Musical ~OS~ 'Raat Ka Nasha' 11-10-2015 Completed ^_^ - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Dellz-

It was beautifully written .

I don't have words to descibe .
Meher had an accident, Abheer was tensed for her .
It was really emotional scene there,Abheer claimed her as his wife and did all the duties of being a husband ,he took care of Meher.He really loves her a lot.the kiss ,the passion ,intensity beautifully described .I am become a fan of yours now.Abheer wanted to forget his past and start it with new with Me her.
They both are really naughty,couldn't resisit each other.
It was so caring,loving,intensity emotions and feelings beautifully penned down.
Loved the I love you scene that was the icing on the cake.

awww 🤗 thnks dellz... the comment means alott to me... and fan and all i am little newbie in this lol 😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awazing...
This the first of abeer n meher that I read...
Beautifully written. ...raat ka nasha was truly changing the ambience. ..
Bahut hot ..passionate tha...
A beautiful os for beautiful jodi written by beautifully beautiful writer chweetest shona😛😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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this is really good...ur a vry nice writer...u should write more often...actually m lookin forwrd to more pieces from u...this musical wz beautiful...thanx for d pm :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awww This was
Nice dear...

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