Mehbeer TS|| Last Time? Part 2/Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello people
A new OS!
Do read. 😊


NOTE: That's what you get when you write an entire story on stupid tweet of yours😆😆😆 Dont laugh much after reading this.
Inspiration for this OS: Pree you😆

LAST TIME?

"Tum sach me agar us se pyar karte ho.. To jaane do use Abeer.. let her go.. She deserves this happiness. Akshat is a nice guy" madhvi consoled a broken Abeer.


"Maa.. par mai? Mai kaise rahunga uske bina? I love her. She loves me too i know, par vo bas man na nahi chahti"


"Beta let go of her! If you really love her. Then you should be happy for her"


Abeer hugged Madhvi and started sobbing.


"Akshat use khush rakhega na Maa? He won't hurt her like i did. He won't leave her like i did."


"Shh.shh.. Smile now.. For me.. For Meher.. you have to be strong.. for her. Show her how much you love her. Let her know your happiness is in her happiness.. Be happy for her Abeer.." Madhvi wiped his tears.


Abeer sat on his bed with alcohol in his hands thinking about Meher. How she announced to the entire office about her marriage. He couldn't even react at that moment. He wanted her to tell him that she was joking just to tease him. But she didn't. He knew she was serious the moment he looked deep into her eyes. She had taken her decision. And he knew her decision won't change.. For anyone. Though he had accepted the fact that Meher was going to be someone else's now, he couldn't help crying for her every night and consoling himself that this of the best decision of her life. Everyday he faked to everyone that he was fine and was happy for her, but only he himself knew his truth. He was devastated. He smiled infront of her. And tears made way through his eyes the moment she turned away.

She was getting married the next day. He had to meet her. For the Last time.


He drove to her house. It wasnt very nice idea to enter through the door. Obviously some people wouldnt let him meet her. So he reached 27th floor and with the help of one of his fans.. managed to climb upto Meher's room window. There she sat engrossed in her thoughts staring at something in her hand. He looked with more focus. It was a ring. The ring he gave her. He sighed. And then knocked. Meher came out of her thoughts listening to the sound. Before she could even react he was standing infront of her.


"What the hell are you doing over here?" she almost shouted.


"Shh.. koi sun lega.." he asked her to calm down.


"Yaha kyu aaye ho tum?"


"Tumse milne.. Aakhri baar"


"Not again abeer.. not again.. Please leave" she said calmly.

He started coming closer to her. She asked him to stop. He didnt. When they were only inches apart, he took out something from his pocket. It was a locket. A small locket which had an "M" with a little heart. He took her hand and kept it on it. She was getting emotional but she managed to control her emotions. He looked into her eyes.


"May I?" he asked her if he could make her wear that locket. She did not reply. He took this as her approval and went behind her. He brought her hair to one side. She shivered and closed her eyes on his touch. He came closer to her and put the chain around her neck. Then he tighened the lock with his teeth. His lips touched her neck.


"Abeer" this was all she could say. He hands travelled down the length of her arms. He kissed her shouder blade. She was shivering under his touch. With all the power she pushed herself out of his hold.


"Are you even in your senses? What the hell do you think you are doing?" she spat back at him.


He came closer and held her waist. She tried freeing herself but his hold tightened.


"Abeerrr.. for god's sake i am getting married tomorrow.. Leave me right now"


"You aren't married yet, you are still mine. You'll be his tommorow.. but at this moment.. You.. Are.. Mine" he said stressing on each word.


"Abeer don't make it difficult for me.. Please leave me "


"I wont bug you from tomorrow, i wont interfere in your life.. This is the last time[ROFL]"


He pulled her to himself even more and kissed her eyes.


"I want you.. And i know you want me too.. But ziddi ho na. Mujhe hurt karne ke liye Akshat se shaadi kr rahi ho.. But... "


"Come out of your dreams Abeer.. i love him now.. He is perfect for me" she said almost on a verge of crying.


" Yes you love him and thats why you are here in my arms right now. And yes he is perfect for you.. and i wish a happy married life for you both" he said looking into her eyes.


"Abeerr please" she said and a tear dropped from her eyes.


"Shh.. last time" he said kissing away her tears.


