Not meant to be || Mehbeer SS || ch 16 & epilogue updated.

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jeharshu

@jeharshu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

i'm just loss of words

i'm really heartbroken after reading dis

it was emotional didu

feeling bad for mehbeer

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blackheart489

@blackheart489

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Posted: 10 years ago

#62

Superb...

Please do continue

And sorry for being late 😕

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Namrata91

@Namrata91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#63

Awsome
But both r in,pain or vo brdast se bhar he ...
Dont do this
But vnc yr
Awsome
Ty for p m me

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Nikki

@desire_nikki

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

wow..
such an emotional update yr..
loved it...
continue soon

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naina

@naina927

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Posted: 10 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: babydolll
This place belongs to #BlackWidowBaby 😎
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#BlackWidowBaby ka comment 😉 lucky me...!! 😆

Sad update... sad sad...
Feeling very sad for both of them...
The monologue of Both of them are very well written... every feeling is very aptly expressed... Thank u ruchi or should I say bwb 😛

"I will get over you..." Abeer whispered again.
A lie is a lie even if you say it a million times... I love her... Only her... I can't get over her, not in this life time. His heart spoke.

I loved this soliloquy Abeer... his fight between his heart and mind awesome... I literally felt these all emotions... Glad...😊

Blaming herself is the last option for Meher... I thought she is sherni but she is lamenting somehow... I want her manofy Abeer and Abeer repents his deeds... for keeping aside the issue... I dont know why my mind is stuck with that divorce issue...😆 Hehe... Move on baby 😆 meher breaking down for once is very important, that's what I think...

But I will love to find out how you will unfold the scenario... You surely will...

Thanks for the pm... but I put a comment way before that... yeahhh... 😉

I am first kissy for u... Muahh

Now I think I have to work more upon the musical OS as it will be my first time to write such thing... and I dont know where it will stand compared to your writings it will be awesome... Trust me... Put on your thinking cap hun... 😉

#BlackWidowBaby Rocks #Always

😊

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sandhYA_123

@sandhYA_123

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#66

SUPERB UPDATE DEAR.

LOVED IT.

IT WAS REALLY SAD AND EMOTIONAL UPDATE.

EMOTIONS OF ABEER AND MEHER R BEAUTIFULLY EXPRESSED BY U.

FEEL REALLY SAD 4 MEHBEER.

LOVES HOW MEHER FAMILY TRUSTED AND LOVES ABEER.

MEHER HAD ALL THOSE MEMORIES IN HER CUPBOARD THE WAY SHE IS IMAGINING ALL THOSE MOMENTS AND LIVING THEM IS AWESOME.

IT WAS SO HEART TOUCHING.

LAST PART WAS AWESOME.

AHEER WAS SO HEART BROKEN.

NOW UPDATE NEXT PART SOON.

WAITING FOR MIRACLE TO HAPPEN IN MEHBEER LIFE.

TAKE CARE DEAR.😊😊😊

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naina

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Posted: 10 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: sandhYA_123
SUPERB UPDATE DEAR.
LOVED IT. Thank u dear 😃
IT WAS REALLY SAD AND EMOTIONAL UPDATE. Yep it was...
EMOTIONS OF ABEER AND MEHER R BEAUTIFULLY EXPRESSED BY U.
FEEL REALLY SAD 4 MEHBEER.
LOVES HOW MEHER FAMILY TRUSTED AND LOVES ABEER.
MEHER HAD ALL THOSE MEMORIES IN HER CUPBOARD THE WAY SHE IS IMAGINING ALL THOSE MOMENTS AND LIVING THEM IS AWESOME.
IT WAS SO HEART TOUCHING.
LAST PART WAS AWESOME.
AHEER WAS SO HEART BROKEN.
NOW UPDATE NEXT PART SOON. Will update soon 😃
WAITING FOR MIRACLE TO HAPPEN IN MEHBEER LIFE. Donno whether it happens or not 😳
TAKE CARE DEAR.😊😊😊