madhufx9... thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#1

This is out of my another crazy imagination🤣 dnt freak in the middle seeing my unexpected twist 😆 and yes this OS is for crazy Malika, Fero and Shiiya , my shipping partners 🤣 bash them if it's not good not me , they are giving me crazy ideas . I am innocent 😛 and yes ignore typos like always .


For a change


Blaming others makes no sense. When it was she who sharpened the blunt sword slicing her . Misled heart deserved punishment , her heart applauded feelings , which only beguiled her life time decision taken 8 year ago .

She was sitting at one corner on floor and was gazing at nothing in particular , her senses kept flashing single image, Abeer !! ,How can she deny , the fact ' He cannot stop caring her ' . His care was the tool that sharpened sword slicing her heart mercilessly.

She believed , she came back to prove him ! Just to prove him ! Nothing more.!! Her bruised heart wanted nothing more other than showing him, her self capability , her resistance and she returned back into his life .

May be she over estimated herself , her hindrance cracked observing her own care for him , her heart responded to his presence , drumming so hard against hindrance , crumbling it into million not arrangeable pieces , welcoming pain to experience it all again. Ignoring his obvious care almost took her life every time .

She wished to forget their past , once for all and melt in his arms , embracing her happiness , her Abeer !!

He would leave next day , they would not stay under same roof again, he would not complaint to her mom about her stubbornness , she would not cook for him ever again, though she never cooked anything in particular during his stay , she could not deny , she made less spicy food of his taste , she would not rearrange mess he creates in her room .

She glanced around room , it's tidy, the way it use to be without him !! Her gaze switched to his packed luggage , a Sob escaped , undamming her emotions , she muffled her cries shoving her mouth with her palm , she flung to his luggage , fell on her knees , unpacked his stuff and threw them around the room . She sat in the middle of room gazing at her messy room .

A wine bottle in his bag caught her attention , For a change , she decided to Sooth her pain drowning in alcohol . She swigged whole bottle in a go and silently laid on floor bringing her knees to chest , she crawled back into her memories slowly , steadily from just before Abeer leaving to sleep to their first meet , when Abeer landed her in pool of coloured water .

With passing minute Alcohol working on her awakened senses ,resting in slumber since years, she was enthralled by his white shirt lying on the floor , removing her suffocating saree , she slid into his shirt , she inhaled his incenses burned in her warm breaths and wandered in room taking faltering steps.

Door to her room flung opened, she tried to sneak through darkness to know who it is .

" who is it ??" She stuttered , mistaking a step .

When there was no response , she tried to focus more to locate person .

When she heard approaching steps , she strode to source of sound and braced the person tightly.

" Thief !! thief !! " she yelled at top of her lungs .

Abeer who was in haze ,was shocked hearing her screams , dried his lips and said " Meher , it's me Abeer " he replied trying to free from her hold .

Hearing Abeer a crept her lips .

" Meher leave me na " Abeer said yawning , still in haze .
" Who is Meher ?? " she asked him , gripping him more tightly in her hold .

" leave me Meher , I have to Go " Abeer hissed in frustration .

She released him , before he moves further inside , she held his hand and questioned him in disappointment

" You really want to go away from me " Abeer who was about to pull his hand from hold , stopped and turned back to look at her , he couldn't see her properly in darkness , he scratched his head in confusion , he didn't believe it was his Akdu . But what an ironic timing , there he was controlling so hard to attend his nature call and his Girl was reluctant to leave him.

" Meher are you sane ?? " Abeer bulged his eyes like a owl to get glimpse of her face .

" listen , I am not Meher " she announced , pulling him towards her .

" no doubt , something is wrong " he said jumping , controlling with great difficulty

" I am your Baby !! " Meher said with a huge smile , hugging his right arm .

Abeer jerked back his hand with jolted shock , failed to handle both shock and nature call together , he strode into her bathroom , ignoring yelling Meher .

Once he was relieved , he entered room back still in astonishment .

" what's wrong , any mad dog bit you Meher " Abeer questioned trying to locate her in darkness .
When he couldn't locate her , he switched on lamp and was shocked to see state of her room, it was clean sparkling before he dozed into sleep .

" Meher , how did this happen ?? " he questioned glancing around .

" from when you started calling me Meher ?? " she complained . His gaze landed on her hearing her . She was sitting on floor , resting her head on the edge of cot . His eyes bulged in shock seeing her in his shirt , only his shirt.

" you use to call me baby !! But now you are calling me Meher " she asked , his heart raced seeing her " you stopped loving me " she continued her complaint , pouting her lips .

Abeer knelt right infront of her and checked her forehead and cheeks , to find what's wrong with her .

She tried to raise up , but fumbled and landed on him, he held her waist , smelling alcohol he realised she was drunk . He opened his mouth In disbelief

" Meher " he said blinking his eye , she glared hearing him calling her Meher again , he set her on feet and raised up

" your drunk !! " he continued .

She simply nodded her head rapidly .

" But , I dnt remember me spiking your drink " Abeer said in confusion .

Meher laughs hard dropping herself on bed , Abeer was mesmerised to see Meher smiling after ages .

" I spiked my own drink " she said and swigged a sip of wine from bottle placed on her side desk , Abeer raged to her and got hold of bottle .

Meher went silent for few moments and then a weak smile escaped her lips .

Abeer looked at her more curiously , her eyes were moist and a tear was ready to brim , before it slid down , he wiped it away with his thumb , then caressed her flushed cheeks .

She held his palm with her both hands .

" you don't love me any more !! " she stated staring at him.