He held her chin and made her look into his eyes. And then slowly captured her lips. She did not even resist and gave in instantly. His hands caressed her curves. When they came out of the hug, Meher hugged him really tight. He ruffled her hair slowly.


"I love you Meher!" he said slowly and took her to bed.


...


She sat by her window watching him sleeping on her bed. Abeer. The most important part of her life. They had gone through so many ups and down in their life. But he was the only one she found solace in.He was the one who supported her emotionally and physically whenever she needed it the most. He always broke her and then mended her scars with his love. Only she knew how restless she was from last few days. He calmed her down so easily. She looked at him again. Last time' that's what he said 8 years ago, Last time' he said yesterday. God knows how many last times' are they going to have. She looked at the mehendi in her hands. An "A" written elegantly. She sighed. Even her mehendi knew the truth.



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This can be read as an OS.
But it has a second part too.. (if u want to read) Part 2| Page 2


Edited by ria54321 - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago
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As i mentioned i desperately want to demand for a second part, but im not asking for it. The os is beautiful and has its essence entact- which i fear losing, if you write the second part. Not that i dount your talent, but something about the last time will not be the last time; if u completed it reuniting mehbeer.
But i wonder yeh last time kitni baar ayega... Haha... 😆
I had goosebumps when abeer said you are mine. Haaye... Marr gyi main toh...
Now that meher is marrying chomu, i can have abeer... ****happy dance****
Brilliant os baby...!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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SUPERB Ria!
Pls write more more and more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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👏 👏 👏 This OS is pretty cool... 😊
Anything related to Mehbeer is awesome❤️

The Part I liked Most is "Last time' that's what he said 8years ago. Last time he said yesterday"I wish this last time never ends 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome
loved it. I want something like this in show😆
so for last time they were 2gether
write 2nd part and unite mehbeer if you want
kya pata show pa kya hoga
Edited by .rumki. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow! Want more period.
Your writing is amazing am glad I stumbled upon this :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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What was that!!!😵😵
Amazing Yaar.
Their Last Time🤣🤣🤣
Nice Thought😉😉
That Mehendi Part was wow
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi people!
Here is the second part.
Though i never intended to write a second part.. but i am writing becuase i got some requests😊
i reaally have no idea how it urned out to be.
do read😊


Last Time?: Part 2


She was staring at his sleeping figure.Tears unknowingly started flowing from her eyes.She was lost in her own thoughts, when someone knocked on the door. She got startled and nervous.


"Meher beta! Uth gayi kya? Darwaza khol" she heard suman say.


She knew she has to tell this to her mother. With all the courage she had, she opened the door. Suman saw a tear-stricken Meher infront of her.


"Meherrr.. kya hua beta" suman said cupping her face.


Meher hugged her and started sobbing.


"Meher.. bachhe.. kya hua.. bta mujhe?"


Meher came out of the hug and turned her face towards her bed. Suman looked in that direction too. She was shocked. Her hands came to her mouth.


"Meherr.. Beta.. ye.. kaise.. ye..." suman couldn't speak.


"Maa.. Use meri zaroorat thi" she said tears still flowing.


Suman looked at her and wiped her tears.


"Mujhe uski zaroorat thi maa... i couldn't stop him.. Aaj to mai akshat ki ho jaugi naa" meher continued


"Bachha.. tu kyu kar rahi hai apne sath aisa.." suman hugged her.


"Meher.. kya hua beta.. ro kyu rahi hai" Bua said as she saw Meher crying.


Meher and suman came out the hug and looked at Devki, nervous.


"Bua.. vo.."


"Yahaa se door jane ke aansu hai na ye" she smiled and hugged Meher.


And then she got the shock of her life. Abeer. In her room.


"Meher.. ye .. ye sab kya hai" devki asked angrily.


"Bua.. dekhiye.. I can explain" meher said.


"Is ladke ki himmat kaise hui yahaa aane ki.. isko to main"

Devki went up to the bed where Abeer was sleeping.


"Abeer.. utho.. utho yaha se" she shouted while shaking him.


Abeer got up startled and looked at Devki. It took him few seconds to realise where he was. When he did he got up from the bed and looked for Meher. She was standing near the door. Her eyes down filled with tears.


