Just One Yesterday FF || Chapter Two: Page Two

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Just One Yesterday

The idea for this piece has been running through my mind for quite a while now and I want to start penning it down and hopefully finish it before school starts.

I know that I have another pending, (the DDLJ one in case you didn't know), but I figured most people already know the story line. Hence, I'm in no hurry to get that published so soon. It will be finished, but in due time.

Until then, I hope you enjoy this story. :)
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index

chapter one: page one
chapter two: page two
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Chapter One

"I thought of angels
Choking on their halos"

Meher was sitting in the passenger seat gazing upon Abeer while he drove. The wind ruffled his luscious hair.

Smiling, she ran her hand through his locks and felt the softness. She giggled as he leaned his head in towards her touch.

"Abeer, pay attention to the road." She reprimanded as he tore his eyes from the street.

"How can I when I have such a beautiful sight before me?" He said cheekily.

Meher grinned and pushed his face away.

However, her smile disappeared as she saw who was following her through the side view mirror.

"Abeer," She patted him frantically on the arm.

"What happened?" He asked, worried about her drastic change in behavior.

"Dad..." She trailed off, looking behind her and seeing her father following them in a black car.

Abeer looked at his side view mirror but only noticed a black tinted car behind them.

"How do you know it's him?" He asked, thinking her paranoia might be influencing her judgment.

"The licence plate Abeer. It's his." She answered, now becoming agitated.

"Okay, first of all just relax okay." He said, straightening himself in his seat.

Taking the opportunity, he switched lanes and attempted to lose the car. After a few minutes, he thought his initial doubt was right. That Meher's judgment had been impaired because of her fear of getting caught by her dad. But when a car almost smashed into them, he corrected himself.

"Abeer..." Meher spoke, looking at her side view mirror and noticing a grey car speeding up beside them. "Why are they coming so close, Abeer?"

"Hang on." Abeer shifted the gear and sped up, changing lanes in between.

Meher's heart beat started racing as she felt the car's speed breaking numerous laws. Her eyes kept shifting from the side view mirror to the rear view mirror to Abeer. She couldn't believe this was happening.

"This is all my fault." She said in between her cries.

"Meher, it's not. Now, stop crying." Abeer reprimanded taking his eyes off the road for merely a second. "I don't need to worry about your emotional drama right now, so can you please put a pause to it?"

Meher looked at Abeer with watery eyes.

Her breath hitched as he sped up even more.

"Abeer!" She yelled out as they almost hit a car in front of them.

In the nick of time, Abeer swerved the car and took it down an unknown dirt road. Looking behind them, Meher noticed the same three cars following them again.

"Abeer, I think you should stop the car." Meher said, patting him on the arm.

"Meher, are you crazy?" He asked, now getting irritated.

"Abeer, they could be dangerous!" She retorted.

"And that's why you want me to stop the car? So that they can beat us to a pulp?"

"Abeer, we don't even know where we're going!" She shouted, pointing at the open space in front of them.

"I'm not stopping the car okay Meher. Now just shut up and sit there." He yelled.

He swerved the car again to make a U-turn as an attempt to make an escape from the opposite direction.

To his dismay, the car came to a violent stop as one of the tires gave way. Meher screamed, as the window to her door got smashed. She raised her hands and looked away as a way to defend herself from the little pieces of glass that broke in and fell on her.

Her passenger door opened and she was dragged out of the car by two men.

"Let me go!" She yelled, struggling to get out of their grip.

In response, one of the men slapped her making her fall to the ground.

"Meher!" Abeer called out, rushing to her.

Before he could come anywhere near her, he got punched by a man in the gut. As he clutched his stomach, he got kicked by another man, toppling him over. Abeer raised his arms in front of his face and crouched into a fetal position as he became bombarded by several kicks.

"Abeer! Leave him alone!" Meher screamed, trying to pull the numerous men off of him.

Her protests were of no use as she got pulled back by another man. He lifted her over his shoulder and proceeded to take her to one of the cars. Meher screamed and kicked and tried punching him, but they were all futile on him.

"What are you looking at? Throw him off the cliff." One of the men commanded in a loud voice.

Hearing that Meher froze. They were about to kill Abeer, was the only thought that was ringing in her head.