Abeers heart slammed hearing her statement , getting a grip on his emotions he questioned her
" how do you know ?? " twining his hand in her hold with hers .

" I know you just care me " she said placing her head on his shoulder .

" And you want more ?? " he brushed her messy hair in endearment . She was silent

" but you wanted me to leave ?? " he questioned trying to draw back his palm , she held it more tightly , denying to let him go .

" and you are leaving!! " she said sadly .

" that's not an answer Meher " Abeer questioned her shutting his eyes . His heart cringed , he had complaints about her stubbornness , but he hated her stubbornness for the every first time , for not admitting .

He tried to move away

" Abeer I am getting sleep " she said yawning .

Abeer who was little upset replied her in anger . " then what are you waiting for , you want me to sing lullaby ?? "

She dragged him , making him land on bed again . " don't go away , please " she pleads pursing her lips . Abeer's anger vanishes looking at her gesture . She dropped on to him hugging him, basking warmth her Sun , only bright light in her life , her Abeer !! , Abeer sighed in pleasure and braced her back .

" Baby , now go to sleep " he said brushing her hair , she smiled hearing baby. He tried to unclasp her hold on him, to make her sleep properly. She snuggled her face and snaked her arms around his neck.

" Don't leave me " she whispered , Abeer realised no point in making a move , so he crawled back to head rest holding Meher in his arms and supported his back. Meher stirred and wrapped her bare legs around his waist and dozed into peaceful sleep leaving a restless Abeer .

She was not admitting and on top her bare legs around him was not helping either . He groaned in frustration. He saw Meher sleeping With a smile on her lips in mirror and kissed top of her forehead. Placing his head on hers he slid into sleep .



End of update

Dnt think of what will happen next morning , even I don't know 🤣 , jus can't visualise mehers reaction next morning .

Acha now hit like button and do drop ur precious comments , would love to hear . Silent readers Ek mukka tho maaro like button pe 😆








Created

Last reply

Replies

44

Views

4.1k

Users

19

Likes

47

Frequent Posters

naina927 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago
#2
Res

Unres

First one to comment... Yeeeyyy 😃 So just in the beginning when meher was sitting in a corner gazing at nothing in particular. I thought it's about one of the weak moment a person has. Its when she let her guards down. In her room, removing the mask of hers... Mask of being strong and emotionless. She was just thinking about him. Her abeer...!!!
She thought she came back in his life to show him that she isn't that weaktimid meher anymore. She isn't the girl who he divorced and threw away. She is now a strong woman who is independent, capable and competent. She is a career oriented woman and has nothing to do with him. Her ex husband. She is now his boss. Nothing more nothing less. She won't mix her professional and her personal life. She is a grown up. But abeer and his presence is making her weak. Proving her wrong. Pulling her back.
Earlier she wanted nothing to do with him, his mere presence irked her, she thought she is happy with his absence in her life. But now, she is scared of that very thought. Once abeer leaves her house, her life would be just the same. She is scared that she will not feel his presence and fragrance anymore. Her life would again be lonely and sad. She is scared to be alone. He brought happiness in her life and she feels alive. Once he goes, all that happiness and liveliness will go back with him. She will be left behind again. Lost and lonely.
Loved the scene when she scattered all his luggage in her room. She is desperate to feel his presence. She is desperate to feel his arms around her. His love. In an attempt to feel him, she even wears his shirt. Trying to feel protected, she used to feel once in his embrace. She hates to admit it but she wants him.
She isn't happy when abeer calls meher. She wants to be his 'baby'. Her heart still flutters every time he calls her baby. She is his baby. Only his. For life and beyond. She begs him to stay. To stay close to her. Most importantly, to stay in her life.
"I spiked my own drink" 😆 😆 her humour after being drunk. Really funny.
Loved it...!!! ❤️ but I can't help but amazing what meher's reaction would in the morning. Poor abeer will be blamed again... 😆

Edited by naina927 - 10 years ago
tereliyex thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago
#3
OMG!
Girl I was just writing an OS on drunk MehBeer Lol
Great minds think alike...
But this was so cute! I love how Meher asked him not to go and he was trying to control himself around her ;)
LOVED it!
madhufx9... thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#4

Originally posted by: -Ishana-

OMG!
Girl I was just writing an OS on drunk MehBeer Lol
Great minds think alike...
But this was so cute! I love how Meher asked him not to go and he was trying to control himself around her ;)
LOVED it!


Great minds 🤣 thank u so much for lovely comment .
I was just visualising ki how Meher will feel, once Abeer leaves her home .😆
Namra986 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#5
Nice os
I m thinking what will happen in the morning 😆 meher pura ghar sar pr utha legi😆
Cute and lovely os
madhufx9... thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#6

Originally posted by: namrak

Nice os

I m thinking what will happen in the morning 😆 meher pura ghar sar pr utha legi😆
Cute and lovely os


Socho agar Bua dekhliya tho inn donom ko Iss position Mei 🤣
Effervescent_R thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago
#7
A drunk Meher asking him to stop!!
interesting ...moi liked it a lot
love
Rads
naina927 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago
#8
Gimme time madhu... Have read it once... But I'm running off to read it again n again. Mind it I have so many things to say... I will comment in the morning... 😉
MayaraaSobti thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#9
What an OS !! .. Meher is a hell confused soul !!
Hope this happens in the show too !!
Great job yaar .. Keep it up 👍🏼
madhufx9... thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#10

Originally posted by: naina927

Gimme time madhu... Have read it once... But I'm running off to read it again n again. Mind it I have so many things to say... I will comment in the morning... 😉


Hahah it's okay baby 😆 I will wait for u

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".