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Posted: 9 years ago
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Madhu here!!

Sorry for Gayab 😆 real life really sucks , anyways stole some time and penned a small piece . It makes no sense , but just wrote to teach a lesson to my once jaaan Abeer 😆 Ignore typos , not proof read , so many might be there , no time 😭


Aparted ways


" You look Beautiful ! " Suman kissed Meher's forehead fixing her veil , her wavy hair made into bun , few strands of silky waves were free and caressing her shoulders. She glanced at her mom and her image in mirror .

She caught that adoring look of her mother , she could see her mother's imagination of her future, thought raced her heart ,she averted her gaze to herself , everything was perfect , her cream Bridal frock crested with pearls ,simple jewellery, artistic makeup made her look elegant .

Her heart raced faster with every passing moment absorbing reality , her dehydrating throat , damped palms only made her more nervous and giddy . She licked her withered lips and guzzled water and tried to be focus .

A knock on the door made her jerk , with wide eyes she glanced at entrance of room . It was Tunnu holding a Box wrapped beautifully with read wrapper printed with hearts .

"Di , you look so beautiful " Tunnu said walking inside room , she smiled . Managed to hide uneasiness .

" what is it Tunnu ?? " Suman questioned

" Ma , it's for Meher didi , Jiju has sent it "

She switched her gaze to every unwrapped gift Abeer sent in past hour and stared hard at just arrived gift , she took a sharp breath and and signalled him to place it on bed .

" Tunnu . Come let's go and help others , Meher is ready " Suman said exiting her room .

" Di , open them " Tunnu said in excitement , she nodded and gripped gift box .

" Tunnu !! Come Down , here I have work for you " Suman yelled from out , Tunnu stomp his foot in disappointment and moved out closing door behind him.

Sudden settling of uneasiness made he feel giddy , she sipped water and tried to focus , with trembling hands she tried to unwrap gift in her hands .

" Are you ready ?? " a tiny voice quivered in her head , she stopped and stared hard at herself in mirror .

" Are you ready for this again ?? " tiny voice shot again same question , this time a little more confidently .

" Again !! " a whisper escaped her lips.

" am I ready ??Again ?? " she questioned herself.

She never wished of a family of her own since childhood , all she wished was to give better life to her Mother , Bua and Tunnu . Until him !!

He barged into her well strategically planned life , made every thing up and down, planted a seed of Hope , filled colours in her black and white life , made her picture whole life with him and suddenly left her darkness .

Her life might not be beautiful but was never awful , her life might not be colourful , but was never dark .

She wondered how the man who introduced her to colors also introduced her to Darkness , who made her feel beautiful made her life awful .

Divorce was not the demon, Real Demons entered after divorce .

' Hope ' was the real demon and the seed for it was planted by him , her attempt to make her life beautiful only made her to crave for what she could not have .

She had to hack budding hope every time which only hurt her brutally .

She gazed at gifts Abeer has sent to her, lying gifts were glaring her , ready to hurt again .

She lunged a huge breath and got up from chair , she tossed the gift in her hand on bed and paced in room , rubbing her cold palms .

' am I ready ??'

' am I ready again , to get attacked by hope !! '

She stopped in middle of room and looked at closed door , and glanced at clock , in 15 minutes her mother will be inside and accompaign her to walk on aisle and then nothing will be same .

Tiny voice which popped earlier Screamed in fear , fear to get attacked emotionally again ' RUN '

She gasped , realising what her Gut was suggesting .

" RUN !! RUN !! " voice screamed making her whole body shiver .

She glanced at clock , jus 5 more minutes .

She grabbed her car keys , small clutch purse and glanced around , Big French Windows seemed like gates to peace .

She clutched her fabric of her heavy frock and reared to window , she peeped down , her room was in 1 st floor thankfully, she very well knew her bones will be broken , but it didn't matter , she can get cured in few days but she could not Rick her heart again.

She shut her eyes , with thudding heart jumped from window m she expected worst , thank god that was not that bad , she scooped her belongings , rubbed her aching butt and stood up .

Guests to wedding were arriving !! Oh yeah , this time Abeer wants a grand wedding and bcz he is a rockstar Media too arrived .

She knew she will be on paper next day , titling Run Away Bride !!

with thudding heart she took first step, stumbled d landed on floor , she glared at her 3 inch heels , set her leg , grabbed her sandals and turned back , looked at venue .

" Screw you Rock star !! " she said sternly


and slid out carefully hiding behind bushes .



The moment she entered parking lot , she dragged a relieving breath , astonishment hitted .

She did the unthinkable .

She paced in the parking lot , with fumbling legs she scanned for her car .

Unlocked car , settled on driver seat , she removed her veil and scooped her heavy frock into car , ignited engine and with jet speed got out of venue .

Drove madly , aimlessly . Rationality hitted her only when fuel tank emptied !!

She gripped steering in frustration and glanced around , she was on highway and in the middle of road .

She stepped out of car and looked around for help , she stomp her foot BD groaned in irritation .

She needed to part car atleast on side , hell atleast not on the middle of road.

Leaning on the bonnet of car she waited for help .

Wondered at her madness !! How could she run away ?? When she was capable enough to call of marriage .

She glared at passing vehicles who offered no help and on top who said crazy comments about a bride standing on high way with bare foot along with fuel less car .

When she lost her mind ! How didn't check on fuel ??

Angry on herself and every traveller who crossed her without helping , she stood silently closing her eyes .


