Mehbeer OS 'Loving the Bad Boy' Part 4 pg 7 - 21 sept

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naina

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Raceena489
man...this is so goood😛
i just loved mehers dialogue about abeer being a rich brat then a bod boy waahhh...😆😉
it is awesome...
loved it..!!!😊
❤️

Thank you soo much dear...!!!! 😃 Means a lot

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jeharshu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

awesome one di

loved it to the core

par di u can extend it na??????

plz di extend karona jaise ki virman

ke story mein kiya

don't stop here

make changes nd continue it di

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Mahalakshmi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Wow hats off to the thought of making shyam purohit as principle.
And Meher's conflict was beautifully described. that was another amazing OS dear naina.

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Nidhi54321

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Amazing os dear!

Loved it😊

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Heema Somani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Amazing os

meher's father has brainwashed meher

abeer's last dialogue was superb

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1017333

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Sorry nainu for late comment! It was so awesome. OMG the attitude waala abeeerrr! His way of saying there's no 3rd option... Ahh! It swoon me completely. Ab daya karo and update soon. love u :P

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naina

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: jeharshu
awesome one di
loved it to the core
par di u can extend it na??????
plz di extend karona jaise ki virman
ke story mein kiya
don't stop here
make changes nd continue it di

Thank u dear..!!! But u know na virman one is still incomplete... I don't want to do the same thing here... I can't guarantee if I will ever complete it...

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naina

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: MahaSrilu
Wow hats off to the thought of making shyam purohit as principle.
And Meher's conflict was beautifully described. that was another amazing OS dear naina.

Thank you soo much...!!!! 😃

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Namra

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Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Nice os...

Ha ha shyam purohit is principal...i can't imagine him as principal...but because of ur os i can imagine him as principal and he is looking to funny i mean really only u can make him principal🤣...abeer is a bad boy...we all know meher beolngs to abeer...loveee it