Not entirely knowing how, she managed to get away from her captor's grip and had ran towards where she had last seen Abeer. As she ran, she saw the other men, drag his crippled body towards the edge.

"Abeer!" She screamed out as she got pinned down by one of the men. "No, let me go! Abeer!"

She cried and screamed and yelled and shouted until her throat became raw.

"NO!" She yelled as she saw the men throw Abeer like he was a ragged doll.

She didn't know why the man had let her go but she sprinted towards the edge of the cliff where she had last seen Abeer.

Falling down, she searched for him. Luckily, she noticed, the height of this cliff wasn't too high. She was sure that Abeer would be able to survive the fall. But she questioned herself considering the state that he was thrown in.

"Abeer!" She frantically called out as she spotted him hanging from a nearby tree.

Rushing towards him, she held out her hand for him to grab. Abeer reached out but was unable to come close enough.

"Abeer, come on!" She urged, tears stinging her eyes.

She saw the blood gush out of his mouth and cried even harder.

"Abeer!"

A loud ringing echoed in the still air. Birds flew away, screaming in danger.

With her hand still reaching out for Abeer, Meher turned around slowly to fully process what just happened.

Her dad was standing behind her.

With a gun.

Laughing.

She turned back around and saw how still Abeer went. She inched herself further off the cliff and stretched her hand out even more.

He could have grabbed it at this point.

But he didn't.

Instead, he fell.

Meher's fingers brushed with the ghost of his.

Her surroundings got blurred out as her entire focus narrowed in on Abeer falling.

She didn't even notice when she herself got pulled up and was seated in the car.

She didn't even notice when her mother came running to her, with tears streaming down her cheeks, asking her where she was and if she's okay.

She didn't even notice when her aunt had slapped her as she tried to remove the razor from Meher's hand.

Abeer was falling.

Into a dark abyss.

All she knew was that she wanted to follow.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Res😳
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🤔
I jus got up from sleep , couldn't believe what I read 😆

Wow Wow , that was Brilliant Gur !!
Seems Shyam is some Goonda , he is even using gun 🤣
And Bua slapped Meher 😲 what u made my angel Bua into 😆

I could clearly picturing everything , very clearly narrated , loved it baby.
And Bechara Abeer fell down !! And Meher wanted follow him aww poor girl .
Sadism jindhabaad !!🤣
I was planning to write a underworld story where Abeer as a Don and here u made Shyam as Goonda 😆 seems we both are almost thinking alike.
Continue soon.
Can't wait for it .
Edited by madhufx9... - 10 years ago
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Wow yaar that was GREAT!!loved it...continue soon
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Originally posted by: madhufx9...

Res😳

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I jus got up from sleep , couldn't believe what I read 😆

Wow Wow , that was Brilliant Gur !!
Seems Shyam is some Goonda , he is even using gun 🤣
And Bua slapped Meher 😲 what u made my angel Bua into 😆

I could clearly picturing everything , very clearly narrated , loved it baby.
And Bechara Abeer fell down !! And Meher wanted follow him aww poor girl .
Sadism jindhabaad !!🤣
I was planning to write a underworld story where Abeer as a Don and here u made Shyam as Goonda 😆 seems we both are almost thinking alike.
Continue soon.
Can't wait for it .


Is that a good thing or bad? 😆

Thank you so much. 😳

What Shyam is exactly, I won't say. I'll let you guys find out for yourself. 😉😆

The reason why Bua slapped Meher is rational. Meher had gotten herself into a really bad head space. She was really traumatized by what happened and had assumed that Abeer is gone. In that negative space, she was ready to harm herself psychically and when Bua caught her in the act, she was frightened. So, she did the one thing that came most naturally to her - slap Meher to get her to snap out of the negative space and realize just what it is she is doing.

This fic is going to be a mixture of everything. I already have so many feelings for it. <3

Abeer as a Don will be really cool to read! Do write it out. :D

I make no promises, but I'll try my best. 😳
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Originally posted by: rafa-raina

Wow yaar that was GREAT!!loved it...continue soon


Thank you so much! I'll do my best. 😳
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LOVEEEDDD ITTT! :D
omgg
omggg.

Abeer can't die. bas.

can't wait to read more! x x
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Originally posted by: hilly

LOVEEEDDD ITTT! :D
omgg

omggg.

