up the show successfully. 😆
But SERIOUSLY it was fun to read.
Manav is my abeer's carbon copy. I like it very much...
Arushi is daddy's princess.
And ishaan... Well he still hasn't forgiven abeer... Their relationship is sour... That's heartbreaking... 💔
Hoping the relationship would get better with time...
And one thing - Abeer is telling the twins their love story... Only he can do it... Minus adult scenes... 🥺
Cont soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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@naina 927 Thank you so much.And I myself love to read "Not meant to be", Knw it is too long for the first part but since a novice I got carried away... Thnks once again
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: tumbin

@naina 927 Thank you so much.And I myself love to read "Not meant to be", Knw it is too long for the first part but since a novice I got carried away... Thnks once again



Thank you and welcome dear...
And honestly im so happy that u got carried away... 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice yaar
So our show can be lengthened if cvs add such elements post revelation track also and it looks beautiful yaar
Congrats. ...
Keep writing. .
Waiting for next
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you @sarathy...with all of your encouragement I'll continue soon

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