A car stopped few steps behind her , her eyes were still shut , she heard approaching foot steps , fear gripped , but then she composed and stood still.

Waited for offer of help .

All she heard was question in familiar tone .

" Ditched your groom ?? "

She chewed inner walls of her cheeks , squeezed her eyes .

" oh yeah !! How does that trouble you ??" she groaned gritting her teeth and turned back to answer the nosey jerk .

It wasn't some new jerk , it was the her old jerk her own groom .

She glanced around to find others . He came alone .


" let's park your car properly "

She hopped back into driving seat quietly , and Abeer with difficulty pushed it and she managed to park it on left side .

She climbed down from car and stood silently leaning back .


" How did you trace me ?? " she questioned in guilty .

A half smile crept his lips , he crossed his arms and leaned back right beside her .

" I suspected your moves " he replied .

Oh that was wonderful , he was watching on her and she had no clue , she didn't spot him during her mindless drive too . Was she that readable to him?? Pushing irritation a side she questioned him


" how ?? "

" you were not same , you accepted happily with whole heart for marriage but with every approaching day , I sensed your varying behaviour , I knew something was wrong which you even was unaware "

She pursed her lips and rubbed her forehead .

" But you shocked me !! , didn't expect this move at all " he said in a calm composure .

" I got freaked !! My head was messy . "

He was silent .

" I followed my Gut . " she said looking into his eyes .

A thin layer of tears in those ever smiling eyes .

" I am sorry " he nodded and waited for rest.

" Abeer I am scared . I am scared to take risk again , I remember the day of our wedding 9 years ago , I was so sure of our life , I pushed away my rational feelings which were shouting , stopping me to take wrong step and I married you , but today Abeer I couldn't ignore tiny whisper of uncertainty . I know you changed , I know we will be happy , but I failed to ignore my Gut "

Feeling Giddy she settled on pavement .

" Are you Okay ?? He strode to her and sat beside her .

" I understand Meher , it's not your fault , it's mine , like before I forced you for marriage again "

She gazed at him in disbelief .

Was not sure who was talking .

" So what's next !?? " he questioned .

" I donno !! " she said twisting her fingers " if you were suspecting, why did you arrange for a grand wedding , Media too was there, now I remember one among them snapped my picture while I was running , I left a shit storm behind , tomorrow I will be on paper " she completed catching her head .

" I saw , I was following you right , he clicked mine as well. "

" oh wow , I am not alone " she said with lazy smile . " that's fine atleast I will not get tagged as Runaway bride "

He was silent and was staring at her .

" I need time Abeer , to clear my head , to make it straight and I need petrol as well , can I borrow little gas ?? "

A genuine smile escaped hi lips , but she saw pain flashed in his eyes .

" it's okay " he said , stopped few seconds and continued , " actually it's not okay , but I have no option Meher , I will give you space because I want you to know change in me . You know I does what I want to do not understanding others and that's how I forced you stubbornly for marriage again , but not anymore . Take your time and then come back to me . " he side hugged her .

She gazed at him with tears eyes and kissed his forehead .

" and about Gas !! I am helpless , even I need it " he said s

" what do you mean ?? " she questioned in horror

"Even my car is out of gas " he replied with a smile .

" impossible !! How come ?? "

" don't forget , I roamed too along with you , obviously it will be out of gas "

She gazed at hot sun , they were on high way with fuel less vehicles in wedding costumes , bagging suspicious looks of travellers .

" waise anything can happen Meher !! Come on tell me , who in dreams will think thalli Meher will run away from a marriage ?? "

" shut up and do something "

Abeer punched sattu's number and asked him to get petrol for two cars and they waited for him .

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" Abeer !! Meher !! Why are you both doing here ?? All are searching for you both. "

Abeer quietly took one can of petrol and filled it in Mehers

" sorry sattu sir for inconvenience " Meher said

" but what happened ?? "

" I will narrate the story sattu sir " Abeer interrupted and asked signalled Meher to get into car .

She silently climbed into car and ignited engine .

" thank you Abeer " she said with a smile .

" Come back to me , I will wait for your return "

Hearing him Meher drove back leaving confused Sattu and Waiting Abeer .

" what's happening ?? " sattu yelled " why are you both so complicated . ?? "

" you want answer right now or through my show !!?? Think what is important , curiosity or TRP ??" Abeer said with a smirk .

Sattu grinned , scratching his head and replied .

" okay I can wait "

Abeer smiled and got into car thinking of their Aparted ways and wishing for her comeback .

End of my torture

Yeah ready for chappals and tamatars , but pls no eggs ah !! I am veggie !! Sorry lately I was not Okay with Abeer so I planned this for him. 😆 Waiting for feed back , now I am running seriously out of time . Bye love u all and missed u all a lot .

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Madhu 🤗

I was actually going crazy while reading this as you said I would.😆

You made Meher a bhagora here hehe, but I don't blame her from running away from Abeer - he's put her through so much that it's really hard for her to accept him back in her life.

Your torture was beautiful 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
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That was fun to read madhu...!!!!
Welcome back... 🤗
Jo bhi likha ho tune, my abeera is the brightest n smartest 😎
My love for him can't fade... Its blind...
Meher a runaway bride... I thought she is getting married to akshat 🤣
Abeer sending gifts was too cute... Aww...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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U removed your bhadaas on Abeer through this OS 😆 ..But it was fun to read! Khudki shaadi se dulh dulhan dobo bhaag gaye 🤣 🤣
p.s. Itne dine tak gayab mat reh..have a safe journey n come back soon here 😛

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