Abeer can't die. bas.

can't wait to read more! x x


Aww, thanks so much Hilly! 🤗

I hope you like where the story will be headed. 😳
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Chapter Two

"Are you even listening to me?" Suman asked her husband.

Shyam looked up from his laptop highly annoyed.

"What do you want?" He snapped. "How many times have I told you not to bother me while I'm working?"

"Work, work, work. That's all you can think about. Have you ever even bothered to find out what's going on in your own home?" She whined, her voice irritating him even more.

"So now I'm supposed to take care of the house too? I go out all day and work my ass off to feed all your gluttonous mouth, not even bothering to think twice about myself. And now you want me to get involved in petty little problems at home too?" He argued. "Do you know how much hard work goes into keeping a roof over our heads? Food in our bellies? Clean, filtered water to drink? Do you?" He got up now and walked over to Suman to hear a reply.

"No I don't know and I don't even care." She argued back. "What's the point of having all this when our own offspring is not making any use of them." Shyam turned away, knowing where this was headed but Suman turned him back around. "Have you ever bothered to ask how she is? Where is she? Or if she's even alive?" Suman cried.

"Fine, I'll ask. How is she? Where is she? Is she alive?" Shyam asked with a smile which soon turned into disgust.

Mumbling under his breath, Shyam went back to sit before his laptop while Suman cried.

"I don't know why I bother putting myself through so much labor. It would have been better if I had sent you and your daughter to a drama school. I would have made a lot more money off of you too. You, who starts lecturing me the second you see me and can cry on queue. And her," He pointed towards the door. "Who has the whole world wrapped around her fingers even though she doesn't say a thing. I'm telling you it takes real talent to do that. You should smarten up and profit off of her."

"Don't you feel ashamed of yourself?" Suman asked, shocked. "Our daughter is not feeling well and you want to profit off of her?"

"If she's not feeling well, why are you coming to me? Take her to a doctor." He countered.

"What is the doctor going to do? Give her more pills? Send her into a deeper depression?" She put her hands on the table to place herself in his sight. "You know the pills aren't helping her out. We need to do something else."

"So what do you want me to do? Huh? No, tell me what do you want me to do?" Shyam asked.

Suman took her hands off the table and started playing with the end of her sari.

"Get her married." She mumbled.

"What?" Shyam exclaimed, not hearing her properly. "Whatever you have to say, say it out loud. There's no need for you to mumble to yourself. If you're really keen on doing that then get out of my face and do it."

Furious, Suman snapped, "GET HER MARRIED!" Shyam sat back in his chair at her exclamation. "Is that loud enough for you or do you want me to be even louder?" She asked sarcastically.

Gulping Shyam said, "No, that's fine." Regaining his hold on her, Shyam asked, "But who's going to marry her? Have you even seen the state she's in?"

"You don't worry about that. I've found someone." Suman said.

"Wah!" Shyam said impressed. "May I know who the unlucky man is that my lovely wife has chosen?"

She clenched her jaw and said, "Mind you, whoever I choose for my daughter will be the luckiest man in the world okay. I'm not going to pick just anyone off the street and send her away."

"Yeah, yeah, cut the taunts and tell me who you chose."

Suman turned the laptop around and opened up a new browser. Typing in a name in the search engine, she waited till she pulled up an appropriate image of the possible groom she had chosen. She turned it back around and watched Shyam's eyes pop out. He looked at her and then back at the screen.

"Him?" He asked pointing at the screen. "You.. picked him?"

"Yup! I even talked with his parents and they're ready to meet us. They're just waiting for us to reach Amritsar so that we can go ahead with the relationship."

"Amritsar?" Shyam pondered. "That could work..." He said more to himself as he opened his previous file.

Pouring over some numbers he shook his head as if he got a bright idea.

"Suman, this could be the greatest thing you've ever done." He complimented, opening up a new document and typing away.

Suman looked taken aback, not quite expecting such a positive response.

"So, should I take this as a yes from you and proceed with the talking?" She asked for a confirmation.

"Yeah, yeah do whatever you want." Shyam said, waving her away.

Pleased with herself, Suman walked out of the room. Getting Shyam to say yes was the easy part. Now came the difficult part.

Getting Meher to say yes.

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