"Dikha di na tumne apni aukaat.. Yehi chahiye tha na tumhe? Ek mauka nahi chhodte ho usko behkaane ka.. usse use karne ka" devki shouted at Abeer.


"Bua.. par.. aisa nhi hai.." Abeer tried to explain


"Band karo apni bakwaas.. Ameer baap ke bigade huye bete ho tum.. Paisa feko.. koi bhi ladki aa jaegi tumhare paas.. par nhi.. tumhari gandi nazar to bas hmari beti par hai"


He couldn't speak. His eyes filled with tears.His love was being questioned. And he did not know how to defend himself. The world did not matter for him. The only thing that mattered to him was Meher. He wanted to know if she too thinks his love to be lust or she trusts him. He looked towards her.


"Ab uski taraf kya dekh rahe ho.. Tumhe to mai court tak lekar jaugi.. dekhna tu,.. aisi sazaa dilwaugi ki" devki said when she was cut by Meher.


"Bua please.. Kya bol rahi hai aap.. Usne koi zabardasti nahi ki hai mere sath.." Meher defended Abeer.


He smiled. She trusted him. And that's all he wanted.


"Meher.. kya jaadu kar deta hai ye ladka tumpar mujhe samjh nahi aata" Devki said unbelievingly.

'

"Mai Abeer se akele me kuch baat karna chahti hu" Meher said.


Devki nodded her head disapprovingly but suman took her out and closed the door.


"I am sorry Meher.. I shouldn't have come here" he said.


"Thanks Abeer for coming" she said without looking at him.


"I needed your support yesterday.. Thanks for coming.. for the Last time" she continued.


He smiled listening to that.


"I hope Akshat gives you all the happiness, i couldn't" he said.


"Surely he will" she smiled back.


"I think i should leave"


"I think that too.. You can the door this time" she smiled back.


...


Evening:


Abeer sat in his studio with his guitar. For a change he wasn't drinking todayy.


"Jis din tu mujhee.. Mil jaegi.. Tham jaegiii... meri.. Awaargi" he sang softly with moist eyes.


"Aise kaise milegi... Tum to itni asaani se haar maan gye" said a voice.


Abeer looked up. It was Akshat. Dressed up as a groom.


"Gaana gaane se ladki mil jaati hai kya?" akshat asked.


"What are you doing here?" Abeer asked.


"She told me about yesterday."


"Oh.."


"You and your Last times" he laughed.


Abeer too smiled faintly.


"I am not marrying her Abeer.. Meher is a very strong girl Abeer.. And i have understood she doesn't need a man in her life to support her. And if she does.. You are that person".


Abeer was quite.


"She said she can't even imagine anyone except you touching her. She still loves you. But.. its just that she needs time."


"I never liked you Abeer after you did all that to Meher. No friend would. But i have seen you changing. From a person who wanted his own happiness to person who wants Meher's happiness. And thats why you let her go. That was a brave decision Abeer and i respect you for that. Give her some more time. Show her you have changed. Love her even more. And maybe one day she would be back to you. Its not that she doesnt love you.. She definitely does.. But she is afraid Abeer.. Afraid that you will break her heart once again. Prove her wrong. Fight for your love.And now you have a friend who will surely like to help"


"You don't love her?" Abeer asked.


"I dont know.. Maybe.. maybe not.. But ofcourse not the way you love her" Akshat smiled.


"Thanks Buddy" Abeer said.


...


He knocked at her door. Devki opened the door. He smiled. She sighed and got aside because she knew she cannot stop him. He went straight upto her room.


"I expected you to come" Meher said without any expression.


"I had too.. To take back my love"


"Abeer.. i did not marry Akshat does not mean i want to get back to you"


"I know.. but it is like a last chance to me right?" he smiled.


"Abeer.. there nothing called as last times in this world"


"Who would know better" he chuckled.


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Posted: 9 years ago
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RIA TERE CHARAN KAHAA HAI??!!???
Too perfect and the dialogues of bus and maa got me laughing!!

They suited them perfectly!

I can imagine last episode of BD like this..

Pls write moreee
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ritvi23

Very nice update..dear..!!


Thanku so much dear :)😊

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